2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(21)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验21（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ 书面表达（满分30分）‎ 假设你校准备举办一次关于“梦想”的英语演讲比赛，你打算写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。‎ 演讲主题 我们年轻人的梦想是什么 不同人的梦想 成为科学家，宇航员，富有的人 你对梦想的理解 梦想应该包括对社会和人民的责任 怎样实现梦想 增强责任感，学好各门功课 注意： 1.请按表格提示的内容写演讲稿，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎2. 演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎3. 字数120左右。‎ ‎ Good morning, everyone! Today I’m going to tell you about young people’s dreams. ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎2．‎ ‎ (2)读写任务：（共25分）‎ ‎ 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。‎ ‎ People used to say, “ The hand that rocks the cradle(摇篮) rules the world.” And “ Behind every successful man there is a woman.”‎ ‎ Both these saying mean the same thing . Men rule the world, but their mothers and wives rule them. Most American women wish to make their husbands and sons successful, but some of them want more for themselves. They want to be as successful as men.‎ ‎ The American women’s liberation（解放） movement was started by women who didn’t want to stand behind successful men. They wanted to stand beside men, with the same chance for success. They refused to work side by side by side with men who did the same work for a higher pay.‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ This movement is quite new, and many American women don’t agree yet. But it has already made some important changes in women’s lives—in men’s lives, too. Liberated women are proud of being a woman and have confidence in themselves. More and more women are holding important positions in companies, institutions and politics. More people than ever have realized that women deserve as much respect as men.‎ ‎（写作内容）‎ ‎1）.以约30词概括短文大意。‎ ‎2）就“男女平等”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下内容要点，该部分词数大约120；‎ ‎ a.妇女在家庭和社会中的地位的今与昔；‎ ‎ b.妇女的贡献，妇女应该受到尊重；(contribution贡献)‎ ‎ c.你认为怎样才能实现真正的男女平等。(real equality)‎ ‎（写作要求）‎ ‎ 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得抄袭材料中的句子。‎ ‎3．‎ ‎3‎ ‎（2010·黑龙江省哈师大附中高三上学期第二次月考）‎ 阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇100—120词的短文。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）‎ 最近，黑龙江省教育厅下重手整治全省中小学加班加点的现象。作为一名高三学生，请结合自己及身边的实际谈谈你对这一举措的认识。‎ Heilongjiang Provincial Education Department has recently taken strict measures to make sure that no student has to go to school on weekends or during official holidays.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎4．‎ 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 下午数学考试,你成绩不佳，心情郁闷。晚上几个好朋友邀你去歌唱厅（KTV）唱歌，你们一晚上唱得很尽兴。你用日记的形式记录下你今天的活动及感受。‎ 写作内容］：‎ ‎1、下午的数学考试你的成绩不佳，心情一直不好。‎ ‎2、晚上同学邀请你去KTV唱歌，这是你第一次去KTV。‎ ‎3、大家唱得很高兴，而你一直当听众，你觉得你的歌唱得不好，不敢去唱。‎ ‎4、在大家的鼓励下，你终于拿起了麦克风（microphone），唱了一首 英文歌 I believe I can fly。‎ 写作要求］：‎ ‎1、必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。‎ 日记的开头和结尾已写好。‎ Friday, Oct. 24, 2008 Sunny ‎ This evening I went to the KTV with some of my friends.‎ ‎ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I have become cheerful now and above all I’ve regained self-confidence. I believe that the worst enemy in one’s life is oneself. I shouldn’t lose heart just because of one or two failures because I still have chances to try.‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎5．书面表达（满分25分）‎ 学校英语角准备就Living in the city 为主题，进行有关城市生活利弊的讨论，请你根据下面表格内容提示，写一篇100字左右的短文。首句已给出，不要逐字翻译，可以适当发挥。‎ Advantages Disadvantages 工作机会多 生活消费高 交通便利 人口多、拥挤 有公园、饭店等休闲场所 空气污染、居住环境差 Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages… _____________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考答案 ‎1．‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ With the women’s liberation movement carried out, American women now enjoy a better situation in both their families and the society. What they have done proves women deserve as much respect as men.‎ ‎ Women in the world have long been treated unfairly. They were limited in their homes where they could not share equal rights with men. Now the situation has improved greatly, but they are still not treated equally as men. And this is a worldwide problem. Considering the contribution women do to their families and the society, women should be given as much respect and as many opportunities. They should be paid as much as men if they do the same job. Men should gjve up the belief that men should have some privilege. On the other hand , women should make themselves more able, be more self-confident and more active. I believe the day will come when women enjoy real equality with men.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎3．‎ One possible version:‎ Heilongjiang Provincial Education Department has recently taken strict measures to make sure that no student has go to school on weekends or during official holidays. For the first time in our senior middle school life the students in Senior 1 and 2 can enjoy full-length weekends, and for the first time in years they are free to do what is necessary and important to meet their personal needs. In the past years, we kept working hard from morning till night in order to get a higher mark in the college entrance exam. We omitted everything (such as art classed, social activities, etc.) that did not have a direct relationship with that goal. Consequently, many of us are weak both physically and mentally. Over 70 percent of my classmates are near-sighted… If the whole generation of us continue to live this way, what would the future of our nation be like?! I’d like to express my heartfelt thanks to our responsible government for its wise and timely decision to bring all that to an end. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎4．‎ Friday, Oct. 24, 2008 Sunny 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends.‎ ‎ This was the first time that I had been to a KTV and at first I didn’t want to go. I was in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn’t do well in math exam. At the KTV, everybody sang his favorite songs very happily except me – I was the only one of the audience. I didn’t dare to have a try because I was afraid that I couldn’t sing well. Encouraged by my classmates, I picked up the microphone and sang an English song entitled I believe I can fly.‎ ‎ I have become cheerful now and above all I’ve regained self-confidence. I believe that the worst enemy in one’s life is oneself. I shouldn’t lose heart just because of one or two failures because I still have chances to try.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎5．Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages. It is often easier to find jobs. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat at good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.‎ ‎ However, living in the city is often very expensive. You must find a well paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. What’s more, the city is always crowded, noisy and polluted. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇写作题材是社会现象的两种不同观点。主题Living in the city，进行有关城市生活利弊的讨论，这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。‎ 考点：考查议论文 点评：考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费