专题23文字提纲式-三年高考（2016-2018）英语试题分项版解析Word版含解析.doc

‎ ‎ ‎2018高考题 ‎【2018·天津卷】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎61. 假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。‎ ‎（1）比赛的时间、地点；‎ ‎（2）邀请他的原因；‎ ‎（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。‎ 注意：（1）词数不少于100；‎ ‎（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：‎ 世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition Dear Chris,‎ I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________‎ I’m looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Jin ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Chris, ‎ ‎ I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July so as to promote the development of robotics. ‎ ‎ What I would like to stress is that it is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know you've just won first prize in the Robotics competition held in your institute and have shown great talent in designing robotics. Therefore, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.‎ The training schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions. I will send its details to you by e-mail. I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect. ‎ I'm looking forward to your reply. ‎ Yours,‎ Li Jin ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。‎ ‎【2018·北京】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎(1) 表示欢迎；‎ ‎(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；‎ ‎(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。‎ 注意：(1). 词数不少于50；‎ ‎(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jim,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Jim,‎ ‎ I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.‎ ‎ Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.‎ ‎ I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ 亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, ‎ 使句子结构紧凑。‎ 使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。‎ ‎【2018·全国III】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 学校的体育场馆；‎ ‎2. 主要的运动项目；‎ ‎3. 你喜欢的项目。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右：‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Peter, ‎ I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.‎ To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.‎ All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2017高考题 ‎【2017·天津卷】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。‎ ‎（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；‎ ‎（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；‎ ‎（3）希望她有机会重访天津。‎ 注意：‎ ‎（1）词数不少于100；‎ ‎（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games Dear Mrs. Green,‎ I’m glad to hear from you. ______________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Jin ‎【答案】略 ‎ ‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文 ‎【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁准确的语言。‎ ‎【2017·北京卷】你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1.你建议的线路；‎ ‎2.你的理由；‎ ‎3.你的祝愿。‎ 注意：1.词数不少于50；‎ ‎2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jim,‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jim, ‎ I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.‎ Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount‎ ‎Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.‎ Hope you’ll have a good time in China.‎ Yours Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用：highly recommended。连接词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。‎ ‎【2017·浙江卷6月考】‎ 应用文写作(满分15分)‎ 假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 参加者；‎ ‎2. 时间、地点；‎ ‎3. 活动：登山、野餐等。‎ 注意：1. 词数80左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Chris, ‎ How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7：00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.‎ Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don't have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It's just up to you. ‎ Looking forward to hearing from you.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎2016高考题 ‎1.【2016·天津】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。‎ （1） 回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；‎ （2） 谈谈收获或感情；‎ （3） 表达祝愿语期望。‎ 注意：‎ （1） 词数不少于100；‎ （2） 可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；‎ （3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear friends,‎ How time flies! ‎ ‎ ‎ Thank you.‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version: ‎ Dear__friends,__‎ How__time__flies! Two weeks went by before we realized that our exchange activities ended. On behalf of our school, I would like to express my feelings.‎ As scheduled, we took part in several instructive activities. We have learnt many Chinese characters and often took exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was extremely delicious and different from our food. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists' works.‎ As far as I'm concerned, everyone here is a member of our big family. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip to your country. I hope we'll get together again next year. ‎ Thank__you. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文 ‎【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁的语言。‎ ‎2.【2016·北京】书面表达 ‎ 第一节（15分）‎ ‎ 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 该人物是谁； ‎ ‎2. 该人物的主要贡献； ‎ ‎3. 该人物对你的影响。 ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数不少于50；‎ ‎2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ‎ Dear Jim, ‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jim,‎ ‎ It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.‎ ‎ As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.‎ ‎ Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.‎ ‎ Cheers!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：题材新颖，要求介绍中国历史人物，内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于50词，使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。‎ 亮点说明：范文使用了词组hear from, As for, In fact和搭配 inspire sb to do sth等，丰富了作文内容；范文注意上下文的语意连贯。 ‎ 考点：应用文写作 ‎【名师点睛】‎ 题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。‎ ‎2015年高考试题 ‎ 书面表达之文字提纲式 ‎1.【2015·新课标全国II】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 出发及返回时间；‎ ‎2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 结语已为你写好。‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考答案】‎ ‎ Dear Lucy,‎ ‎ I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at ‎9 in the morning.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本作文从实际生活出发，以英语的交际性和实用性为目标，兼顾尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意义。体现了课程标准要求的以知识运用为教学目标的要求。在高三备考时，应该多从把语言作为交流的工具的角度去准备书面表达。‎ ‎2.【2015·新课标全国I】‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：‎ 1. 栏目介绍；‎ 2. 稿件内容；‎ 3. 稿件长度：约400词；‎ 4. 交稿日期：‎6月28日前。 ‎ 注意：‎ 1. 词数100左右；‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；‎ 3. 开头语已为你写好。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Peter,‎ I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.‎ The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己 熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和过渡词语，不仅增强了表达效果，而且实现了形式与内容的统一。‎ ‎3.【2015·北京】‎ 假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：‎ ‎ 1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）；‎ ‎ 2. 说明你打算参加的原因；‎ ‎ 3. 询问对方的意向。‎ ‎ 注意： 1. 词数不少于50；‎ ‎ 2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp Dear Jim,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jim,‎ I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me.‎ This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.‎ Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if you’d like to go with me.‎ 文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。‎ ‎【考点定位】应用文类书面表达 ‎【名师点睛】本题是一篇考的是邀请信，龙舟的一个艺术节，仍然是传统文化的主题。采分点主要是三个板块，第一个板块是相关细节的处理。因为在第一个要点当中写到，学生要自己设计时间、地点以及参赛人员，这使学生需要自行发挥得，编纂的时候要合理一些。第二个板块提到你的参加原因，原因必然是考官会关注的，为什么要参加龙州艺术界的活动。第三，他提到两个字，就是询问，希望学生在写作的时候尽量避开一些非常生硬的词汇。注意写邀请信常用句型：On behalf of…, I am writing to invite you to take part in the…；I’d like to be involved in…due to the fact that…；I am looking forward to your reply/ arrival/coming/ attendance等考生在应用文写作中一定要体现出交际功能，重视该文体的写作结构，除称呼与落款必须写齐全外，正文部分一般开头应道明写作目的，中间呈现具体细节，结尾处补充礼貌性话语。另外，应用文的语言结构忌过于复杂，用词忌过难过偏，少用倒装从句嵌套等长难句。语言与用词做到适用应用场合，准确到位即可。只要做到以上几点，应用文部分即可拿到一个不错的分数。‎ ‎4.【2015·广东】‎ 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 你接受了一项写作任务，为英语校报写一篇科技报道。‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ 请根据以下信息，介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术。内容包括：‎ 技术名称：DNA检测 检测方法：唾液样本分析 检测费用：125英镑 检测时长：4到6周 检测用途： 1. 预测重大疾病 ‎2. 预知食物偏好 ‎3. 提示合适的锻炼方式 检测影响： 1. 增强健康意识 ‎2. 易引起过度焦虑 ‎*唾液样本：saliva sample ‎[写作要求]‎ 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ 第一节DNA Detection We can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定语从句。副词Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本题所给用5个句子概括医疗新技术的材料是学生不太熟悉的内容，所以要尽量使用学生熟悉的句式来写，还必须用5个句子表达所有的信息。此题主要考查阅读概括能力及语言的组织的能力。需要用一些高级句式及词汇来增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎5.【2015·陕西】‎ ‎ 书面表达（满分30分）‎ 假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。 ‎ ‎ Volunteers Wanted Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.‎ ‎ ‎ 写作要点：‎ ‎1.表示写信意图；‎ ‎2.陈述应征目的；‎ ‎3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。‎ 写作要求： ‎ ‎1.邮件词数不少于100；‎ ‎2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯 ‎4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ Dear MS Chen ,‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply. ‎ ‎ Yours truly,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考答案】‎ Dear MS Chen ,‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.‎ ‎ I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.‎ ‎ As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.‎ ‎ I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply. ‎ ‎ Yours truly,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了so…that…句型，以及定语从句I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have ‎ been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文 ‎【名师点睛】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事，抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容贴近学生的生活，学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。‎ ‎6.【2015·四川】‎ 书面表达（共35分)‎ 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。‎ 1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；‎ 2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；‎ 3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；‎ 4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；‎ Hi Sharon,‎ This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Hi Sharon,‎ ‎ This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my ‎ daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.‎ ‎ Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.‎ ‎ In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking. ‎ Hope for you early reply!‎ ‎ Yours Sincerely ‎ ‎ Li Xia ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.、表语从句：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲类作文 ‎【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ ‎7.【2015·天津】‎ 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。 ‎ ‎（1）自我介绍；‎ ‎ （2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等； ‎ ‎（3）询问对方的其他需求。‎ 注意：‎ ‎（1）词数不少于100；‎ ‎（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇： 学生会 the Student Union ‎ Dear Chris, ‎ ‎ 此处不能答题 ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Jin ‎【参考答案】‎ Dear_Chris，‎ I am Li Jin, chairman of the Student Union of Chenguang High School. I am writing to inform you of our donation.‎ In order to enhance the friendship between our two schools, our school has appealed to the students to donate books to your Chinese class. The books, which can be used as reading materials or reference books in your Chinese class, include 30 storybooks, 25 magazines and 20 ChineseEnglish dictionaries. We will take the books over to you when we take part in the summer camp to be held in your school in July.‎ Should you need any other things, please do not hesitate to tell us.‎ Yours，‎ Li_Jin ‎ ‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。‎ ‎8.【2015·重庆】‎ 写作二（满分20分）‎ Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：‎ ‎· 表明写信目的 ‎· 选择一种分享方式 ‎· 简述作出该选择的理由 ‎· 希望了解更多信息 注意：（1）词数不少于80；‎ ‎ （2）在答题卡上做答 ‎ （3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books. ‎ You’ve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other ‎ participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.‎ If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：apply for申请；Looking forward to盼望着；Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reason后面跟着一个同位语从句；not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.这个句子not only but also连接两个句子，第一个句子需要用部分倒装；‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本题的解题思路，一、表明写信目的：申请参加该活动（添加得知消息）；二、选择一种分享方式：二者选一；三、阐述理由 ；四、书信结尾（添加希望）；注意表达句式1. Between them, I would like to choose…2. Of the two, I prefer the latter to the former.表示希望的表达句式1. I am looking forward to more information.2. I would appreciate it if you would offer more information.‎ ‎2014年高考试题 文字提纲式 ‎1.【2014·全国大纲卷】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。‎ ‎1.家庭：‎ ‎2．工作：‎ ‎3.业余生活。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右：‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：‎ ‎3.开头语已为你写好。‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty –eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对未来的畅想，然后从生活，工作，家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文。‎ ‎2.【2014·重庆卷】写作（共两个写作任务，满分35分）‎ 写作二（满分20分）‎ 青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。‎ 假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内容应包括：‎ ‎*赞同Susan的看法 ‎*你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么 ‎*该礼物的意义 ‎*期待大家回复 注意：1. 词数不少于80；‎ ‎ 2. 符合语言规范；‎ ‎ 3. 在答题卡上作答；‎ ‎ 4. 开头已给出（不计入总词数）。‎ ‎ I am a high school student from China. _________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________.‎ ‎【答案】‎ I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion about best gifts: the value of gifts lies in its intension so we should devote more to them. ‎ The best gift I’ve ever received is a book from my English teacher, Debbie, which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA. The book’s name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul: The Real Deal: Friends. I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way. And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she found me at loss dealing with friends at one time. Reading it, I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study.‎ I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply. ‎ ‎ Yours ever,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ 写作技巧：一般情况下应分三段来完成改写任务：1阐释Susan的观点并表示认同。2收到或送出的礼物的具体描写及其意义。该部分是本写作任务的重点，应多费笔墨完成。3‎ 表期待应另外起段完成，以便阅卷老师发现和评判内容要点。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。优秀学生一定要在保持正确的前提下尽量使用较为复杂的句型，如状语从句，定语从句，倒装句和适量的非谓语动词。特别强调：一定要注意卷面整洁并避免拼写错误。‎ ‎3.【2014·天津卷】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件：‎ ‎(1) 表示欢迎 (2) 介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气， 饮食等）‎ ‎(3) 介绍本班情况 (4) 希望Chris做哪些事情， 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊 注意：‎ ‎(1) 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。 (2) 可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。‎ 词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。‎ ‎(1) 参考词汇： 交换生 exchange student Dear Chris, ‎ I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version:‎ Dear Chris，‎ I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. Welcome to our class in China. I'm glad you can join our class, which is a wonderful group. Every student not only enjoys studying, but is ready to help each other. So if you join us, I’m sure you can get along well with them and quickly make friends with them, too. ‎ The climate here is changeable. Now, it is very cool in autumn and cold in winter, so don't forget to bring different kinds of clothes with you. In your spare time, you can visit some famous places of interest in our city, as well as tasting all kinds of delicious traditional Chinese local foods. We Chinese use chopsticks to have Chinese food instead of forks and knives. And I can be your tour guide if you like.‎ As an American, there is no doubt that you are familiar with your country. So if it is convenient to you, please bring a map of America and some photos of your families，friends, and some famous buildings with you, and give us some speeches to introduce your school life and different culture of America. And we’ll exchange our different lives and cultures together then.‎ looking forward to your coming!‎ ‎ ‎ Yours Li Jin ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点分析】本文包括了四个要点。1. 表示欢迎。2. 介绍班级情况，运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句。not only…but also 连接词是句子连贯。3. 注意事项。4. 希望Chris做的事。用了get along well with，make friends with，as well as， instead of， it is convenient to you等短语和固定句型。‎ ‎4.【2014·北京卷】书面表达（共两节，35 分） ‎ 第一节 ‎(15分)‎ ‎ 你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：‎ ‎ 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；‎ ‎2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；‎ ‎3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。‎ 注意： 1.词数不少于50.‎ ‎ 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Chris,‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Joe ‎【答案】‎ Dear Chris,‎ How is everything going?‎ I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.‎ I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.‎ Yours, ‎ Joe ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】文章范文使用了高级从句及省略：1. I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.‎ ‎2.高级短语：put off look forward to hear from 考点：考查应用文写作 ‎5.【2014·山东卷】写作（满分30分） ‎ 某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1.该谚语的含义；2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。‎ ① A friend in need is a friend indeed. ‎ ‎②Where there’s a will, there’s a way.‎ 注意：1.词数：120-150； ‎ ‎2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。‎ 参考词汇：谚语 proverb ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 考点：考查夹叙夹议文 ‎6.【2014·江西卷】书面表达 ‎ 假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。‎ ‎ 1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；‎ ‎ 2.学会做人：真诚，友善；‎ ‎ 3.学会其他：考生自拟。‎ 注意：1.词数120左右；‎ ‎ 2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。‎ Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Thank you! ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【审题要素】‎ ‎ 写作时需注意下列几点。‎ ‎ 1. 应该使用第一人称。全文以现在以及将来范畴的时态为主，当然不排斥用过去时态。‎ ‎ 2. 按提纲提示清晰分段，不能缺少要点（学会学习：方法，习惯等；学会做人：真诚；友善；学会其他）。‎ ‎ 3.注意语言逻辑性和思维想象力。多用些语际衔接性词语（first of all ，besides ，on the one hand 等）。‎ ‎【思路导引】‎ 首先， 思考出要学会学习，要有个符合自己的方法，要养成良好的学习习惯，要有个正确的学习态度等；思考出要学会做人，要与人和善，要和睦相处，要正气真诚等；当然还要学会锻炼，学会娱乐，学会自我管理等。‎ 然后，根据要点思考可用哪些表达法：the best way of .../ an acceptable thing is .../get into a habit of .../be active in..../go over.../behave well/it is kind of .../be involved in...等；根据提纲，连成句子，清晰分段。可用firstly.../in addition.../last but not the least等。‎ 最后，虽然试卷给出了演讲开头，但我们别忘了在演讲稿结尾时，或总结，或展望未来，或表决心等。‎ ‎【标准范文】‎ Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.‎ In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.‎ In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.‎ Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.‎ No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.‎ ‎ Thank you!‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 重点 词汇 语句 Challenging，used to In addition build up Develop a good habit get actively involved in No pains no gains.‎ get along well with ‎ ‎...‎ 高级 句型 ‎1. Developing a good habit is also of importance. （动名词短语作主语）‎ ‎2. ...review what had been taught after class. （名词性从句）‎ ‎3. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. （强调句）‎ ‎4. I am sure that with great efforts, you will... （名词性从句）‎ ‎...‎ 段落 框架 First,...‎ In addition,...‎ Finally,...‎ ‎7.【2014·四川卷】面表达（共35分）‎ 假设你是李夏I你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况，请根据以下要点回信告知。‎ ‎1. 考试日期与科目； ‎ ‎2. 考试准备情况；‎ ‎3. 考试吋的状态；‎ ‎4. 对试题的感受； ‎ ‎5. 可能的考试结果。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数120左右； ‎ ‎2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好； ‎ ‎3. 可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯； ‎ ‎4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 ‎ 参考词汇：college entrance examination Dear Sam,‎ Thank you for your concern. ________________________ ‎ ‎ ______________________________________ ‎ ‎ ________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version :‎ Dear Sam ,‎ Thank you for your concern. I am glad to tell you something about what you asked about our college entrance examination .‎ The college entrance examination falls on June 7and June 8 every year ,and the subjects that we should prepare for are different depending on each province .Generally speaking , we are busy reviewing and preparing for it the moment we enter senior three ,which is considered a vital period .With the exam approaching , most students will feel nervous and upset .But by now when I am sitting the exam , I feel calm ,because I think the exam is neither too easy nor too difficult . I am sure I will get a good result .But whatever the result is, I will face it calmly. After all , I have made every effort ,and I won’t regret .‎ ‎ Best wishes ! ‎ ‎ Yours ,‎ ‎ Li Xia ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，语言流畅，时态、人称和标点符号的使用正确，很好的完成了写作任务。在作文中作者开门见山提出自己写信的目的，即告诉Sam 有关高考的事情，这种结构安排符合书信类文体的结构安排。在句式方面作者使用了定语从句which is considered a vital period，状语从句whatever the result is, 宾语从句what you asked about our college entrance examination等，而且还用到了Generally speaking , With the exam approaching , After all ,等短语，这些短语和句式的使用有效地增加了文章的亮点，提高了作文档次。‎ 考点：考查提纲类作文。‎ ‎8.【2014·陕西卷】书面表达（满分30分）‎ 假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。 ‎ 写作要点：‎ ‎1.表示对客人的欢迎；‎ ‎2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；‎ ‎3.表达对客人的祝愿。‎ ‎ 写作要求： ‎ ‎1.词数不少于100；‎ ‎2.称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；‎ ‎3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ Dear American guests,‎ ‎ ____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ Dear American Guest,‎ On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week Activities.‎ As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.‎ I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如on behalf of，As scheduled， consist of， benefit from等等；还运用了不定式to have作状语，to develop作表语等，动名词listening等作宾语，hope后宾语从句等等。‎ 考点：考查应用文写作。‎ ‎9.【2014·安徽卷】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。‎ 内容要点如下：‎ ‎1．表示理解并给予安慰；‎ ‎2．提出建议并说明理由。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数120左右；‎ ‎2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ ‎3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪 Hi Worried.:‎ I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Jamie ‎【答案】‎ Hi Worried:‎ ‎ I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:‎ ‎ First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.‎ ‎ I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.‎ Yours，‎ Jamie ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：a good way of…的好方法， let out 释放，‎ get rid of消除， carry on 继续进行，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. 这句话用了宾语从句，The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. 这句话用了表语从句和时间状语从句， The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. 这句话用了不定式做表语和so that引导的结果状语从句， talk to someone you trust about how you feel. 这句话用了定语从句。文章还使用了合适的连接词First, Second, And third使文章很连贯。‎ 考点：考查提纲类书面表达 ‎10.【2014·湖南卷】Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.‎ 学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic_______”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。‎ 内容：‎ ‎1.说明设计理由 ‎2.介绍新功能。‎ 注意;:‎ ‎1.词数不少于120个字 ‎2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【答案】‎ My magic pen Pens are necessities for every student. So we are all familiar with them. ‎ I design my pen. On the one hand, it’s easy to carry. On the other hand, it’s used not only for writing but also for other important aspects.‎ Firstly, I put some batteries in the pen and fix a light bulb, so when it is dark on my way home or to school, I can use it for a flasher. I won’t be afraid of darkness any more. Secondly, I fix a tiny clock in the pen, so I can know the time and I don’t have to wear my watch. At last, I put a sharp knife on the top of the pen, I can either use it for cutting things or even protecting myself when I come across danger. ‎ Such is the pen which I designed. Isn’t it useful and attractive? ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文语言规范，条理清楚，脉络清晰。过渡性词汇Firstly, Secondly, at last One the one hand, One the other hand，等等的贴切使用使文章意义更连贯，逻辑更严密。 总体上讲不失为一篇优秀的习作。‎ ‎11.【2014·浙江卷】书面表达 （满分30分）‎ ‎ 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需 要购置科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。‎ ‎ 注意：信的开头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。‎ ‎ Dear Mr. Wang,‎ ‎ ____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours sincerely ‎ Li Yue ‎ 【答案】‎ ‎ Dear Mr. Wang,‎ Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.‎ What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.‎ In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.‎ I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Yue ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式增加了文章的色彩，如：would like to do；help sb do sth；not only...but also;encourage sb to do sth;That is why…等，还用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化，如：What we need most are popular science books这里what引导的主语从句；That is why I recommend another category of books：这里why引导的表语从句；I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.这里是if引导的条件状语从句。‎ ‎ 考点：提纲作文。‎ ‎12.【2014·全国新课标II】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。‎ ‎1.家庭：‎ ‎2．工作：‎ ‎3.业余生活。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右：‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：‎ ‎3.开头语已为你写好。‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ I often imagine what my life would be like in the future . I think my life will be very different in ten years .i will be twenty –eight years old by then . I will have my own family, probably with a ‎ lovely child . I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer . I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues . I’will do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time , I will continue to take regular exercise , such as swimming , running and various ball games . On my holidays , I will travel around the world .In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对未来的畅想，然后从生活，工作，家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文。‎ ‎13.【2014·全国新课标I】书面表达 假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）‎ ‎ ‎ 注意：1.词数100左右 ‎ 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。‎ 3. 参考词汇：住宿—accommodation ‎【答案】‎ Dear Sir/Madam,‎ I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours faithfully,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语，增加了文章的色彩，如：plan to do sth ;would like to do sth;pay for; look forward to doing/sth等；用了一些过渡词如：First ；Besides等，使文章过渡自然；用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一。如：I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气，增加了文章的亮点。‎ 考点：考查书信应用文。‎ ‎14.【2014·上海卷】Directions:Write an English composition in 120—150words according to the instrucions given below in Chinese.‎ 学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；‎ ‎2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Editor,‎ I’ve learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one. I’m writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.‎ Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students’ interest and have positive effects on their study and life.‎ Compared to the entertainment ,I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. In addition, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.‎ Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand, it covers one’s career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to one’s career success in the future.‎ What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Cheng Fei ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴，这篇作文要求就校英语报改版是事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容： 1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由； 2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由，根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在写作过程中要确定切题且符合英语写作逻辑的篇章结构。确立邮件文体之后，要弄清要点，围绕要点展开，条理要清晰，理由要充分，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，在文章中尽可能多地使用高大上的词汇，遵循短语优先原则在配以特殊句型和复合句的应用，让文章更上档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组： share with 和…分享，Needless to say不必说，‎ according to 根据， have positive effects on对…有积极的影响，in turn反之，take… into account将…考虑在内，makes a great difference to对…有很大的影响，in the hope that希望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：compared to the entertainment ,I hold the view that the value of the columns ‎ concerning health and culture is more important . 这句话用了过去分词和同位语从句，The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. 这句话用了表语从句和while表示对比的用法， the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句， What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. 这句话用了主语从句，还有范文还使用了 In addition, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other hand,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。‎ 考点：考查提纲类书面表达。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎