2018年高考题
【2018·全国I】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：
(1).到达时间；
(2).合适的礼物；
【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don't hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
点睛：本文虽然看起来比较容易，但学生真正动起笔来，还是比较困惑的。原因为：1.看起来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉，但内容很多，一时间不知道该写什么；2.100
单词左右，写出到达时间；合适的礼物；餐桌礼仪三个内容，信息量大，选择有困难；
应对方法：近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高，中国文化，中国故事，中国礼仪等等，但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里，这就是低落点。写这样的作文，一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的写，不要面面俱到，中国餐桌礼仪内容太多，100单词无法写。找重点，以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。
【2018·全国II】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：
(1)短片内容：学校的发展；
(2)放映时间、地点；
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Notice
In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What's more, every one of you will be welcome to enjoy the movie, have a heated discussion afterwards and give your own comments.
Student Union
June 8, 2018
【2018·浙江】写作
第一节 应用文写作
66. 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
（1）. 口语能力：
（2）. 相关经验；
（3）. 应聘目的。
注意：
（1）. 词数80左右；
（2）. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Hearing that some volunteers are wanted to welcome the foreign students, I am gladly writing to apply for this job.
I do believe that I am very qualified for this voluntary work. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, I have a good knowledge of English and I can communicate with native English speakers fluently. Secondly, I have some experience in accompanying foreign friends.
I do believe the volunteer work will enable me to practise English more fluently and broaden my horizons.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
2017年高考题
[2017·全国卷Ⅰ]
假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 内容：学习唐诗；
3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Leslie，
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
[2017·全国卷Ⅱ]
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．展览时间、地点；
2．展览内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—paper cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
[2017·全国卷Ⅲ]
假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric
写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
1．球队活动；
2．报名方式及截止日期。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Dear Eric，
I was informed that our school Ping pong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially ping pong.
As you know, playing ping pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.
Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2016年高考题
1. 【2016·全国新课标I】书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。
2.【2016·全国新课标II】书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club
）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护；
2．展览时间；
3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Lihua
【名师点睛】
本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.时间状语从句.... theme the last time you visited our school.条件状语从句If you want to join....；等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。
考点：考查半开放作文
3.【2016·全国新课标III】书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that we’ll have more time to read and select books；条件句If it’s convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。
考点：书信类作文。
【名师点睛】
题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。
4.【2016·四川】书面表达（满分25分）
某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的季节；
2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受……）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好；
3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；
4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。
5.【2016·浙江】书面表达（满分30分）
“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。
要求如下：
1.简述你对这句名言的理解；
2.用一个具体事例加以说明；
3.给出恰当的结尾。
注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：
2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
【答案】One possible student version
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
【解析】
试题分析：本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目判断作文主要介绍要将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能走题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章使用第一人称和一般现在时，一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。
考点：考查开放式作文
6.【2016·江苏】书面表达（满分25分）
81.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.
Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer冶 competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 ~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【答案】
On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.
In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.
To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.
(150 words)
Possible version two:
Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.
In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.
In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.
(150 words)
【解析】
2.支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。3.理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式；网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚。同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠。（2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。3.反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响。（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉。（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。注意使用本人熟悉的词汇及句式，以增加获得高分的可能性。不要堆砌使用串联词，穿插使用陈述句、祈使句和被动句式，让文章更加丰富多样化。
【名师点睛】
本篇范文很好地完成了所有任务。文章结构合理，层次分明。第一段总结归纳短文内容提出网络投票很流行，给人们带来好处同时也有不利之处。第二段提出个人观点并给出理由，两篇范文中正反观点明确，论据有力；第三段中提出合理化建议；时态和人称运用准确无误无误，全文无中国式英语思维，体现出很高的运用语言的能力。从写作技巧来看，文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句..... in which candidates go around to seek supports.状语从句.....if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.同时文章中串联词运用较为合理，如in my opinion、in addition、furthermore、to be honest等等。
考点：考查任务型读写
2015开放式
1.【2015·安徽】
某英文杂志正在举办以"Fancy yourself as an interviewer"为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 采访的对象；
2. 采访的原因；
3. 想提的问题。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 短文的标题已给出，不计人总词数。
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.
【亮点说明】范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句I would like to interview is Yang Liwei；原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese...；宾语从句①I could learn a great deal from him about it，②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained；条件状语从句If I could interview him；非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等，显示了扎实的语法功底，也使作文的句式变得多样；
范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：not only...but also...；one of the...；the first to do sth；be interested in；a great deal；such...as等，使作文的内容变得更加丰富；
范文注意使用not only...but also, and, also和finally等来衔接句子，使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。
【考点定位】命题类材料作文
【名师点睛】题目给出了一个征文的通知，要求考生根据提示以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to
Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文。题目属于命题作文，不过，题目给出了写作的框架，一定程度上降低了难度。需要注意的是，所写的作文必须涵盖所有的要点，如果能够使用高级词汇和重要句型，将会给作文增色不少。
2.【2015·湖南】
Section C (25 marks)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.
请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。
As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.
注意：
1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上；
2. 续写词数不少于120个；
3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【答案】
One possible version：
As_a_student,_I_can_tell_you_that_there_is_nothing_better_than_being_praised_by_my_teacher_before_my_classmates.
Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and I went home together after school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knocked down by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran over to find that the old lady's head was bleeding. She had already lost consciousness. Immediately I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with it. Li Ming stopped a taxi quickly. Together we put the old lady into the taxi and drove her to the nearest hospital.
The old lady was saved and we also felt very pleased. What's more, I remembered the number of the car, and the traffic police caught the driver later.
3.【2015·湖北】
短文写作
请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，有英语写一篇短文。
Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an
answer,you will learn.
注意：1.无须写标题；
2.除诗歌外，文体不限；
3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
5.词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
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【参考答案】
Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.
Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubted it. Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. Half an hour later, I managed to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to him, the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.
From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.
【亮点说明】首句“Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.”鲜明地亮出了作者的观点。文章使用了状语从句“If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.”及分词做状语“Thinking that his solution might be wrong,…”等句型，为文章增色不少。此外，一些短语的使用也恰到好处，如offer sb. sth.，work sth. out，manage to do sth.，praise sb. for sth.，serve as等。
【考点定位】考查“提纲类开放式”作文。
【名师点睛】今年的高考短文写作仍然沿袭了近几年的模式，考生对“提纲类开放式”作文比较熟悉。考生答题时，先提取关键词question，doubt，learn来确定中心，确保不走题。通过英文提示，考生很容易得出这一观点：质疑既是求知的一种方式，也是“批判性思维”的起点。这对引导考生进行独立思考，发展批判性思维，培养创新意识，极具启发和指导作用。
4.【2015·江苏】
书面表达 (满分 25 分)
81.请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章.
[写作内容]
1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;
3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。
[写作要求]
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
[评分标准]
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【答案】
The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.
Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What’ s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.
In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. (150 words)
【亮点说明】范文严格按照“三步走”的格局，第一段用短短26字（不含标点）概括了所给材料，得益于使用了“not only…but also…”这一经典句型；第二段分析了导致交通问题的原因，使用了“give rise to, large-scale construction of, the increasing number of, (be) vital to”等高级词汇，同时“what’s worse”衔接词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。第三段句型多样，变换使用了“Without虚拟语气，it is…who…强调句型，it is one’s duty to do sth.”等句型，为文章增色不少。
【考点定位】考查“说明文类材料+图形+提纲类”作文。
【名师点睛】说明文类材料的概括方法：主题概括法
（段意合并法）。考生应抓住主题句（关键句），一般为文章第一段和各段第一句，然后进行段意合并，再用1-2个漂亮的句式整理成文；分析原因时，注意分条称述，并使用恰当的衔接词，但要避免落入俗套；谈论启示时注意句式的变换使用，避免句式的单一。另外，考生应尽可能多地使用一些高级词汇，为文章增色。
5.【2015·广东】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: “Rule 1: We are family! “ All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3… In the following weeks, Sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and require everyone to follow them.
Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students. Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class. At the graduation ceremony, just as she expected, she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.
[写作内容]
1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 用约120个词就班规谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
(1) 你们班最突出的问题是什么？
(2) 针对该问题你会设计一条什么班规？
(3)你认为班规会带来什么影响？
[写作要求]
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
【答案】
Sally was a teacher. who taught some students full of problems. The students didn’t follow the school rules. Therefore, she made the rules for them. Later they made great progress.
In our class ,some students don’t work hard and often fight with each other. I will tell them some stories about hard-working people.I will make a study plan to encourage them to study work. I put up some sayings on the walls to remind them to do so.I will explain to them that studying hard is very important. They aren’t allowed to fight at school.In this way, students have a good habit. Most
of the students follow the school rules and study work. They will respect teachers and other classmates. They will have good manners and confidence. Later they will get better grades.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定语从句。副词Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。
【名师点睛】本题所给用5个句子概括医疗新技术的材料是学生不太熟悉的内容，所以要尽量使用学生熟悉的句式来写，还必须用5个句子表达所有的信息。此题主要考查阅读概括能力及语言的组织的能力。需要用一些高级句式及词汇来增加文章的亮点。
6.【2015·浙江】
书面表达（满分30分）
在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英文写一篇100～120个词“短文。要求如下：
1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；
2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。
注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。
When I Have a Different Opinion
【参考答案】
When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it . By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day . Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.
An alternative student version:
When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.
The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism; I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.
3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。但是在以具体事例阐述的时候使用过去时
4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如not only …but also…不仅而且。
运用连词while 表对比观点。运用because 表达原因。
运用了表语从句表达原因The main reason for my choice is that …。
运用了宾语从句 decide whether do have a … ；discuss where to go for an outing
运用了介词短语 By doing so, Without hesitation.
运用了强调句 we did have a lots of fun that day.
此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be worth doing sth; stick to sth.; have a good time; have lots of fun , tend to do 等。
【考点定位】考查观点理由。
【名师点睛】
一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。
7.【2015·重庆】
写作一（满分15分）
请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。
If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?
要求：
（1）作出回答并说出理由；
（2）词数不少于60；
（3）在答题卡上做答。
【参考答案】
Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset
my goals.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，使用了多种句式和结构。比如I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals.宾语从句；Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward.这个句子还运用到非谓语动词；If only I could go back and reset my goals.还运用到虚拟语气。
【考点定位】考查开放性作文。
【名师点睛】这种开放性的作文，采取表明观点+阐释理由+结尾总结的解题思路，一、建议句式：主要考虑从虚拟语气着手
1. 宾语从句
I suggest/ advise that…I should…
2. 主语从句
It’s strongly recommended that…
3. 条件状语从句
If I were three years younger, I would…
二、原因句式：建议陈述两个原因，用并列结构not only, but…as well连接
1. The reason why… is that…
2. Why I say so is that…
三、结尾部分：表达对“回不到过去”的惋惜
How I wish I could be three years younger!
2014开放式
1.【2014·重庆卷】写作（共两个写作任务，满分35分）
写作一（满分15分）
请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。
“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.”
要求：1. 就此材料发表你的看法；
2. 紧扣材料，有明确的观点；
3. 词数不少于60；
4. 在答题卡上作答。
【答案】
One possible version
This happens frequently in a teenager’s world which depends on cell phones too much. In the eyes of the youngsters’, friendship is important. But when it comes to the balance of friends and phones, kids tends to regard the latter as their bigger share.
I don’t think it is wise to neglect a devoted human friend but favor the phone, because human friends can push us on in the fierce struggle in life while phones are only our tools. So next time, when your friend falls, don’t laugh at him or her but help him or her stand up.
2.【2014·福建卷】书面表达（满分25分）
如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."
- Sir Winston, Churchill
内容要求：
1．你对该引语的理解：
2．你的相关经历：
3．恰当的结尾。
注意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数：
2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：
3．词数：120左右。
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that__________________________
【答案】
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.
Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stick at it.
【亮点说明】I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.这里含有一个时间状语从句。What's important is that we should stick at it.这里含有一个主语从句和一个表语从句。
考点：话题类书面表达
3.【2014·湖北卷】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）
请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.
注意：①无须写标题； ②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
【答案】
It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way
to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
【亮点说明】文章第一句It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society就鲜明概括并亮出了作者的观点。文中使用了定语从句I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon以及非限制性定语从句which drove off quickly都为文章增色不少，一些短语和短句的使用也恰到好处比如knock down，drive off，be proud of, rush to sb to do sth，compare with等并注意了句子的衔接如： when， luckily 等等。
考点：考查提纲类作文
4.【2014·江苏卷】书面表达 (满分 25 分)
81. 请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。
When we read newspapers, we often come across such English words as “AIDS” and “PK.” When we watch TV, we frequently hear words like “NBA” or “PM2.5.” When we speak, we automatically use words like “OUT” or “Bye-bye.” English words and expressions like these are getting popular. They have already become part of our daily language. And 239 English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.
The inclusion has started a heated discussion. A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words, which, they think, goes against Chinese language policies. They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also concerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language. However, others are in
favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language. They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily life.
[写作内容]
1. 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要;
2. 用约 120 个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:
(1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇;
(2)用 2- 3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。
[写作要求]
1. 可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据;
2. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;
3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4. 不必写标题。
[评分标准]
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【答案】
支持:
Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese includes 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.
Generally, I am in favour of the inclusion. As the number of English learners is on the rise, it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. Besides, it is, on some occasions, more convenient to use English words. Most people nowadays use “IT” instead of its translation “xinxi jishu.” In our global village, we can see that it’s not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages. In English, there are many words borrowed from Latin, French, or even Chinese. In fact, Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages, say, “ganbu” or “minzhu” from Japanese.
So, it’s safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication.
反对:
With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: “For” and “Against.”
I tend to take the “Against” side for two reasons. Firstly, this inclusion has actually polluted our mother tongue. Sooner or later, many English accents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones. And, rules don’t tell us how to pronounce such English-turned Chinese words as “wifi” and “Out” in a Chinese way! Secondly, such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated against those with little knowledge of English. Just for one illustration, while college students take “Bye-bye” for granted when parting from each other, it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone who is used to “zaijian.”
In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.
【亮点说明】范文用了一些词组：如in favour of, on some occasions, it’s not uncommon for …, divide into, give rise to, take … for granted, be used to等等。注重句子的连接：如Besides, or, Firstly, Secondly, and, while, not only … but also …，句型上也是多变：With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: “For” and “Against.”这句话用了with的复合结构和非谓语动词作状语，In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people这句话运用了倒装结构等等。
考点：考查议论文
【2014·广东卷】写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节 基础习作
你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。
［写作内容］
请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：
人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯（Richard Avis）
出生日期：1974年12月1日
时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人
目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义
相关信息：
· 借助当地媒体寻找
· 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家
· 职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等
· 计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人
· 打算根据此经历写一本书
＊ 同年同月同日生的人：time twin
［写作要求］
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
［评分标准］
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
【答案】
Richard Avis, a British, was born on December 1st, 1974. In order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, Richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.
【亮点说明】短文用了短语，增加了文章的色彩，如：in order to do sth; With the help of sb; intend to do sth等；文章用了whom
引导的定语从句，把那么多的信息放在了一个句子里来表达，可见写作的功底；增加了文章的亮点。
考点：人物报道类作文。
第二节 读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）
阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.
The money was all my savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.
Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.
[写作内容]
1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 用约120个词就Miss McCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1） 你如何看待她的捐助行为；
（2） 你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响；
（3） 如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。
[写作要求]
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
【答案】
Oseola McCarty, an ordinary worker with a thrifty lifestyle, donated a great deal of money to a university, which aroused public attention and earned her widespread social recognition. In return, she received a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment.
Virtuous and warm-hearted, the lady concerned has donated a considerable amount of saving to help college students struggling with financial difficulties, thereby motivating people at any other corner of the world to participate in this affectionate activity.
From where I stand, not only will the lady’s generosity paint a very brilliant blue print for the future of those students in want of money, but also it will rekindle their faith in life by convincing them that their life goal is elevating and worth trying.
Given the choice, I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living condition. Convincing arguments as follows can be made to support my stance. For one thing, generous and selfless dedication may take indispensable assistance to them, especially for the time when they are confronted with pain and sorrow,twists and turns.For another,just as an Indian old saying goes, roses in her hand; flavor in mine. That is to say,great satisfaction would step slowly and gracefully in to the mercy-producers’ souls as well.
To bring as many angel-like smiles as possible to our society, we should practice more beneficial performance by leading a thrifty life.
【亮点说明】短文用了短语和谚语，增加了文章的色彩，如：a great deal of；arouse public attention；make donations to；roses in her hand;flavor in mine等；还用了一些过渡词或句子；如：For one thing，For another；That is to say等；使短文读起来流畅自然。还用了一些关系词，如：which，who及when引导的定语从句，使句子结构复杂，并且用了not only…but also引导的倒装句，增加了作文的亮点。
考点：考查议论文。
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