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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
(2017·11浙江)
A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprise and amusements,all because of my mother—loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends.Who knew if we’d ever see them again?Finally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨) while I go,and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey,where are the kids?” “What?! Oh,Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city,but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there?David and I became nervous.To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections(反对).If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep,Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jack,a clerk at the local bank,was wandering alone on the street.It was a cold,silent winter night.His mind was on his wife Linda,who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed,waiting for more money for her operation.Jack had sold everything he had,and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the pople and banks he could.But the real world is cruel.A large amount of money was still needed.To Jack,it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left,”Jack said to himself.Then he went to the bank,his workplace,again.For several days,he observed the bank and planned a theft.Then next day,he went to work as usual.Everything seemed normal:he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did.But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work,instead of the small one he always carried.At 5:00 pm,the bank closed,and the clerks and the guards had all gone home.However,at that moment,Jack was in the bathroom,and the guards didn’t notice him,of course.When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark,Jack came out from the bathroom.He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase.He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days.Using a special key and some other tools,he then easily opened the doors of the safes.The bank’s security system wasn’t very good,which allowed Jack to take a lot of money.Several minutes later,Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.
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注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring.
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But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.
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写作提升练(四) 读后续写
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.But then we were half an hour away from the hotel,where the tent was left behind.Dad recommended buying a new one,while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it,saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly,so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally,we got back the tent and hit the road again.If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded,it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.
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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.One day,towards evening,we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain.David and I helped Dad put up the tent,and Mom was busy preparing supper.When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains,the tent was set up and the meal was ready.Sitting around the camp fire,we talked and laughed.Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s face.
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After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring.The police arrived at the bank very quickly,only to find no one there.The next day was a really special day for the town,which was filled with newspapers and TV reporters covering the strange theft.The clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case,of course,including Jack.The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible,even though no clues had been found yet.
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But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position.At last,with enough money for her operation,Jack’s wife was saved.However,Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank.He could not forget what he had done to the old man.His guilt deepened as time went by.Finally,he turned himself into the police and accepted his punishment.
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