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专题限时集训(二十九) 短文改错(Ⅳ)
(对应学生用书第144页)
A
(2017·汕头市教学质量监测)Friendship is very important to everyone，especially to me.Now，I would like to describe one of my best friends whose name are Petou.The first reason why I consider him as my best friend is because he has a very warm personality.
He always smile politely at me, make me absolutely delighted when I meet him.What's more，honest is his good manner—he never lies me.In addition，he is the caring and compassionate friend.He's willing to help me whenever I have in trouble.
The second reason is that Petou is really excellently.He excels at every subject，which makes me admire him very much.
To summarize，Petou has a very good personality.Besides，he has a great ability to help other friends and him.I really like him.
【答案】
Friendship is very important to everyone，especially to me.Now，I would like to describe one of my best friends whose name Petou.The first reason why I consider him as my best friend is he has a very warm personality.
He always politely at me， me absolutely delighted when I meet him.What's more， is his good manner—he never lies me.In addition，he is caring and compassionate friend.He's willing to help me whenever I have trouble.
The second reason is that Petou is really .He excels at every subject，which makes me admire him very much.
To summarize，Petou has a very good personality.Besides，he has a great ability to help other friends and .I really like him.
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第一处：are→is。考查主谓一致。whose引导的定语从句的先行词是代词“one”，因此谓语动词应该用单数。
第二处：because→that。考查名词性从句。主语为名词reason，表语从句中的连接词要用that。
第三处：smile→smiles。考查动词时态和主谓一致。由后文“which makes me”可知，主句应用一般现在时；主语为第三人称单数，谓语动词应该用单数。
第四处：make→making。考查非谓语动词。make与前面的谓语动词之间无连词，故此处应用现在分词短语作结果状语。
第五处：honest→honesty。考查名词。形容词不能作主语，应该用名词。
第六处：lies后加to。考查固定用法。lie to sb.意为“对某人说谎”。
第七处：the→a。考查冠词。此处表示他是一个热心并且有同情心的人，表示泛指，应该用不定冠词。
第八处：删除in。考查介词。句意：无论何时我有困难，他都愿意帮助我。have trouble意为“有困难”，in多余。
第九处：excellently→excellent。考查形容词。作is的表语应该用形容词。
第十处：him→me。考查代词。Petou能帮助别人也能帮助我。
B
(2017·湖南省部分重点中学考前演练)I usually go to school by bike.And this morning I went on foot.On the way to school，I happen to witness an accident.A middleaged woman was knocked down by a car while crosses the street.Seeing that was happening on the scene，I made rush for the woman to help.One passerby got out of his cellphone and called the police.I helped to carry the woman to safe and dress her wound. Around ten minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took him to hospital.I continued my way to school，feeling happily that I could offer some help in time.
【答案】
I usually go to school by bike. this morning I went on foot.On the way to school，I to witness an accident.A middleaged woman was knocked down
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by a car while the street.Seeing was happening on the scene，I made rush for the woman to help.One passerby got out his cellphone and called the police.I helped to carry the woman to and dress her wound. Around ten minutes ， an ambulance arrived and took to hospital.I continued my way to school，feeling that I could offer some help in time.
第一处：And→But。考查连词。前后句之间是转折关系，故用But。
第二处：happen→happened。考查时态。根据上文中的“I went on foot”可知，此处描述的是发生在过去的事情，应该用一般过去时。
第三处：crosses→crossing。考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，cross与A middleaged woman之间是逻辑上的主谓关系，故应用现在分词形式。
第四处：that→what。考查名词性从句。这里指“看到现场发生的事情”。此处在句中引导宾语从句，且在从句中作主语，表示“……的事情”，故用what。
第五处：rush前加a。考查冠词。此处指作者冲向那位女士以提供帮助。make a rush for“冲向，奔向”是固定搭配。
第六处：删除out后的of。考查固定搭配。一位路人拿出他的手机并给警察打了电话。get“取来，拿来”，是及物动词，其后可直接接宾语；out在此为副词。而get out of sth.意为“离开(某地)，摆脱，放弃”，显然不符合此处的语境。故of多余。
第七处：safe→safety。考查名词。此处充当介词的宾语，应该用名词形式。safety“安全的地方”。
第八处：late→later。考查副词。虽然late和later都可用作副词，但前者表示“迟，晚”，后者表示“后来，随后”。根据句意可知，应将late改为later。
第九处：him→her。考查代词。此处指的是救护车将那个受伤的女士带去了医院，故应用her。
第十处：happily→happy。考查形容词。feel是系动词，其后应用形容词作表语。
C 【导学号：52384093】
(2017·武汉市调研测试)How time flies! I had hardly had time to enjoy the
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warmth of my home while it's time go back to school.This winter I spend ten days studying maths，chemistry and physics，none of which was easily for me.
And I still had some fun during the Spring Festival.I had attended my uncle's wedding and my new aunt was very beautiful.To my disappoint，I didn't get many lucky money as I had expected.I also went to the cinema with several classmates.We played jokes on each other and had a big meal in a restaurant calling “Red Lobster”．The food there was very delicious and we all really enjoyed myself.
【答案】
How time flies! I had hardly had time to enjoy the warmth of my home it's time go back to school.This winter I ten days studying maths，chemistry and physics，none of which was for me.
I still had some fun during the Spring Festival.I attended my uncle's wedding and my new aunt was very beautiful.To my ，I didn't get lucky money as I had expected.I also went to the cinema with several classmates.We played jokes on each other and had a big meal in a restaurant “Red Lobster”．The food there was very delicious and we all really enjoyed .
D
(2017·太原市模拟试题二)Here is a funny story.One day three mouse said proudly to each other that they each could drink more wine，so they decided to have a drinking contest.At last they both felt dizzy.One suggested，“Will anybody go to the wine cellar to fetch another bottle of wine？” The first stood up and down then fell to the ground.The other two laughed and said，“He was drinking and couldn't walk.” The second stood up.He just made several steps and couldn't help thrown up.The third laughed hardly and then it was their turn. He stood up and made one step，two steps...Nothing is wrong.He went straight to the wine cellar but took a bottle of
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wine.He stood there for while，turned back and said excitedly，“Ha ha，where is the cat now？”
【答案】
Here is a funny story.One day three said proudly to each other that they each could drink more wine，so they decided to have a drinking contest.At last they felt dizzy.One suggested，“Will anybody go to the wine cellar to fetch another bottle of wine？” The first stood up and then fell to the ground.The other two laughed and said，“He was and couldn't walk.” The second stood up.He just made several steps and couldn't help up.The third laughed and then it was turn. He stood up and made one step，two steps...Nothing wrong.He went straight to the wine cellar took a bottle of wine.He stood there for while，turned back and said excitedly，“Ha ha，where is the cat now？”
E 【导学号：52384094】
(2017·湖北省七市教科研协作体联考)I have met many teachers since I begin my schooling.Of all my teachers，Mrs.Green is the one who impresses me most.Though she is 50，she looks very young at her age.Comparing with other teachers，Mrs.Green pays more attention to her way of teaching.She tries various ways to make her class lively and interestingly.In her opinion，we will not only know “what” but also understand “why”. So instead of giving us answer immediately，she encourages us to think carefully every time when she puts forward questions.With her help, we have learned how to analyze and settled problems.What the amazing world of “why” she leads us! She is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.
【答案】
I have met many teachers since I my schooling.Of all my teachers
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，Mrs.Green is the one who impresses me most.Though she is 50，she looks very young her age. with other teachers，Mrs.Green pays more attention to her way of teaching.She tries various ways to make her class lively and .In her opinion，we will not only know “what” but also understand “why”. So instead of giving us immediately，she encourages us to think carefully every time she puts forward questions.With her help, we have learned how to analyze and problems.What amazing world of “why” she leads us ! She is such a learned person that we all admire very much.
F
(2017·安徽省百所重点高中第二次模拟)It's not the people you came across in your daily life who will stand by you in time of a need.It's your family who will but it's important to know that.It happens such often that we end up take our parents for granted.We hurt them many cases and they are treated with disrespect for not understanding them. It's necessary to understand the fact that there is always different in opinions across two generations.But what really matters is the unconditionally love and care that they hold for us，that I believe is truly valuable.
【答案】
It's not the people you across in your daily life who will stand by you in time of need.It's your family who will it's important to know that.It happens often that we end up our parents for granted.We hurt them many cases and they are treated with disrespect for not understanding . It's necessary to understand the fact that there is always in opinions across two generations.But what really matters is the love and care that they hold for
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us， I believe is truly valuable.
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