专题限时集训(三十一) 概要写作(Ⅱ)
A
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These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush.It appears that
people have got used to being in a hurry.However,it's better for people to take their
time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.
The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the
possibility of doing wrong in a rush.When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry,
they can't make a sound decision and will probably regret later.As the saying goes ,
“Haste makes waste.”We should think carefully before making a decision and do our
work less quickly.We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.
Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.For example,
taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane.However,
taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new
friends.Besides,it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way.On
the contrary,being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.
Finally,slower life pace provides better health conditions for us.As is known to all,
taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress.People think if they are not
in a hurry,they will become a loser and that annoys them.But being in a hurry can hurt
people both physically and mentally.According to some studies , people who have a
slower pace suffer fewer diseases,tend to be happier and live much longer than those
whose life is tense,even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter.
In short , working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our
society more advanced.Yet,much stress can't bring enjoyment,friends and health,
which are much more important than money and other material advantages.Therefore,
take your time and live your life at a slower pace.
【参考范文】
It's suggested we'd better slow down rather than hurry whether in life or work.(要
点 1)There are mainly three reasons for it,among which one is that we are more likely
to make wrong decisions if in a hurry.(要点 2)Besides,people will better enioy their life
if they can slow down.(要点 3)Also,better health conditions result from a slow life.(要
点 4)In brief , being stressed will not make you happy and healthy or bring you
friendship.Thus,slow down and enjoy your life.(要点 5)
B (2019·浙江宁波九校联考)
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Speed is very important in avalanche(雪崩) rescues.There will be narrow chances
to escape if a skier is buried for 30 minutes or more.Now that 30 minutes can mean the
difference between life and death for a skier lost on a snowy mountain,most people
would depend on lifesaving dogs.
Noble works as a rescue team member in a vacation land,California.He tells us,
“Dogs run fastest when an accident happens.”His partner Wylee,a lifesaving dog,
can search an accident scene the size of a football field.It only needs 5 to 10
minutes.However,5 rescue team members have to spend a couple of hours in the same
area.
Apart from its excellent speed,Noble chooses Wylee as his partner partly because
it weighs only about half what other kinds of dogs weigh.Rescue team members have to
carry their dogs to search sites in addition to carrying 60pound backpacks with food,
water and other equipment.The dogs need the lift so that don't get tired before they start
working.
There aren't adequate data on how often dogs take part in avalanche searches or
how often they are able to help local people in danger.But the dogs don't save that many
people.That's because there aren't that many to save.A quarter of people in danger die
from serious injuries before the snow stops moving.Of those buried who weren't killed
by injuries,half die within 20 minutes.If there is a chance of rescue,though,the dogs also cut search time for the remains.
Erica Mueller , a famous director , wanted to see how the life saving dogs
worked,so she volunteered to spend part of an hour in a roomy snow cave waiting to be
found.She was armed with a radio and was wearing several layers to stay warm.After
being rescued by Wylee,she said,“I can't talk like a survivor,but it was definitely a
cool way to see how well trained those dogs are.”
【参考范文】
Lifesaving dogs are of vital importance and help in avalanche rescues due to their
excellent speed.(要点 1)In addition,another advantage of lifesaving dogs is their light
weight.( 要 点 2)Nonetheless , the number of people rescued was not large owing to
serious injuries and limited time.(要点 3)However,through an experiment,a famous
director Erica Mueller,spoke highly of the lifesaving dogs in avalanche rescues.(要点 4)