2020届高考英语书面表达“概要写作”高三模拟练习（二）写作指导与解读（含范文）

2020 届高考英语书面表达“概要写作”高三模拟练习（二） 写作指导与解读 一、概写原题 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。US Psychotherapist (精神治疗师)Virginia Satir (1916-1988) once said: "We need four hugs a day for survival. We need eight hugs a day for maintenance. We need 12 hugs a day for growth." She believed that hugging was necessary ad important. Researchers have found scientific evidence that backs up her beliefs. According to a recent study published in the journal Psychological Science, receiving a hug can reduce stress and help protect us from illness. In the study, researchers from Carnegie Mellon University (CMU) in the US invited 404 healthy adults to participate in interviews about how often they experienced conflicts in their daily lives, as well as how many hugs they received within a period of two weeks. These participants were intentionally exposed to cold viruses during the interview. According to the research, people who received hugs on the same days when they experienced conflicts tended to report fewer negative feelings during the following days. They have also found that people who received hugs were less stressed out. The physical contact that we get through hugging, especially loved ones, is a "marker of intimacy (亲密) and helps generate the feeling that others are there to help in the face of adversity (困境)", according to Scientific American. People feel more comfortable and relaxed after hugging. The researchers have also found that the more hugs people get, the less likely they are to catch colds, Science Daily noted. When people receive hugs, they release more oxytocin (催产素), which is also known as the "love hormone". According to the researchers, this hormone can decrease one's heart rate and lower blood pressure. This can put people into a state of emotional well-being. When people are in this state, their immune systems become stronger. Of course, huggingis not the only way to comfort others. But physical contact like hugging can comfort people without "making any judgments (about right or wrong)", Michael Murphy from CMU told Time. 二、概写步骤 第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，理清各段落之间的逻辑关系，提取全文中心 词，尤其是名词与动词。 第二步：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与名词为主，涵盖段 落全部要点。 第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转述或合成句子。可用 中文概括出段落大意，然后用一句话翻译出来(合理利用原词)。 第四步：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、句式的多样、语法 是否正确以及字数的多少等。 第五步：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。 三、分段概括 关键词句已在原文标出，结合理解，用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。❶最近的一项研究表明，拥抱对缓解压力和预防疾病极为重要。 A recent study demonstrated that hugging is crucial to stress relief and disease prevention. ❷研究主要针对拥抱次数与冲突发生次数之间的联系。 It mainly focused on the association between the number of hugs and the frequency of conflicts. ❸结果表明，那些在冲突后有过拥抱的人，消极情绪较少，压力较小，因此感到比 较放松。 The findings showed that those who get hugs after conflicts have fewer negative emotions and less stress, thereby feeling more relaxed. ❹此外，拥抱可以间接地增强免疫系统，这对健康有好处。 Additionally, hugging indirectly contributes to stronger immune systems, which does good to health. ❺除了拥抱，类似的身体接触也能产生同样的效果。 Besides hugging, similar physical contact can also produce the same effect. 四、下水范文Arecent study demonstrated that hugging is crucial to stress relief and disease prevention.It mainly focused on the association between the number of hugs and the frequency of conflicts.The findings showed that those who get hugs after conflicts have fewer negative emotions and less stress, thereby feeling more relaxed.Additionally, hugging indirectly contributes to stronger immune systems, which does good to health.Besides hugging, similar physical contact can also produce the same effect.【76 字】 参考范文：