【二轮专题练】（五）改错专项
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
A
How does the disease present? Well, from what is known so far, there can be the number of
symptoms range from mild to severe. There can be fever and respiratory symptoms such as cough
and short of breath. In more severe case, there’s been pneumonia (肺炎), kidney failure (肾衰竭),
and death. The mortality rate (死亡率) was not known yet.
How can we tell if someone is infected or not? The infection can be diagnosed (诊断) by a
test calling PCR or Polymerase Chain Reaction (聚合酶链反应). This test identifies the virus
basing on its genetic fingerprint. There is current no specific medication for the virus and
treatment is supportive care. There’s no vaccine ( 疫 苗 ) to protect the virus. Treatment and
vaccines are in development.
B
Sticking to a vegan diet might sound difficult, especial with many popular dishes containing
meat or other animal products. Yet in recent years, veganism has become one of the
fastest-growing lifestyle trend in the world. According to Huff Post, more than 3 million people in the United States are vegans. In the UK, about 542,000 people choose veganism over the past
decade.
What is driving this growth in veganism? One reason may be that people want to protect the
environment. Produce meat and dairy products is known to be stressful for the environment.
According to a 2013 study by the UN Food and Agriculture Organization, global meat
manufacturing causes about 18 percent of the world’s greenhouse gas emissions. This figure is
high than all the world’s cars, trains and planes combined. According to BBC News, another
reason is why many of today’s young people believe it’s wrong to kill animals for food.
For many people, veganism simply means eating no meat, cheese or eggs, and going
animal-free also applies to fashion and manufacturing. For example, leather is used to make shoes
and clothing. Every year more than a billion animals, from cows to snakes, killed to make leather
products from their skins. Now, many brands are looking other materials. So, if you’re interested
in protecting animals and to saving the environment, you might want to give veganism a try.
C
When I was young, I didn’t know what friendship. When I stayed with my friends, a warm
feeling came out of the bottom from my heart. Now I have grown up and got many friend. And I
have been tasted the pleasant feeling of friendship. When I am happy, they are also happy and
shared the happiness with me. When I make progress, they will be very exciting. Instead, when
I’m in a difficult situation, they will offer help to me. So friendship is never an one-way ticket. If
we want to get them, we must treat others well at first. We should always be ready to help others,
especially that they are in difficult situations.
D
I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back my childhood experiences, I
think that three reasons might explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go near the water when I was a child, for my mother had a unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that
I was taught to see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes became bad when I was five.
If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see anything, or this increased my fear. The worst
part of my experience is that as a child I saw a neighbor drowning. After then I have been more
frightened.
E
Get a good education is more important today than ever before. In Canada mostly children
attend public schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments through tax income.
Students in Canada taught in English and in French. The rest of Canadian children attend private
schools, that are supported mainly by fees paying by parents. In law, the children must attend the
school from 5 to 16. There is several different levels in the Canadian education system. The first
was called Elementary Schools, which include kindergartens through grade 7 or 8.
F
A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took part at a college course in French.
Since I can speak German well in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying
another language. In the first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, in which
he would say one word or two in French, and each student would do their best to copy. When he
got to me, he kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him what. “I find it great funs.
It’s the first time I’ve heard an American speak French with a German accent,” he explained it.
G
Dear Linda,
I am very sorry to hear that you are bad ill in hospital. Are you getting better now? Please don’t worry about my illness. All you should do now is to have good rest and follow
the doctor’s advices. At present, we are learning some new lessons. They aren’t very difficult, but
you don’t need to worry about your study. When you got back to school, we are all willingly to
help you with those missing lessons at the weekend. You will not miss on the final exam. Our
head teacher, together with our class, are going to the hospital to seeing you next Wednesday.
I hope you will recover soon. Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
H
I live in a typical Chinese family of four generations lived together under same roof.
Everyone has funs with each other here. Every night, we will have dinner together, talking or
laughing around the dinner table so that all the worries of the day will be swept away. At
weekends, Dad will take Grandpa, that likes outdoor activities a lot, to the countryside to fish.
Mom and Grandma will cook delicious food for ourselves. When the weather is fine, I will push
my 95-year-old great grandmother in a wheelchair to sunbathe in the yard. My family is such
harmonious that I have been grown up into a person with love and responsibility. I will definite
teach what I had already learned to my future children.
参考答案
A
1.第一段第 2 句：the 改为 a 2.第一段第 2 句：range 改为 ranging
3.第一段第 3 句：short 改为 shortness
4.第一段第 4 句：case 改为 cases
5.第一段第 5 句：was 改为 is
6.第二段第 1 句：if 改为 whether
7.第二段第 2 句：calling 改为 called
8.第二段第 3 句：basing 改为 based
9.第二段第 4 句：current 改为 currently
10.第二段第 5 句：protect 后面加 against
B
1.第一段第 1 句：especial 改为 especially
2.第一段第 2 句：trend 改为 trends
3.第一段第 4 句：choose 改为 have chosen
4.第二段第 3 句：Produce 改为 Producing
5.第二段第 5 句：high 改为 higher
6.第二段第 6 句：why 改为 that
7.第三段第 1 句：第一个 and 改为 but
8.第三段第 3 句：killed 改为 are killed
9.第三段第 4 句：在 are looking 后增添 for
10.第三段第 5 句：删掉 to saving the environment 中的 to
C
1.第一句：在 friendship 后加 was
2.第二句：from 改为 of 3.第三句：friend 改为 friends
4.第四句：删去 been
5.第五句：shared 改为 share
6.第六句：exciting 改为 excited
7.第八句：So 改为 But
8.第八句：an 改为 a
9.第九句：them 改为 it
10.第十句：that 改为 when
D
1.第二句：Look 改为 Looking
2.第二句：my 前面加 on / upon
3.第三句：allow 改为 allowed
4.第三句：第二个 a 改为 an
5.第四句：删掉 that
6.第四句：danger 改为 dangerous
7.第六句：glass 改为 glasses
8.第六句：or 改为 so
9.第七句：drowning 改为 drowned
10.第八句：After 改为 Since
E
1.第一句：Get 改为 Getting
2.第二句：mostly 改为 most
3.第三句：found 改为 founded 4.第四句：在 taught 之前加 are
5.第五句：that 改为 which
6.第五句：paying 改为 paid
7.第六句：In 改为 By
8.第六句：删掉 school 前面的 the
9.第七句：is 改为 are
10.第八句：was 改为 is
F
1.第一句：returning 后加 to
2.第一句：took part at 改为 took part in
3.第二句：can 改为 could
4.第二句：interested 改为 interesting
5.第三句：one word or two 改为 a word or two
6.第三句：their 改为 his
7.第四句：去掉 say 之前的 to
8.第四句：what 改为 why
9.第五句：funs 改为 fun
10.第五句：去掉 explained 后面的 it
G
1.第一段第一句：bad 改为 badly
2.第二段第一句：my 改为 your
3.第二段第二句：good 前加 a
4.第二段第二句：advices 改为 advice 5.第二段第四句：but 改为 and / so
6.第二段第五句：got 改为 get
7.第二段第五句：willingly 改为 willing
8.第二段第六句：删除 on
9.第二段第七句：are 改为 is
10.第二段第七句：seeing 改为 see
H
1.第一句：lived 改为 living
2.第一句：under 后加 the
3.第二句：funs 改为 fun
4.第三句：or 改为 and
5.第四句：that 改为 who
6.第五句：ourselves 改为 us
7.第七句：such 改为 so
8.第七句：删掉 I have been grown up 中的 been
9.第八句：definite 改为 definitely
10.第八句：had 改为 have
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