05 建议信
写作模板
题型特点
建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出的建议和忠告。信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的内容，
提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
写作模板①
Dear ________(收信人)，
I’m happy to receive your letter for my advice with regard to ________( 事 由 ).Here are my
suggestions for you.
Personally，I ________(个人看法).Firstly，it is important to ________(第 1 条建议).________(第
1 条建议的理由).Secondly，it also helps if you ________(第 2 条建议).________(第 2 条建议的理
由).Besides，it would be a good idea to ________(第 3 条建议).I’m sure that ________(第 3 条建议
的理由).That’s why I think ________(回扣个人看法).
I hope you will find these proposals useful，and...Good luck with your ________(祝愿).
Yours sincerely，
________(写信人)
开头：
简要陈述事由。如果写给某个组织或机构，要进行简单的自我介绍，注意语气要诚恳，有礼貌。
主体：
提出具体建议，并详细说明理由。结尾：
希望建议得到采纳并祝愿。
写作模板②
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive
suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further
details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板③
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主
题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to
___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议).
I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
1. 建议信写作注意事项
建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。2. 写作方法
① 首段：
a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；
b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：
a. 提出具体建议；
b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；
c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
3. 写作流程图
说明写信目的
介绍详情、说明原因
提出建议
提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
必备佳句
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps
the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following
suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients
（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions
here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few
suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English
well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their
speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐 322 路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite
you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
套语：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never
say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your
studies/work！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
典 例 剖 析典例 01
（2018·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文
化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于 50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim
对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特
色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化
的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。
【满分范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my
warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in
Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in
Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of
the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language
environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day
comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
典例 02
（2017·北京卷）你的英国朋友 Jim 所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之
行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim 来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于 50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，
要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照
一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本
文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让 他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要
注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理
运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【范文赏析】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the
tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot
about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many
well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
典例 02
学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏
目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子
邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：
1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作指导】
这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴，这篇作文要求就校英语报改版是事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表
达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容： 1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由； 2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由，根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在写作过程中要确定切题且符
合英语写作逻辑的篇章结构。确立邮件文体之后，要弄清要点，围绕要点展开，条理要清晰，理由要充分，
关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，在文章中尽可能多
地使用高大上的词汇，遵循短语优先原则在配以特殊句型和复合句的应用，让文章更上档次。
【范文赏析】
Dear Editor,
I’ve learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new
one. I’m writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.
Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students’ interest and have positive effects
on their study and life.
Compared to the entertainment, I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is
more important. The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing
goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. In addition, the
progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study
and the establishment of philosophy of life.
Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand, it
covers one’s career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to one’s career success
in the future.
What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant
touch to the improved version of our school English Post.
Yours sincerely,
Cheng Fei
典例 03
为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了＂HEART-TO-HEART＂专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑
Jamie，收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常
的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：
1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2. 提出建议并说明理由。注意：
1. 词数 120 左右；
2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪
Hi Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.
Yours,
Jamie
【写作指导】
这是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求按照 Worried 写的求助信写一封回信，根据信中提到的困扰表示理解和
安慰，提出建议并给出理由。所以考生在写作的时候，要围绕来信的问题一一给予解答。但是光翻译要点
肯定不行，还要求考生自己拓展发挥，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强
调句、倒装句等，让文章更上档次。也要注意人称、时态、语态和常见的语法问题，同时在列举建议和理
由的时候要使用合适的连接词，如：First，Second，Besides, What’s more 等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很
流畅。
【范文赏析】
Hi Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of
those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to
control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without
hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an
effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie
【亮点说明】
所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：a good way of……的好方法，let out 释放，get rid of 消除，carry
on 继续进行，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the
moment. 这句话用了宾语从句，The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be
wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. 这句话用了表语从句和时间状语从句，The important thing is to
learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. 这句话用了不定式作表语和 so
that 引导的结果状语从句，talk to someone you trust about how you feel 这句话用了定语从句。文章还使用了
合适的连接词 First, Second, And third 使文章很连贯。
典例 04
学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目(时
尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表
达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：
1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
【写作指导】
这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴，这篇作文要求就校英语报改版是事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表
达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理
由，根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在确立邮件文体之后，要弄清要
点，围绕要点展开，条理要清晰，理由要充分，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意人称、时态、语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，在文章中尽可能多地使用高大上的词汇，遵循短语优先原则，再配以特殊
句型和复合句的应用，让文章更上档次。
【范文赏析】
Dear Editor,
I’ve learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new
one. I’m writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.
Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students’ interest and have positive effects
on their study and life.
Compared to the entertainment, I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is
more important. The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing
goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. In addition, the
progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study
and the establishment of philosophy of life.
Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post. On the one hand, it
covers one’s career development a great deal. On the other hand, it makes a great difference to one’s career success
in the future.
What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant
touch to the improved version of our school English Post.
Yours sincerely,
Cheng Fei
【亮点说明】
所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组： share with 和……分享，needless to say 不必说，according to 根
据，have positive effects on 对……有积极的影响，in turn 反之，take… into account 将……考虑在内，makes a
great difference to 对……有很大的影响，in the hope that 希望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：Compared to the
entertainment, I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important. 这句
话用了过去分词和同位语从句，The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of
health means kissing goodbye to life. 这句话用了表语从句和 while 表示对比的用法，the progress in acquiring
cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment
of philosophy of life.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句，What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. 这句话用了主语从句。范文中还使用了 In addition, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other hand 这样的关联
词，使文章更加连贯。
必背范文
Writting1
假定你是李华，你的好朋友 Dickon 就如何提高写作水平征求你的意见。你给他写了一封信，给出了两个建
议：一个是建议他学好习惯用语和句子结构并用他们造句；另一个是建议他多阅读和背诵一些好文章。
注意：
1）词数 100 左右，
2）为使行文连贯，可以适当增加内容；
3）信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Dickon,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给你的好友 Dickon 写一封建议信，就如何提高写作水平，谈
谈你的意见。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：一个是建议他学好惯用语和句子结构，并
用它们造句；另一个是建议他多阅读和背诵一些好文章。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子，为文章增添
色彩。
【范文】
Dear Dickon,
I have received your letter and I'm glad to give you some suggestions. I think the most important thing is not
to be disappointed. Many students find it difficult to write well. In my opinion, if you want to improve your
writing, you can do the following things: First, Do some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them. Second, read as much as possible. There are
many things that cannot be learned at a time. You must read them in books for many times. Then you will be
able to use them correctly. So , in order to write well, you must learn to eat too much. Finally, You'd better
recite some good phrases.
Good luck to you in your writing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，使句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高
级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：I think the most important
thing is not to be disappointed. 运用了宾语从句; If you want to improve your writing, You can do the
following things: 运用了条件状语从句; Do some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list
of them and then try to make some sentences with them. 运用了祈使句; There are many things that cannot
be learned at a time. 运用了定语从句。
Writting2
假设你是李梅，你的好朋友苏珊前不久随父母去美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到孤
独。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封建议信。
⑴多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独。
⑵学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会。
⑶空余时间多去旅游，使自己的生活更加有趣。
词数：100 个左右；可适当增加细节。
Dear Susan,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Mei
【写作指导】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李梅的身份给不久前随父母去美国的好友苏珊写一封信，对于他在美国
的生活学习不顺心的状态，给她一些建议。成文时应注意以下几点：一、内容完整，陈述写信背景以及完
整表达给苏珊的建议。二、人称使用恰当。三、时态：一般现在时为主。四、恰当使用一些连词和插入语，
使文章自然流畅。五、恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们前面上面
提到的注意点，列出提纲：第 1 部分：写作目的（知道他在美国生活学习不顺心很难过，给她鼓励）；第 2
部分：给她建议（用 Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 使表达流畅）；表达期待（给她鼓励，告诉她一切都会好起
来的）。
【范文】
Dear Susan,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America, but this situation can
be easily changed if you take my advice.
Firstly, why not make some new friends? They can help you to know more about America, and friendship
can help you to forget your loneliness. Secondly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more
opportunity to communicate with others. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you travel a lot in your spare time,
which will make your life more interesting and colorful as well as broaden your horizons. By doing this, you will
be happy with your new life soon.
I hope you will find this suggestion will be of great help to you.
Yours,
Li Mei
【亮点点击】
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句子结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高
级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：but this situation can be
easily changed if you take my advice. 运用了条件状语从句；you should work hard at English, which can give
you more opportunity to communicate with others.运用了非限制性定语从句；I hope you will find this
suggestion will be of great help to you. 运用了宾语从句。
Writting3
最近，不少动物园都发生了动物袭击游客的事件，原因是游客惹恼动物。假设你是李华，请你就这一问题
给某报社写一封建议信，呼吁人们在动物园玩时学会保护动物。要点如下：
1）没有受到威胁，大多数动物不会主动攻击人；
2）不要喂食动物或惹怒动物；
注意：(1)可根据内容需要适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(2)词数：100 左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：袭击 attack；惹恼 disturb
Dear sir or madam,
I'm writing to appeal to the visitors in the zoo to behave themselves there.
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给某报社，就“最近不少动物园发生了动物袭击游客的世界，
原因是游客惹恼了动物”写一封建议信，写作要点已经给出。属于提纲类作文。内容包括：一、没有受到威
胁，大多数动物不会主动攻击人；二、不要喂食动物或惹恼动物。考生写作时要根据其提示情景或词语，
按照一定逻辑关系来写，准确运用句子的时态语态和人称，同时注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的
亮点。
【范文】
Dear sir or madam,
I'm writing to appeal to the visitors in the zoo to behave themselves there.
Recently, there are often reports in the newspaper that people got hurt by the animals in the zoo. As we all
know, some animals won’t attack people unless they feel threatened. In most cases, people are hurt by animals
when people are trying to disturb or feed them. Therefore, people are responsible for these incidents because they don't know how to get on with animals. It's obviously wrong that people make these animals angry or get too close
to them or feed them without permission.
I do hope people can keep in mind that they should obey the rules while in the zoo.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成
分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好的完成了写作任务。例如：there are often reports in the newspaper that people
got hurt by the animals in the zoo. 运用了同位语从句；As we all know, some animals won’t attack people
unless they feel threatened. 运用了定语从句和同位语从句；people are hurt by animals when people are
trying to disturb or feed them. 运用了时间状语从句；people are responsible for these incidents because they
don't know how to get on with animals. 运用了原因状语从句; It's obviously wrong that people make these
animals angry or get too close to them or feed them without permission. 运用了主语从句。
Writting4
假如你是某校高二学生李华。你的英国笔友 Helen 最近写信向你倾诉她的烦恼。得知她最近因学习压力大开
始失眠，学习效率也降低后，你决定给她一些建议加以鼓励。请你根据以下要点提示用英文回信：
turn to your close friends for help…
keep a positive attitude …
take part in sports…
listen to music…
注意：1).开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2).可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3).词数 100 左右。
Dear Helen,
I was very glad to receive your letter. ______________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
With best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本题是一篇英文信，要求考生以李华的身份给美国笔友 Helen 写一封信件，做她的烦恼，给她一些建议加以
鼓励。写作时注意以下几点：一、弄清提示所提供的所有信息，要点包括：遇到的烦恼；给出建议；鼓励
她。二、提纲是文章的总框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析，构思和想象要。依据提示情景或词语，按照
一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序来写。三、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文
章的亮点。
【范文】
Dear Helen,
I was very glad to receive your letter. At the same time, I felt sad to hear that you were suffering in your
studies. Here I'd like to share some advice with you on how to study efficiently.
Firstly, you can talk with some close friends about your problems and ask them for help. This is an important
way to deal with your problems directly. Secondly, try to study in a positive way, as this will decrease your
pressure, making studying an easy job. Thirdly, spend time doing exercise, which can not only build up your body,
but also refresh your mind. Lastly, you can listen to your favorite music when possible. I really hope my advice can
be of some benefit to you.
With best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，调理清晰，应用较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，
使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：At the same time, I felt sad to hear that you were
suffering in your studies. 运 用 了 宾 语 从 句 ； try to study in a positive way, as this will decrease your
pressure, making studying an easy job. 运用了祈使句、原因状语从句以及现在分词作结果状语；spend time doing exercise, which can not only build up your body, but also refresh your mind. 运用了定语从句。
Writing 5
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校即将开展"绿色校园"活动，现在向学生公开征集活动方案。请你向负
责该活动的老师 Smith 先生写信，提出你的建议和想法。要点如下：
⒈活动形式及内容；⒉注意事项；⒊其它。
注意：⒈词数 100 左右；
⒉可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】
本题是一篇英语信件，要求考生以某国际学校的学生李华的身份，向负责活动的老师 Smith 先生写信，提出
你的建议和想法。写作背景：你校即将开展“绿色校园”活动，现在向学生公开征集活动方案。写作要点已经
给出，处于提纲类作文。内容包括：一、活动形式及内容；二、注意事项；三、其他。提示中的内容比较
泛泛，需要适当补充主题，对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点
的能力。需要紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合
逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型字文章，显得更有档次。
【范文】
Dear Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a senior students of this school. I'm writing to offer my proposal concerning the great “ Green
Campus” activity to be carried out in our school.
In my humble opinion, To create a green campus, what we need to do is not only to plant some trees and
flowers to beautify the environment, but also to create an energy-efficient and resource-cycled campus. Everyone
on campus should be informed to form the habit of using resources properly and saving energy. It would be better
to organize some speech contests or knowledge competitors related to environmental protection to arouse students’
awareness of keeping the campus green, because it needs our joint efforts to realize this goal. And we can achieve it
by doing pieces of small acts in daily life, such as turning off the light when living in the classroom and take the
initiative to pick up the waste people on the ground.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful and I will be ready to discuss further details with you if
necessary.
Yours,
Li Hua 【亮点点击】
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高
级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：I'm Li Hua, a senior students
of this school. 运用了同位语；In my humble opinion, To create a green campus, what we need to do is not
only to plant some trees and flowers to beautify the environment, but also to create an energy-efficient and
resource-cycled campus. 运用了主语从句；It would be better to organize some speech contests or knowledge
competitors related to environmental protection to arouse students’ awareness of keeping the campus green,
because it needs our joint efforts to realize this goal. 运用了原因状语从句；I hope you will find these
suggestions useful and I will be ready to discuss further details with you if necessary. 运用了宾语从句、并列
句和省略。
Writing 6
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack 在观看《中国汉语桥》节目时，决定学习中国语言文化，希望你能给他
一些建议。请你根据以下提示写一封 email.
1). 通过中国古典作品了解中国文化：
2). 借助电视节目以及报刊更好地了解中国国情；
3). 和中国朋友多沟通。
注意：1).词数 100 词左右.
2).可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
3).短文中不能出现与本人相关的倍息。
参考词汇：《中国汉语桥》：Chinese Bridge Contest;
中国古典作品:classical literature
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua【写作指导】
本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友写一封电子邮件，就学习中国文化给他一些建议。
写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。内容包括：通过中国古典作品了解中国文化；借助电视节目以及报
刊更好地了解中国国情；和中国朋友多沟通。根据所给提纲，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将
各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，并适当增
加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文】
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about Chinese
language and culture. I'd like to offer you some suggestions, which I think can be of great benefit to your Chinese
study.
To learn the Chinese language and culture well, first of all, you have to read some classical literature， which
will broaden your horizon. Besides, watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of
language learning. Last, but not least, you are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can
communicate frequently. Only by doing so can you achieve your goal better.
I sincerely hope my suggestion will be good for your Chinese study and that you will make great progress in
it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句
间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'd like to offer you some
suggestions, which I think can be of great benefit to your Chinese study.和 you have to read some classical
literature， which will broaden your horizon. 运用了非限制性定语从句；watching TV programs and
reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning. 运用了动名词短语；Only by doing so can you
achieve your goal better. 运用了倒装句；I sincerely hope my suggestion will be good for your Chinese study
and that you will make great progress in it. 运用了宾语从句。
Writing 7
(2020·海口中学高三一模)假设你是李华，你的好友杨洋前不久和父母一起去了美国，她写信告
诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很难过。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封建议信。1.学好英语，从而有更多和别人交流的机会；
2.多交一些朋友，友情不会让人孤独；
3.积极参加各种活动。
注意：1.词数 80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Yang Yang，
Thank you for writing to me.
I hope my advice will be useful to you.I’m looking forward to your good news.
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear__Yang__Yang，
Thank__you__for__writing__to__me. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to
your new school life in America.I’m glad to give you some advice on how to face this situation.
Firstly，it is very important for you to work hard at English，which can give you more opportunities
to communicate with others.Secondly ， it can be a good idea to make some friends with your
classmates.They can help you forget your loneliness and solve some of your problems.Thirdly，it also
helps to join in various activities，which will make your life more interesting.By doing so，you will live a busier life and be happier with the new life soon.
I__hope__my__advice__will__be__useful__to__you.I’m__looking__forward__to__your__good__n
ews.
Yours，
Li__Hua
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