应用文写作专题
南京
第一节 应用文写作（满分15分）
假定你是李华，你的邻居 Smith先生的宠物狗不断的吠叫，严重影响了你的生活。请给他
写封信表达你的不满。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2. 犬吠对你的影响；
3.你的诉求。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不包含在词数内。
Dear Mr.Smith,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1、应用文写作
这是一封投诉信，学生需要简明扼要，层次鲜明地按照题目要求，有理有据地写出论点论据。
同时也要注意文章主题词（比如 howl, bark, tantrum）的同义替换。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to lodge complaints against your pet dog, whose all-night-long howls severely affects
my study and normal life. As you know, I am now preparing for Gaokao, which is one of the most
important exams for us Chinese students and is due to be held next June. Yet, so thunderous is
your dog's bark that I fail to concentrate and even have difficulty in falling asleep. Therefore, I
sincerely wish you could tame your dog properly and immediately stop its tantrum, otherwise I
would seek legal support. (89 words)
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
南通
第一节 应用文(满分 15 分)
假如你是如皋某中学的英语老师 Su Hua, 你给某国际学校推荐名学生(Li Jiang)。请根据所给
提示给国际学校写一封推荐信。(100 字左右)1.竭力向国际学校推荐学生 Li Jiang,介绍 Li Jiang 的基本情况;
2.介绍 Li Jiang 的特点与特长(如:电脑技能、沟通能力、英语水平高等)。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
1、应用文写作（范文）：
××× International School,
I'm Su Hua, an English teacher of ××× Senior High School. It's great to hear that you
are going to enroll new students. I'm writing to you to recommend Li Jiang, a Senior 3
student of 18, to be your new member.
Li Jiang is a friendly, active and optimistic boy. he is also a smart teenager who can
use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What's more, he
is one of the top ten students in our school, and his spoken English is beyond parallel in
his peers. I'm sure he can be helpful and will enjoy more chances to develop himself in
your school.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Su Hua
扬州
第一节 应用文写作（满分15分）
假定你是李华，你校外教 Smith先生因为家乡遭遇了地震，心情低落。请你用英语给他写
一封电子邮件，要点包括：
1.表示同情；
2.介绍同学们给予灾区的帮助；
3.表示愿意帮助外教。
注意：
1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Smith
Yours
Li Hua
第一节 应用文写作（满分15分）
Dear Mr.Smith
I was shocked at the news about the earthquake in your hometown.It's understandable that
you sink into sadness.
Upon hearing the news,all the students in our school lend a helping hand.We have raised
some money, which will be put into your bank account.Besides,we have also collected some
basic necessities,such as clothes and food for the victims.We hope our small deeds can be of
some help.
I wish none of your family got injured.If you need any help,please don't hesitate to contact
me.
Yours
Li Hua
苏州
第一节 应用文写作（满分 15 分）
假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,
并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival,which will be held on June 15—17,2015,is now looking for 20
student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English Debate.If you
are interested,please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at
chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点:
1.表达写信意图;
2.陈述应征目的;
3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求:
1.邮件词数不少于 100;
2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;
3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms Chen,
I’m Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
第一节 应用文写作（满分 15 分）
One possible version:
Dear Ms Chen,
I’m Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.I’m writing to apply for the position as a student
volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,I will be able
to improve my organisational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking
English in public.
As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates.Besides,I have such a good
command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully,I have lent a
helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both
teachers and my classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give
me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[写作提示]
1. 本文为一篇周记, 记述自己周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历, 时态用一般过去时。
2. 内容做到要点齐全。
3. 注意词数限制及不能出现真实校名、姓名。
4. 参考词汇: be busy with; give... thorough cleaning; wipe off; sweep; mop
江阴市
第一节 应用文写作（满分 15 分）
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Alex 正在学习汉语，希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的
网站。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮件。
1.推荐网站：www.educhinese.com；
2 推荐理由：
（1）网站内容：中国风俗、中文电影、中文歌曲、成语和唐诗等；
（2）有在线教师答疑解惑。注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
应用文（满分 15 分）
Dear friend,
Having learned that you’re striving to have a good command of Chinese, I’m writing to
recommend a website, www.educhinese.com.
It’s famous for the abundant resources, including Chinese customs, films, songs, idioms and
poetry, which will surely make you fall in love with Chinese culture and help you acquire a deeper
understanding of cultural essence. Additionally, on-line guidance from professional teachers is
also provided free of charge, enabling you to solve the problems in time.
In a word, I strongly recommend this website and sincerely hope you benefit from this
website. May you succeed in learning Chinese!
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应用文写作（满分 15 分）
一、评分原则
1. 总分 15 分，按照五个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡
量、确定或调整档次，
最后给分。
3. 词数少于 60 和多于 100 的，从总分中减去 2 分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性
及上下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考
虑。6. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，降低一个档次。
二、各档次给分范围和要求
第五档
（13-15 分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
—覆盖所有的内容要点。
—应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
—语法结构和词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词
汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
—有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档
（10-12 分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
—虽漏掉 1,2 个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
—语法结构和词汇运用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构
和词汇所致。
—应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档
（7-9 分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
—虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
—有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
—应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作的目的。
第二档
（4-6 分）
未适当完成试题规定的任务。
—漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
—语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。
—有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
—较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档
（1-3 分）
未完成试题规定的任务。
—明显漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未能理解试题要求。
—语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。
—较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
—缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。
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未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内
容无关或所写内容无法看清。
如东县
第一节 应用文写作（满分 15分）
假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike就读的学校要举办一年一度的“中华文化节”，他来
信向你征求活动意见，请你写封回信，内容包括：
1.写作目的；
2.活动建议；
3.表示祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
1、应用文写作
Dear Mike，
So delighted to learn that your school is going to hold annual "Chinese Culture Festival", I'm here
sharing with you some of my advice.
Firstly, it would be a good idea to hold a competition about Chinese Poetry Recitation, through
which students can taste the charm of the Chinese language. Additionally, a speech concerning
Chinese traditional festivals is highly recommended, as unique customs and traditions behind each
festival will undoubtedly attract students.
I'm fully convinced that your festival will be a joyful and fruitful activity, which will spread brilliant Chinese culture to a larger extent. (95)
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
第一次百校联考
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（满分15分）
假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校交换生Peter在校乒乓球比赛中取得了第二名的好成绩。
请你给他写一封电子邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.肯定其付出。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
1、应用文写作：
Dear Peter,
What exciting news that you have won second prize in the Ping-pong Match held in our school
last week! I'm writing to convey my heartfelt congratulations.
As an old saying goes, “God helps those who help themselves.” It is your pains-taking effort and
constant practice/drill that contribute to your remarkable success. Seeing you playing the table
tennis day after day before the competition, I was always convinced that you would make it.
Obviously, it won't be the last prize you gain. Therefore, keep fighting and moving!
Yours,
Li hua
苏州四市五区第一节（满分15分）
假定你是李华，你校下周二将邀请Green教授做一个关于西方礼仪的讲座。请你以学生会的
名义用英文写一份通知，内容包括：
1. 讲座的主题；
2.时间和地点；
3.听讲座时的注意事项。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A notice
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_____________________________________________________________________________
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The Students' Union
A notice
A lecture themed ‘Western Etiquette’ will be given by Professor Green next Tuesday. The lecture,
held at the School Main Hall, will last one hour from 2:00 to 3:00 p.m. Please switch off your
mobile and take your notebook with you. In case you have any question, a lively Q&A session
will ensue/follow after the main speech. When you leave, make sure you take away your litter and
personal belongings to keep the hall tidy and clean. Your full attention and close cooperation will
be highly appreciated.
Total word count: 86 words
The Students' Union
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