短文改错专题
四川省阆中中学 9 月教学质量检测
第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
This summer holiday, I go to a seaside city with my family. We got there by air. It is a very
beautiful and modern city, where impressed us a lot. On the first day, we took a bus to a place calling
the Sea Park. There were such many different kinds of fishes that I couldn’t believe in my eyes. On the
second day, we went swimming, and we all enjoyed ourselves. During the next two days, we went to
some tourist spot, shopping and taking photos. Several days late, we left the city. Although we were
tiring on our way home, we felt happily about the holiday. What unforgettable experience!
【答案】1. 第一句：go→went 2. 第三句：where→which
3. 第四句：calling→called 4. 第五句：such→so
5. 第五句：去掉 in 6. 第七句：spot→spots
7. 第八句：late→later 8. 第九句：tiring→tired
9. 第九句：happily→happy 10. 第十句：unforgettable 前加 an
2021 届高三 9 月月考
第一节 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小
题 l 分，满分 10 分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文
中共有 10 处语言 错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修
改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面
写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修
改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修
改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。High school is considered as one of the most important stages in our life. As a
senior three students, it will not be long when we graduate. There are many things I
would like to share in my fellows. First of all, I’d like to convey my
gratitude to those who lend me a hand when I encountered difficulties. It
was their kindness which helped me regain my confidence when I got frustrating.
Besides, I think necessary to clear up some misunderstanding with my friends in
order to maintain our friendships forever. With the National College Entrance
Examination approached, I strongly recommend we will value time and redouble
efforts to study so that you can be admitted into an ideal university.
南充市白塔中学 2021 届高三英语上学期第一次月考
第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10
处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）
划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计
分。
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who
would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take
part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy.
I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my
father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and
mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.
改错内江市第六中学 2021 届高三英语上学期第一次月考
第一节：短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10
处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months. This is first time that I have been away
from my family for such a long time. With the help of Katia a roommate of me, I’ve soon got used to
live without my parents around. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became
friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we
enjoy chat and we usually talk a lot about our own families. We’re both surprised that Chinese culture
or Russian culture are so different. Now, we’re planning a small party for the next Sunday. There,
Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of them has been to China several times. I just
can’t wait.
改错：
Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months. This is ∧ first time that I have been away
from my
the
family for such a long time. With the help of Katia a roommate of me, I’ve soon got used to live without my parents
mine living
around. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became friends shortly after we
meet each other.
is
met
Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chat and we usually talk a lot about our
own families.
hard chatting
We’re both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, we’re planning a
small party for
and
the next Sunday. There, Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of them has been to China
several times.
删除 the whom
I just can’t wait.
遂宁市安居育才中学 2021 届高三 9 月月考
第一节短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处
语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
My family go on vacation for every summer. But last year, I decided to try a difference holiday. I
found a job at the animal care center in my city. The center provides shelter to dogs abandoned or lose.
I did anything I could help the workers there—feed, bathing, and walking the dogs. The dog which
impressed me the most was one about three month old. It was so weak when it was took to the center
that some thought it might not survived. However, it surprised us all that the baby dog health began to
improve. It must be a strong dog. I love the experience at the center or I will return this summer. 遂宁市射洪县柳树中学 2021 届高三英语上学期第一次月考
第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10
处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
第一节 短文改错
71.will 改 would 72.and 改 but 73.got 后加 the 74.me 改 myself
75.advices 改 advice 76.very 改 so 77.on 改 in 78.excited 改 excitedly
79.helps 改 helping 80.were 删掉
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者参加比赛的经历。
71. 考查时态。本句是宾语从句，主句是一般过去时，从句使用相应的过去的时态，所以
从句的一般将来时需要改成过去将来时，故将 will 改成 would。
72. 考查连词。前句说到我们都对这个比赛感兴趣，希望加入，后句说每个班只允许一个
人参加。所以这里是转折关系，故将 and 改成 but。
73. 考查冠词。本句意思是我得到了这个机会，这里特指比赛的机会，所以需要用定冠词
表示特指，故在 got 后加 the。74. 考查反身代词。busy oneself doing sth 表示“忙于做某事”，所以这里需要用反身代词。
故将 me 改成 myself。
75. 考查不可数名词。名词 advice 是不可数名词，不能加 s。故将 advices 改成 advice。
76. 考查固定搭配。so...that 表示“如此......以至于......” 这里是固定搭配，故将 very 改成 so。
77. 考查固定搭配。succeed in doing sth. 表示“成功做某事”，所以这里需要用介词 in。故
将 on 改成 in。
78. 考查副词。这里需要修饰动词 stand，副词修饰动词，所以需要用 excited 的副词 excitedly。
故将 excited 改成 excitedly。
79. 考查现在分词。这里是分词作定语，修饰前面的名词 my classmates，“帮助”和“同学”
之间是主动关系，用现在分词，故将 helps 改成 helping。
80. 考查动词。belong to 表示“属于”，belong 没有被动语态，不能用被动形式。故将 were
删掉。
四川省仁寿一中北校区 2021 届高三英语 9 月月考
第一节 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有
10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Smoking is widespread habit even among teenage students.The number of young smokers are
increasing.It is estimated that over 10% of the senior high school students have tried smoking once or
more and some of them even steal money from their parent to buy cigarettes, that is terrible.
As it is known to all, smoking is harmful for health.And it's even more harmful to teenage
students for it does greatly harm not only to their health but also to their mind.
Teenage students are future builders of the country.They should spend their time learn what is useful but keep a healthy lifestyle as well.So it's high time that teenage smokers make up their minds
to give up smoking.
六、短文改错：
Smoking is^ widespread habit even among teenage
a
students.The number of young smokers are increasing.It is estimated that
is
over 10% of the senior high school students have tried smoking once or
more and some of them even steal money from their parent to buy cigarettes, that is terrible.
parents
which
As it is known to all, smoking is harmful for health.And it's even more
to
harmful to teenage students for it does greatly harm not only to their health
great
but also to their mind.
And
Teenage students are future builders of the country.They should spend their time learn what is
useful but keep a healthy lifestyle as
learning
well.So it's high time that teenage smokers make up their minds to give up smoking.
made/should make
四川省仁寿第二中学 2021 届高三英语 9 月月考
第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10
处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
When you are in public places, you will see many smokers. And most of them were young people
and even middle school student. Why do so many people enjoy smoke? Someone once told me that it
made him relaxing. In fact, smoking is the bad habit. It does greater harm to our health. For smokers, it
is a waste of money, and cause all kinds of diseases. Besides, many fires caused by careless smokers.
So never to get into the habit of smoking, but try to stop smoking if you have the habit.
短文改错：（每题一分，共 10 分）
71. ... were young people ... were → are
72. ... school student. student → students
73. ... enjoy smoke? smoke → smoking
74. ... made him relaxing. relaxing → relaxed
75. ... the bad habit. the → a
76. ... greater harm ... greater → great
77. ... cause all kinds ... cause → causes
78. ... many fires caused ... fires 后加 are
79. So nev er to ... 去掉 to
80. ... but try to stop ... but → and
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