Unit 6 Sunshine for all
单元主题写作六
话题分析
以“构建和谐社会”为话题展开讨论,倡导人们从事公益活动,形成“我要为社会做点事”的意识,做到从我做起,关注社会和谐发展。通过讨论和写作,增强学生帮助弱势群体、同情弱者、乐于助人的意识。
常用表达
1.……需要我们的帮助。 …need our help.
2.我们必须做些事来帮助…… We must do something to help…
3.……将花费…… It will cost…to…
4.……没有足够的钱来…… …don't/doesn't have enough money for…
5.对……来说……是重要的/危险的。 It is important/dangerous for…to…
6.如果我们都能伸出援助之手,……可能…… If all of us can give a helping hand, …may…
典例精析
请你以“Build a Harmonious Society(构建和谐社会)”为题,用英文给全校学生写一份倡议书,80词左右。倡议书中要包含以下内容:
1.热爱祖国; 2.努力学习,积极参加学校活动; 3.尊老爱幼,多做义工来帮助他们;
4.节约能源,保护环境。
写作指导
1.总体介绍——什么样的人需要帮助或我们需要参加什么活动。
2.提供一些具体的信息:(1)帮助弱势群体;(2)参加公益活动。
3.结束语:(1)向即将提供帮助的人表示感谢; (2)号召大家行动起来。
4.写倡议书介绍信息时用一般现在时,发出倡议时用一般将来时。
5.写作时要尽量使用号召性的语句,如祈使句、反问句、反意疑问句、感叹句等,来增强语气。
范文示例
Build a Harmonious Society
Boys and girls,
Our government is working hard on building a harmonious society. As students, we should do something to support it.
Firstly, we should love our motherland and take pride in it. Secondly, we should try our best to work hard so that we can grow into useful people in the future. We should also take an active part in our school's activities. Thirdly, we should respect the old and love the young.And we should work as volunteers to help them. Fourthly, we should save energy and protect the environment to make our country more and more beautiful.
Let's start right now and make a contribution to the harmonious society.
在和谐社会里,人与人之间互相帮助已成为我们生活的重要组成部分。下周你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”为题的英语演讲比
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赛。假如李智要参加演讲比赛,请你以李智的名义,用英语写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。内容要点如下:
1.帮助同学——促进友谊; 2.帮助老人——快乐生活; 3.帮助别人的体会。
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教师详解详析
自我展示
One possible version:
Helping Each Other Makes
the World Wonderful
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Zhi. It's nice to talk about “help” here. In our life we often help others and also get help from others. When we help our classmates with their studies and other things, we can develop our friendship. If we give a helping hand to old people, we can understand the meaning of pleasure. I think we can get much when we help people around us. As the saying goes,“Giving is much better than receiving.”
Thank you for your listening.
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