写作改错
题一： 语法改错
I have a good friend. His name is May. She is 12 years old. She telephone number is 87634966. Her birthday is on March. She is good for English and Chinese. She is often play the piano. She likes reading books and listen to the music. Her hobby are reading and listening music. She is nice girl. We often help with each other. We are good friends.
题二： 语法改错
My name is Wang Ming. My birthday is June five. I am a student. I very study hard. My favorite subject is English. I like it because it useful and fun. I can play piano and the trumpet, but no very well. I love swim and I am good at it. Of all kind of movies, I like comedies best. I think they’re interesting. I’m one of the best student in my class. My teachers all say I a good student. They all like I and I like they, too.
第1讲 书面表达之遣词造句
题一： 假设你是李华，和朋友正在讨论自己一天的生活，请以My Day为题，写一篇英语短文向大家介绍一下你的日常生活。
要求：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 叙事清楚，语句通顺，语意连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
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题二： 假设你是李华，Tom是你的同窗好友。在一堂英语课上，老师要你以“My Good Friend”为题做简要演讲。
要点：1. 简要描述Tom的年龄和外表；
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2. 他的兴趣爱好。
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第1讲 优秀作文赏析
题一： 假如李明是你的好朋友，根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文介绍李明的业余爱好。(短文开头已给出)
提示语：
1、李明以前是个电影迷，一周至少去看两次电影，有时租VCD在家里看，最喜欢的影星是姜文；
2、李明现在的兴趣是集邮，认为集邮非常有趣，可以从邮票上学到很多关于人物、地点、历史的知识，有些旧邮票非常有价值；
3、上周五是李明的生日， 他从朋友那里得到了许多邮票，非常高兴。
Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies.
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题二： 根据下面内容提示，以第一人称写一篇短文。词数：70词左右。
姓名：夏韵涵
出生：1993年10月
户籍：宁德市
班级：宁德市108中学八年级五班
兴趣：集邮、唱歌等
周末活动：去公园划船、看电影
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本人愿望：当一名战士 (soldier)
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题一： 今天是父亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：
●表述你与父亲间的情感；
●为父亲制作一张卡片；
●帮助父亲做点事；
●陪父亲散步等。
注意：
1. 词数80-100；
2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
It’s Father’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What’s your plan for Father’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
题二： 假如你的新笔友叫Mike。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的情况。信的内容必须包括：你的姓名、年龄、所就读的学校、年级、班级、爱好、最喜欢的学科及理由、最喜欢的影片及理由等。信的内容不得少于十句话。信的开头和结尾已给出。
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Dear Mike,
Thanks for your letter. Now I’d like to tell you something about myself. _________________
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Yours,
x x
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写作改错
题一：
I have a good friend. His name is May. She is
Her
12 years old. She telephone number is 87634966.
Her
Her birthday is on March. She is good for English
in at
and Chinese. She is often play the piano. She likes
plays
reading books and listen to the music. Her hobby
listening hobbies
are reading and listening∧music. She∧is nice girl.
to a
We often help with each other. We are good friends.
解析：
1. 根据全文可知May是一个女孩，把his改为her。
2. telephone number前应加形容词性物主代词，又因为May是女孩，所以把She改为Her。
3. 在月份前加介词in。
4. be good at擅长于。
5. 句子中有often，时态为一般现在时，把be动词is去掉。
6. 主语是she，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式，play改为plays。
7. and连接并列成分，前有reading，listen也改为相应的-ing形式。
8. 爱好有两个，是复数，把hobby改为hobbies。
9. listen to music听音乐。
10. nice girl前加冠词，nice为辅音音素开头，用不定冠词a。
11. help each other互相帮助，不用加with。
题二：
My name is Wang Ming. My birthday is June five. I am a student. I very study hard. My favorite
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fifth I study very hard.
subject is English. I like it because it∧useful and
is
fun. I can play∧piano and the trumpet, but no very
the not
well. I love swim and I am good at it. Of all kind
swimming kinds
of movies, I like comedies best. I think they’re interesting. I’m one of the best student in my class.
students
My teachers all say I∧a student. They all like I
am me
and I like they, too.
them
解析：1. 英语中表达“几月几日”时，先说“月”再说“日”，其中“日”通常要用序数词。把five改为fifth。
2. 句式表达是中式英语，very不能修饰动词，可以修饰副词。
3. 形容词前加be动词is。
4. 乐器前加the。
5. no不能修饰副词，把no改为not。
6. love doing sth. 喜欢做某事。
7. all kinds of各种各样的。
8. one of后接名词复数。
9. I后缺be动词，应加am。
10. like是动词，动词后接代词宾格，改为me。
11. like是动词，动词后接代词宾格，改为them。
书面表达之遣词造句
题一： 范文：
My Day
Hello, everyone! I get up early at six thirty. Then I have breakfast and go to school.
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In the morning we have four lessons, they’re two English lessons, one Chinese lesson and one history lesson. I like English best. At noon we have lunch at school, we have rice and vegetables, but we don’t like them very much. In the afternoon we have two math lessons and one music lesson. Math is difficult, but I study hard. And we sing a beautiful song. We finish school at five to five. I play basketball with my friends after school. It’s fun! Then I go home and do my homework, next I have dinner with my parents and watch TV. I go to bed at nine o’clock.
题一： 范文：
My Good Friend
My good friend is Tom. He is a boy. He is my classmate. He is thirteen years old.
Tom is tall and thin. He has two big eyes and long hair. He likes wearing jeans and sports shoes. We have same interests. We like playing basketball after school. He likes sports very much. He is a good student. He is good at math. He always helps me learn math. He can speak a little English. His favorite animals are pandas. Sometimes he goes to school on foot. He is my best friend forever.
优秀作文赏析
题一：
Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen.
Now Li Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it‘s great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable.
Last Friday was Li Ming‘s birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.
题二：
My name is Xia Yunhan. I was born in October, 1993. I live in Ningde. I study in Class 5, Grade 8, Ningde No. 108 Middle School. I like collecting stamps and singing. At weekends I often go boating in the park, and go to the movies too. When I grow up, I want to be a soldier.
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题一：
Dear John,
It’s Father’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?
I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I’m sure he’ll be very happy.
What’s your plan for Father’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from yon.
Yours,
Li Hua
题二：
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your letter. Now I’d like to tell you something about myself.
My name is x x. I’m twelve. I study at Bei Da Resource Middle School. I’m in class Four Grade One. My favorite subject is science and I also like geography. Because they are very important and useful. I like playing the violin. I like action movies. Because it is exciting. What about you? Do you like action movies?
Please write to tell me soon.
Yours,
x x
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