专题19 去伪存真 短文改错
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One day when I was on my way to home from school，I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.
Several minutes lately，the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters，a lot of peoples left the building safely.Sudden a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything.But they can't understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that was happening.She told me that his daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once.They immediately run into the building and rescued little girl.
文章大意：本文主要讲述作者在回家的路上看到一栋建筑物着火了，打电话报警后，消防员很快扑灭了大火。但突然一名外国妇女跑来说她女儿还在建筑物里，但消防员们听不懂，最后，作者将这些告诉了消防员，他们救出了那个小女孩。
答案：
One day when I was on my way to home from school，I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.
Several minutes ，the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters，a lot of left the building safely. a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters.But they understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her was happening.She told me that daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once.They immediately into the building and rescued little girl.
4. 解析：考查副词。修饰句子要用副词，形容词sudden的副词是suddenly。
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5. 解析：根据句意：告诉消防员一些事情。用something。
6. 解析：考查动词时态。全文讲述的是过去的事情，用一般过去时态。
二、
Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I take part in several days ago，I have a lot to share to you.
Firstly，I feel real delighted that I've won the first prize in the competition，which makes me to understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains，no gains”．Besides，I've established the friendship with students from all over our country，from which I've learned a lot.More importantly，participate in this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public，thus developing my self-confidence.Additionally，I owe much thanks to my teachers and judges.Without his help，I couldn't have done such excellent job.
To sum up，I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experiences.
文章大意：作者回顾自己参加英语演讲比赛后的一些体会。
答案：
Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I part in several days ago，I have a lot to share you.
Firstly，I feel delighted that I've won the first prize in the competition，which makes me to understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains，no gains”．Besides，I've established the friendship with students from all over our country，from I've learned a lot.More importantly， in this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public，thus developing my selfconfidence.Additionally，I owe thanks to my teachers and judges.Without help，I couldn't have done such excellent job.
To sum up，I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable .
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1. 解析：考查时态。根据本句中的时间状语several days ago可知用过去时，故take改为took。
2. 解析：考查介词。此处为固定搭配：share with sb.和某人分享。
3. 解析：考查副词。此处为副词修饰形容词delighted，故用really。
4. 解析：考查动词。此处为make的固定用法：make sb do sth：让某人做某事，故去掉to。
三、
In my mind，I could never fancy how ten second of life could change a person's view for his whole existence.A few years ago I experience the worst moment in my life.I was driving home that afternoon.Unfortunately，I didn't make it home as usually because I had a car accident.While I was driving，all of a sudden，but the car in front of me stopped.My car immediately ran into it.Luckily，I wasn't serious hurt.That accident changed way I drive and they taught me a valuable lesson.I also came to the conclusion which life needs to be treasuring.
答案：
In my mind，I could never fancy how ten of life could change a person's view his whole existence.A few years ago I the worst moment in my life.I was driving home that afternoon.Unfortunately，I didn't make it home as because I had a car accident.While I was driving，all of a sudden，but the car in front of me stopped.My car immediately ran into it.Luckily，I wasn't hurt.That accident changed way I drive and taught me a valuable lesson.I also came to the conclusion life needs to be .
1. 解析：句意：在我心中，我无法想象生活的十秒能怎样改变一个人对于他整个存在的观点。second表示“秒”是可数名词，前面有ten修饰，故要用复数形式。故second改为seconds。
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2.解析：考查介词。表示某人关于某一事物的态度、观点，或者关于哪个方面的课题、论文、演讲等用on 或about。故for改为on/ about。
3. 解析：考查时态。句意：几年前我经历了生命中最困难的时刻。根据时间状语a few years ago可知，用一般过去时，故experience改为experienced。
4. 解析：句意：我并没有按时回到家，因为我发生了一场车祸。本题考查词组as usual，表示“像往常一样”。故usually改为usual。
8. 解析：考查代词。句意：那次事故改变了我开车的方法，它也给我上了宝贵的一课。这里用it指代上文出现的名词单数that accident，故they改为it。
9. 解析：考查同位语从句。句意：我也得出了生命需要被珍视的结论。名词the conclusion后接从句表示the conclusion的内容，构造了同位语从句，引导词在句中只起连接作用，无意义，不作成分，故要用that。
10. 解析：句意：我也得出了生命需要被珍视的结论。根据句意可知，动词treasure要用被动语态的形式，故treasuring改为treasured。
四、
When I was a kid，my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city.Every day both my parent would take me to club after school.I played tennis，ate snacks and did my homework here.It was basically my second family.A woman whose name was Li Li，my first private coach，was as a mother to us.She not only taught me everything that I know about what to play tennis，but treats me well.She was kind or always trained me with great patient.In my heart，she was the best coach in our city.
文章大意：本文讲述了作者幼时的网球教练对于自己的帮助。爸爸妈妈让我参加了一个网球俱乐部，放学后我会在那里打球，吃饭和做作业。那里就像我的另一个家。我的教练对我很好，她不仅教我打球而且对我很好，在我心里她是我市最好的教练。
答案：
When I was a kid，my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city.Every day both my would take me toclub after school.I played tennis，ate snacks
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and did my homework .It was basically my second family.A woman whose name was Li Li，my first private coach，was a mother to .She not only taught me everything that I know about to play tennis，but me well.She was kind always trained me with great .In my heart，she was the best coach in our city.
1. 解析：考查谓语动词的语态。主语my father and mother和谓语动词made 之间是主动关系，表示“爸爸妈妈让我参加了一个网球俱乐部”，所以去掉were。
6. 解析：考查代词。根据下文She not only taught me everything 可知教练就像我的妈妈，所以用代词me。
7. 解析：考查疑问词。根据本句表示“她教我怎样打网球”，所以what改为how。
8. 解析：考查谓语动词的时态。根据上文可知谓语动词用过去式treated。
9. 解析：考查连词。She was kind表示“她很和蔼”； always trained me with great __patient__ 表示“她耐心的培训我”，所以两句之间是并列关系，所以or改为and。
10. 解析：考查词性。with 后用名词patience，表示“耐心地”，相当于副词patiently。
五、
Last Sunday，I joined the voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order at a big crossing near our school.At 8∶00 a．m.，we arrived there，wore red vests with the word VOLUNTEER on the back.We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic rule.To our delighted，they all waited for the green light patient except one motor-biker.We also give out some handmade brochures about traffic regulations，for that many people praised us.About 4 hours later，they said good-bye to the police and left.Tired as we were，we all felt an honor to do our parts.
答案：
Last Sunday，I joined voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order at a big crossing near our school.At 8∶00 a．m.，we arrived there， red vests with the word VOLUNTEER on the back.We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic .To our
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，they all waited for the green light except one motor-biker.We also out some hand-made brochures about traffic regulations，for many people praised us.About 4 hours later， said good-bye to the police and left.Tired as we were，we all felt an honor to do our parts.
1. 解析：在全文中是第一次出现，不能用特指，而应用泛指。故将the改为a。
六、
One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son if the poor lived，so he could be thankful to his wealth.They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of that would be considered a very poor family.On their return back，the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt.The boy，who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home，replying in a way that shocked his father.
The boy said he wanted to become farmer.He envied the farmers who had the beautiful night star to give them light while her family had only expensive lanterns.His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home.Finally the boy finished by saying，“Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have learnt who is true rich.”
With this，the boy got up and walked away，leaving his father sat on their comfortable sofa，totally speechless.
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文章大意：一天，一位富人为了让儿子对他的财富充满“感激”，便带着儿子来到乡村去体验农民的生活，没想到结果却令富人“无语”，因为他的儿子想当农民。
答案：
One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son the poor lived，so he could be thankful his wealth.They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of would be considered a very poor family.On their return back，the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt.The boy，who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home， in a way that shocked his father.
The boy said he wanted to becomefarmer.He envied the farmers who had the beautiful night to give them light while family had only expensive lanterns.His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home.Finally the boy finished by saying，“Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have learnt who is rich.”
With this，the boy got up and walked away，leaving his father on their comfortable sofa，totally speechless.
3. 解析：考查连接代词。此处用来引导宾语从句，由于该从句中缺少主语，故用连接代词what。
4. 解析：考查return的含义。由于return“返回”相当于“go back/get back/come back”，即它本身就含有back的意思，其后不能再跟back；故去掉return之后的back。
5. 解析：考查谓语动词。此处在句中作谓语，根据上文可知，此处讲述的是发生在过去某一天的事情，应使用一般过去时；故用replied。
6. 解析：考查不定冠词。此处用来修饰单数名词farmer，表示泛指一位农民，故在farmer前加a。
7. 解析：考查名词的单复数。此处指的是：许多美丽的夜星；由于star为可数名词；故用stars。
8. 解析：考查人称代词。此处用来修饰名词family，指代的是男孩的家；故用his。
9. 解析：考查副词。此处用来修饰形容词rich，故用truly。
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10. 解析：考查固定搭配。leave sb doing 指让某人保持某动作或状态，留下某人…；此处指的是：男孩站起来走开了，留下了他的父亲坐在他们舒适的沙发上，完全说不出话来；故用sitting。
七、
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Ming，monitor of Class One，Senior One.I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as exchange student next term.I feel it an honor of us to study with you.Now I have something to tell you about.Firstly，with the climate changing，you should prepared enough clothes.Then there are different kind of foods and snacks which will give you a chance to experiencing rich Chinese food culture.In addition，every student is friendly to foreign friends，that will make it easy for you to get along good with them.
Last but not least，we can do what we can to help you，and you must get prepared to meet trouble.During your stay here，I hope you can tell us more about American culture.Only by understanding and learn from each other can we spend these days together happily.
Yours，
Li Ming.
文章大意：短文为李明写给交换生Chris的一封信，表示在他来我校交换期间会帮助他适应环境，以及互相学习。
答案：
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Ming，monitor of Class One，Senior One.I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school asexchange student next term.I feel it an honor us to study with you.Now I have something to tell you about.Firstly，with the climate changing，
you should enough clothes.Then there are different of foods and snacks which will give you a chance to rich Chinese food culture.In addition，every student is friendly to foreign friends， will make it easy for you to get along with them.Last but not least，we can do what we can to help you， you must get prepared to meet trouble.During your stay here，I hope you can tell us more about American culture.Only by understanding and from each other can we spend these days together happily.
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5. 解析：考查名词的复数形式，kind“种类”是可数名词，表示“不同的种类”，different后接其复数形式。
6. 解析：考查动词的用法，a chance to do sth.“做某事的机会”，to为动词不定式，后接动词原形，因此使用experience。
7. 解析：考查定语从句引导词，考查非限制性定语从句的引导词，使用which。
8. 解析：考查固定搭配，表达“与某人相处融洽”使用动词短语get along well with sb.，因此good改为well。
9. 解析：考查连词的用法，前后句子为转折的关系，and为并列的关系，因此改为but。
10. 解析：考查动名词形式，此处and连接两个并列的结构，by后接动名词，因此learn使用其动名词形式learning。
八、
A survey (调查)has recently carried out among the students in our school about whether they would like it if their parents gave birth to a second child.Opinions vary wide from one to another.
Most of the students supported the idea.They think that it would be amazing to have a brother and a sister to keep the company and share secrets with.Besides，we believe a second child would bring lots of funs to the family.
However，the rest of the students interviewing hold the opposite view.To start with，raising one child is already a difficult thing and the parents would have to work twice as hard if they had a second child.What's more，they argue whether they have been accustomed to enjoy the whole love from their parents.
答案：
A survey (调查)has recently carried out among the students in our school about whether they would like it if their parents gave birth to a second child.Opinions vary from one to another.
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Most of the students the idea.They think that it would be amazing to have a brother a sister to keep the company and share secrets with.Besides， believe a second child would bring lots of to the family.
However，the rest of the students hold the opposite view.To start with，raising one child is already a difficult thing and the parents would have to work twice as hard if they had a second child.What's more，they argue they have been accustomed to the whole love from their parents.
6. 解析：由句意得此处主语为students，所以为they。
九、
One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
文章大意：本文讲述了小男孩Tony和父母上街购物，街上人多，Tony没有告诉父母就独自进了一家商店，结果和父母走散，后来在街上又得以相见的故事。
答案：
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One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his .It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After at the toy for some time，he turned around and found his parents were missing.Tony was scared and to cry.A woman saw him crying and him to wait outside shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
1. 解析：parent改为parents。看下文可知，是父母两个，所以用parents。
2. 解析：on改为in。Tony走进商店，说明玩具在橱窗里面，用in。
3. 解析：very去掉。这里是“如此喜欢以至于”的意思，应该是like so much that...
4. 解析：looks改为looking。after之后跟从句或v－ing形式，故looks改为looking。
5. 解析：where改为that 或者去掉 where。found后面的宾语从句是陈述句，故where改为that或者去掉where。
6. 解析：begun改为began。and前后的谓语动词时态要一致，故begun改为began。
7. 解析：telling改为told。and前后的谓语动词时态要一致，see和tell是并列谓语，故telling改为told。
十、
Hi Janice，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time，I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore，so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
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Grace
文章大意：文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写信人的困扰。作者交了三个新朋友，经常一起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其实作者并不喜欢这样，她想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友谊。
答案：
Hi，Janice，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I you last time，I made three new here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me .And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity！In fact，I don't like to go anymore， I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. do you think I should do？If you me，would you talk to ？
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
1. 解析：加上to。考查动词want的用法。want用不定式担当状语，故加上to。句意为：我真的很想和你分享一下我经历的问题。
4. sing改为singing。考查动名词做宾语。本句考查句型spend...(in)doing sth.结构，故把sing改成singing。
5. many改为much。考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意为：那真的花费很多。
6. so改为but。考查连词。上一分句意为：我不想再去；下一分句意为：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。
7. How改为What。考查疑问词。本句中do之后缺少宾语，表示事情，故用what而非how。注意首字母要大写。
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8. are改为were。考查虚拟语气。根据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把are改成were。句意为：如果你是我……。
9. him改为them。考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them而非him。句意为：你会和她们说吗？
10. 去掉with。考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意为：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。
十一、
I took the Harvard Summer School program in my vacation.During my stay there，I spend a lot of time studying in the main library Widener.I enjoyed myself in the ocean of knowledges，either doing research for my papers or read special edition books.The library，which it is named after its donor Harry Widener，stands right next to the Emerson building of philosophy.Opening a pair of heavy yet elegant metal doors，I was immediate bathed in warm light.I wandered around the library，fascinating to find one treasure after other.
The library is a amazing place.One can fully experience the academic atmosphere only he visits the library.For me，the library as well as the courses explain Harvard's place as the home of devoted scholars.
文章大意：本文为一篇记叙文主要讲述了作者去哈佛夏季学校度假时的所见所感，讲述作者对于哈佛这学校自己的看法，以及对哈佛各景物的介绍。
答案：
I took the Harvard Summer School program in my vacation.During my stay there，I a lot of time studying in the main library Widener.I enjoyed myself in the ocean of ，either doing research for my papers or special edition books.The library，which it is named after its donor Harry Widener，stands right next to the Emerson building of philosophy.Opening a pair of heavy yet elegant metal doors，I was bathed in warm light.I wandered around the library， to find one treasure after .
The library is amazing place.One can fully experience the academic atmosphere only he visits the library.For me，the library as well as the courses Harvard's place as the
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home of devoted scholars.
3. 解析：根据前后时态一致的原则故将either doing research for my papers or read special edition books.中的read改成reading。
4. 解析：在非限制性定语从句那根据中which 指代句子中的主语或宾语在which it is named after its donor Harry Widener，中which在本句中作主语若加上it的话则成分有所多余，故删掉it。
5. 解析：在immediate bathed 中immediate 作状语来修饰bath故此处immediate应当为副词的形式故将是改为immediately。
6. 解析：在I wandered around the library，fascinating to find one treasure after other.fascinating用来修饰人故应当将其改成fascinated。
7. 解析：After another为固定搭配意为一个接着一个，故将other改成another。
8. 解析：Amazing为元音字母开头故前面不定冠词要用an。
9. 解析：Only if 固定搭配“只有．..”故在only后面加上if。
10. 解析：当as well as 链接两个名词作主语时 要以前面的名词为准进行单双数的变化故将explain改为explains。
十二、
Recently，a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great wall.In the fact，this happens in many place of interest.I had some suggestions to solve this problem.
First，make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦)．Besides，punishments，such as a fine，is necessary to tourists with so bad behaviors.Also，I think it's helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages.
I'm sure with our efforts，more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.
文章大意：作者提出了一些防止游客在旅游景点乱涂鸦的建议。
答案：
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Recently，a famous basketball player has caused public by writing on the Great wall.In the fact，this happens in many of interest.I some suggestions to solve this problem.
First，make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦)．Besides，punishments，such as a fine， necessary to tourists with bad behaviors.Also，I think it's to put up some boards along the tourist attractions tourists can leave messages.
I'm sure with our efforts，more and more people will become about protecting cultural relics.
4. 解析：had→have；考查时态。本文用一般现在时描述，故此句也用一般现在时，主语是第一人称，故用have。
5. 解析：在public后面加of；考查介词。此处为固定短语：inform sb of sth“通知某人某事”。
6. 解析：is→are；考查主谓一致。此句的主语是punishments，是复数，故谓语也要用复数。
7. 解析：so→such；考查副词。so修饰形容词或者副词，such修饰名词，虽然此处有bad这个形容词，但是bad也是来修饰后面这个名词behaviors的，也就是说此处的中心词是behaviors，故用such来修饰。
8. 解析：helpfully→helpful；考查形容词。此处为系表结构，形容词作表语，故用helpful。
9. 解析：that→where；考查关系词。此处为定语从句，先行词是boards，从句缺少状语，而且根据意思可理解为表地点的状语。故用关系副词where。
10. 解析：concerning→concerned考查形容词。此处为固定短语：be concerned about“关心……”。
十三、
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student at a ordinary school.Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and my poorly-equipped classroom，but
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I found the teachers impatient and considerate.Beside，I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best it.I worked hard and got along good with my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties，they are always available.Soon，I became one of the top student in my class，that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who we are.
文章大意：本文通过自己从考试不及格到成为一个尖子生的转变告诉我们：态度决定高度。
答案：
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student at ordinary school.Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and my poorly-equipped classroom，but I found the teachers and considerate.，I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best it.I worked hard and got along with my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties，they always available.Soon，I became one of the top in my class， greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who are.
6. 解析：考查副词。此处是副词修饰动词短语get along well，意为“相处融洽”。
7. 解析：考查时态。根据从句谓语用过去式，可知主句也用过去式，故改成were。
8. 解析：考查名词。one of…“……中的一个”，后跟复数名词，所以student改成students。
9. 解析：考查连词。此处为非限制性定语从句，不能用that，根据指代前面一整句话的内容，故应用which作从句的主语。
10. 解析：考查代词。此处根据意思“决定你是什么样的人”，故用you。
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Dear Peter，
I have received your e-mail.I am very exciting at the good news that you have admitted into Harvard.First I'd like to offer my congratulation to you on your great success.
Since you know，I'm busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination.Day after day I work very hard but have to stay up later doing piles of papers.Therefore，I'm always feeling stressed out because of my efforts seem to be fruitless，which had made me upset and tired.Will you be kind enough to give some advice on how to do?
I would appreciate that if you could write back to me as soon as possible.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案：
Dear Peter，
I have received your e-mail.I am very at the good news that you have admitted into Harvard.First I'd like to offer my to you on your great success.
you know，I'm busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination.Day after day I work very hard have to stay up doing piles of papers.Therefore，I'm always feeling stressed out because of my efforts seem to be fruitless，which made me upset and tired.Will you be kind enough to give some advice on to do?
I would appreciate if you could write back to me as soon as possible.
Yours，
Li Hua
6. 解析： later后来的；late副词，晚地，时间不早地。这里指晚上熬夜到很晚，所以改为late。
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7. 解析：because of后面跟名词或动名词等，because后面跟句子。这里后面是句子，所以把of去掉。
十五、
短文改错
One day when I was on my way to home from school.I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.
Several minutes late，the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters，a lot of peoples left the building safely.Sudden a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything.But they can’t understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that was happening.She told me that his daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once，but they immediately ran into the building and rescued little girl.
答案：
One day when I was on my way to home from school.I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.
Several minutes ， the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters, a lot of left the building safely. a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters .But they understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her was happening.She told me that daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once, they immediately ran into the building and rescued little girl.
1. 解析：删除to。考查固定搭配。on one’s way home意为“在某人回家的路上”。
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2. 解析：late改为later。考查副词。根据语境可知，此处表示几分钟之后。late意为“迟到的”；later意为“后来，随后”，故将late改为later。
3. 解析：peoples改为people。考查名词。people意为“人”，为集体名词。作“民族”讲时为可数名词，其复数形式为peoples。根据语境可知，此处指很多人，故将peoples改为people。
4. 解析：Sudden改为Suddenly。考查副词。此处应用副词修饰整个句子，作状语。
8. 解析：his改为her。考查人称代词。句子的主语为She，故将his改为her。
9. 解析：but改为and。考查连词。根据语境可知，此处表顺承关系，故将but改为and。
解析：little前加the。考查冠词。此处特指上文中提到的那个小女孩儿，故在little前加定冠词the。
十六、
短文改错
It was in a hot summer holiday which I visited Qingdao，port city in Shandong Province.My favourite sport is swimming，so I decide to go swimming in the sea one afternoon with my friend，Wang Fei and Li Lei.
It was the first time that I had swum in the sea，with waves come one after another to the shore and making great noises.Facing the rough sea，I felt a bit worrying and nearly gave up at first.And when I saw many people enjoying myself in the water，my fear was reducing.At last I joined in the swimmers.Now I still remember how wonderful I was swimming in the sea.
It was in a hot summer holiday I visited Qingdao, port city in Shandong Province.My favourite sport is swimming, so I to go swimming in the sea one afternoon with my ， Wang Fei and Li Lei.
It was the first time that I had swum in the sea, with waves one after another to the
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shore and making great noises.Facing the rough sea, I felt a bit and nearly gave up at first. when I saw many people enjoying in the water, my fear was reducing.At last I joined in the swimmers.Now I still remember how I was swimming in the sea.
1. 解析：which改为that。考查强调句型。分析该句结构可知，该句使用于强调句结构“It is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋句子的其他成分”；该句被强调的部分是时间状语“in a hot summer holiday”，故此处用that。
5. 解析：come改为coming。考查with复合结构。分析该句结构可知，该句使用于with复合结构，此处为“with＋名词＋分词”结构作伴随状语，且waves与come之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故将come改为coming。
6. 解析：worrying改为worried。考查形容词。该句主语为I，表示人，worried意为“担心的，焦虑的”，形容人的情感；worrying表示“令人担忧的”，修饰事物。故将worrying改为worried。
7. 解析：And改为But。考查连词。前一句表示“面对汹涌的大海，我感到有点害怕，一开始几乎要放弃了”。本句提到“我的恐惧感在减少”。由此可知，两句间为转折关系，故将And改为But。
8. 解析：myself改为themselves。考查反身代词。此处代指“many people”。enjoy oneself为固定搭配，意为“得到乐趣”。
9. 解析：删除in。考查介词。join表示“加入，和……一道”时，其后总是直接跟宾语。而join in(sth.)表示“参加(活动)，加入进来”。故删除in。
解析：wonderful改为wonderfully。考查副词。此处修饰动词swimming应用副词。
十七、
短文改错
Dear Jack，
How is it going recently？ I’m delight to tell you that our school photograph club is going
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to hold a International Photograph Show.Here is some informations about it.Protect the environment is the theme of the show.It will start from June 15 in next month and last three weeks.Any student who is interested in it is welcome participate.I know you take good pictures but you’ve always wanted to do something what interests you.This is certain a good chance for more people to see it.You can send your photos to intphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案：
Dear Jack，
How is it going recently? I’m to tell you that our school photograph club is going to hold International Photograph Show.Here is some about it. the environment is the theme of the show.It will start from June 15 in next month and last three weeks.Any student who is interested in it is welcome participate.I know you take good pictures you’ve always wanted to do something interests you.This is a good chance for more people to see .You can send your photos to intphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
4. 解析：Protect改为Protecting。考查动名词。此处为动名词短语作主语。动词原形不能作主语。
5. 解析：删除in。考查介词。“next month”在句中作状语，其前不用介词，故删除in。
6. 解析：welcome后加to。考查不定式。be welcome to do sth.意为“欢迎做某事”。
7. 解析：but改为and。考查并列连词。本句中两个分句是顺承关系，不是转折关系。
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8. 解析：what改为that。考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处为定语从句，先行词为something，故只能用that引导该定语从句，that作从句的主语。
9. 解析：certain改为certainly。考查副词。此处应用副词作状语。
解析：it改为them。考查代词。此处代词代指上文提到的“pictures”，为复数，故用them。
十八、
短文改错
As teenagers，we should attach great important to reading.Reading can benefit from us teenagers a great deal. Firstly，reading improves our school grades.Secondly，reading helps us expanding our horizons. Thirdly，reading may contribute to finding solutions to their own problems. Finally，reading is a enjoyable experience.
It is strongly suggested that our spare time is made full use of read as much as possible.We teenagers should stay devoted to read what we are interested in. Besides，we should active participate in some activities that are related to reading，what we can not only get our knowledge enriched but also gain a lot of pleasure.
答案：
As teenagers, we should attach great to reading.Reading can benefit from us teenagers a great deal. Firstly, reading improves our school grades.Secondly, reading helps us our horizons. Thirdly, reading may contribute to finding solutions to own problems. Finally, reading is enjoyable experience.
It is strongly suggested that our spare time made full use of read as much as possible.We teenagers should stay devoted to what we are interested in. Besides, we should participate in some activities that are related to reading, we can not only get our knowledge enriched but also gain a lot of pleasure.
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4. 解析：their改为our。考查人称代词。根据上文中的“our school grades”“helps us”“our horizons”可知，该处陈述的是我们的情况，故用our。句意：第三，阅读可能有助于找到解决我们自己问题的方法。
5. 解析：a改为an。考查冠词。enjoyable为元音音素开头的单词，该处表示泛指，故用不定冠词an。句意：最后，阅读是一个令人愉快的经历。
6. 解析：is改为be。考查虚拟语气。suggest表示“建议”，后接从句时，该从句应用虚拟语气，从句的谓语动词用(should)do。故用动词原形be。
7. 解析：of后加to。考查动词不定式。句意：强烈建议充分利用我们的空余时间来尽可能多地阅读。根据句意可知，该处表示目的，故用动词不定式。
十九、
短文改错
After the supermarket cashier added to my groceries，it was $12 over what I had on me. I am about to remove items embarrassed from the bag when another shopper handed me a $20 note.“Please don’t put yourself out，” I told him.“Let me tell you story，” he said.“My mother is in the hospital with cancer.I visit her every day and bring her a bunch of flower.I went this morning，and she got very much angry with me for spend my money on more flowers. She demanded that I did something else with that money.But，here，please accept this.It’s your mother’s flowers.”
答案：
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After the supermarket cashier added my groceries, it was $12 over what I had on me. I about to remove items from the bag when another shopper handed me a $20 note.“Please don’t put yourself out，” I told him.“Let me tell you story，” he said.“My mother is in the hospital with cancer.I visit her every day and bring her a bunch of .I went this morning, and she got very much angry with me for my money on more flowers. She demanded that I something else with that money.， here, please accept this.It’s mother’s flowers.”
1. 解析：to改为up。超市收银员累加(add up)“我”购买的食品杂货后，其总价钱比“我”所带的钱还要多12美元。add to表示“添加”，add up“把……加起来”，故此处应把to改为up。
2. 解析：am改为was。此处是在描述发生在过去的事情，应用一般过去时。
3. 解析：embarrassed改为embarrassedly。此处用副词embarrassedly“尴尬地”来修饰动词remove。
4. 解析：story前加a。 story为可数名词，且此处表示泛指，story的发音以辅音音素开头，故需加冠词a。
5. 解析：flower改为flowers。根据flower是可数名词可知，此处应用其复数形式。a bunch of flowers“一束花”。
二十、
短文改错
When I was young，I lived in the countryside.At that time，the trees there were very green，that left a deep impression on me and the water there was so much clear that I even could see the fish swimming.When it gets dark，the air was cooler than it in the daytime.People liked to walk out their houses to chat together.I liked to play games with my friends but ran along the village happily.As the moon rose highly in the sky，the village was lighting.When I looked
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up，I could see the moon and a few star.They were so close to me.It seemed that I could touch them.The life in the countryside were so wonderful.
答案：
When I was young, I lived in the countryside.At that time, the trees there were very green, left a deep impression on me and the water there was so much clear that I even could see the fish swimming.When it dark, the air was cooler than in the daytime.People liked to walk out their houses to chat together.I liked to play games with my friends ran along the village happily.As the moon rose in the sky, the village was .When I looked up, I could see the moon and a few .They were so close to me.It seemed that I could touch them.The life in the countryside so wonderful.
1. 解析：that改为which。考查定语从句。此处为非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，应用which指代前面的主句。
2. 解析：删除so后的much。考查固定结构。此处表示那里的水是如此清澈以至于“我”甚至可以看到鱼在游泳。so...that...表示“如此……以至于……”，为固定结构。
3. 解析：gets改为got。考查动词时态。本文讲述过去的事情，故用一般过去时。
4. 解析：it改为that。考查代词。当天变黑的时候，空气比白天的凉些。that表示“同名异物”，而it表示“同名同物”，故此处应用that。
8. 解析：lighting改为lighted/lit/light。考查动词语态/形容词。此处可表示村庄被照亮了，故用light的过去分词lighted/lit；light除了作名词“光线”外，也可作形容词，意为“明亮的”，故也可用light，在此作表语。
9. 解析：star改为stars。考查名词单复数。a few后跟可数名词复数。
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解析：were改为was。考查主谓一致。在这个村庄的生活是很精彩的。主语为第三人称单数，故将were改为was。
二十一、
短文改错
Dear Peter，
I’m very glad to receive your e－mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay with.
Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own.Apart from the convenient public transportation，our private car will make your visit easy.Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities，I’m sure you will have no trouble communicate with them.Above all，they hosted the American student last year，through that they gained lots of experience.In addition to，the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.
Hope you enjoy your stay there.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案：
Dear Peter，
I’m very glad to receive your e－mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay with.
in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, the house big enough to enable you to have a room of your own.Apart from the convenient public transportation, private car will make your visit easy.Because all the family members can speak English and have outgoing personalities, I’m sure you will have no trouble with them.Above all, they hosted American student last year, through they gained lots of experience.In addition to , the cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.
Hope you enjoy your stay there.
Yours，
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Li Hua
4. 解析：our改为their。考查代词。文章是“我”在为Peter介绍他所要寄宿的家庭的情况，与下文中的“them”相照应，故应将our改为their。
5. 解析：fluently改为fluent。考查形容词。修饰名词应用形容词，故用形容词fluent作定语修饰English。
6. 解析：communicate改为communicating。考查固定短语。have no trouble (in)doing sth.意为”做某事没有困难”，为固定搭配，故用动词－ing形式作宾语。
7. 解析：the改为an。考查冠词。根据语境可知，此处表示泛指，故用不定冠词；又因American的发音以元音音素开头，故将the改为an。
8. 解析：that改为which。考查定语从句。在定语从句中，介词后跟关系代词which/whom。结合语境可知，关系词表示前面整件事，故将that改为which。
9. 解析：删除to。考查介词。由语境可知，此处应用In addition表示“此外”，故将介词to删除。in addition to为介词短语，后跟名词、代词或动词－ing作宾语，不可单独使用。
解析：hostess改为hostess’。考查名词所有格。这里指女主人的厨艺，应用名词所有格。
二十二、
短文改错
It is essential to take an useful summer vacation after the exam.There are many kinds of activity for us to take part.First，we can visit our relatives and friends or spend a happily time with our family.Second，seeing a film，listening to music or hang out with our friends will also be excited.Third，we should take more exercise to keep healthy.What’s more，we’d better to review what we had learned at school.Finally，it is necessary of us to do some housework，that can help our parents a lot.Above all，I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation.
答案：
It is essential to take useful summer vacation after the exam.There are many kinds of
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eq \o(activity,\s\do10(activities)) for us to take part .First, we can visit our relatives and friends or spend a time with our family.Second, seeing a film, listening to music or out with our friends will also be .Third, we should take more exercise to keep healthy.What’s more, we’d better to review what we learned at school.Finally, it is necessary us to do some housework, can help our parents a lot.Above all, I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation.
4. 解析：happily改为happy。考查形容词。根据该句中的名词time可知，该处修饰该名词，故用形容词。该处表示首先我们能拜访我们的亲朋好友，或者和家人一起度过快乐的时光。
5. 解析：hang改为hanging。考查动名词。分析该句结构可知，谓语will also be前面的部分为主语；由seeing a film，listening to music可以判断，该处与它们并列，也应当用动名词作主语。此处表示第二，看电影，听音乐或者和朋友们出去玩也会令人很兴奋。
6. 解析：excited改为exciting。考查形容词。该句主语为事物，故用exciting，表示“令人兴奋的”。
7. 解析：删除better后的to。考查动词不定式。had better意为“最好……”，后接动词原形。该句表示更重要的是，我们最好复习一下我们在学校所学的知识。
解析：that改为which。考查定语从句。分析该句结构可知，该句为非限制性定语从句，关系词指代主句的内容，且在从句中作主语，故用which引导该定语从句。
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二十三、
短文改错
Not long ago，I was touched by the reply from Tsinghua University to Wei Xiang，which aroused a heating discussion.As Wei Xiang lost his father in a very early age，he was brought up by her mother. Despite of serious illness，he overcame all difficulties and was admit to Tsinghua with high marks. He wrote a letter to Tsinghua to apply for a separate room，where his mother could take care of him in the next four year.In the reply，the school promise to satisfy all his requirements and encouraged him to have strong belief in life.It is not only the inspiring story but also the warmth from the university which attracts the public’s attention.From Wei’s story，I learned that hard work would final pay off.
答案：
Not long ago, I was touched by the reply from Tsinghua University to Wei Xiang, which aroused a discussion.As Wei Xiang lost his father a very early age, he was brought up by mother. Despite of serious illness, he overcame all difficulties and was to Tsinghua with high marks. He wrote a letter to Tsinghua to apply for a separate room, where his mother could take care of him in the next four .In the reply, the school to satisfy all his requirements and encouraged him to have strong belief in life.It is not only the inspiring story but also the warmth from the university attracts the public’s attention.From Wei’s story, I learned that hard work would pay off.
1. 解析：heating改为heated。考查形容词。那引起了一场激烈的讨论。故heated“激烈的”符合语境。
2. 解析：in改为at。考查介词。at a very early age“在很小的年纪”为固定搭配。
3. 解析：her改为his。考查代词。根据上文可知Wei Xiang是男性，故此处应用his。
4. 解析：删除of。考查介词。尽管得了严重的疾病，despite“尽管”后跟宾语时不需带of。
5. 解析：admit改为admitted。考查固定搭配。be admitted to“被接收(入学)”为固定搭配。
6. 解析：year改为years。考查名词复数。未来四年母亲能够在那儿照顾他，four后跟复数名词，故此处为years。
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解析：promise改为promised。考查时态。本文叙述的是过去的事情，且全文使用的均为一般过去时，故此处用promised。
解析：final改为finally。考查副词。此处表示“努力最终会得到回报”。修饰动词用副词，因此改为finally。
二十四、
短文改错
A big storm destroyed two villages in South Africa on last Friday，causing 4 death.Over 200 people became homeless as a result of the storm.A farmer said the storm began early in the morning and last one hour.He said，“I was in the kitchen with my wife and children while we heard a loud noise.A few minutes late，our house fell down.I managed to climb out，but much to my shocking，one of my boys were missing.I quickly went back inside and found them safe but frightened.”Soldiers came to rescue those burying under the ruins，and the government provided food，clothes，and shelters for homeless.
答案：
A big storm destroyed two villages in South Africa on last Friday, causing 4 .Over 200 people became homeless as a result of the storm.A farmer said the storm began early in the morning and one hour.He said，“I was in the kitchen with my wife and children we heard a loud noise.A few minutes ， our house fell down.I managed to climb out, but much to my ， one of my boys missing.I quickly went back inside and found safe but frightened.”Soldiers came to rescue those under the ruins, and the government provided food, clothes, and shelters for homeless.
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4. 解析：while改为when。考查连词。此处表示当我们听到一阵很大的噪音时，“我”和妻子以及孩子们正在厨房。表示“当……时”，用连词when。
5. 解析：late改为later。考查副词。“时间段＋later”意为“多久以后，过了多久”，相当于“after＋时间段”；“时间段＋late”表示“迟于安排(预期)的时间多久”，故此处用later。
6. 解析：shocking改为shock。考查名词。前有形容词性物主代词my修饰，应用名词形式。much to one’s shock“令某人大吃一惊的是”。
7. 解析：were改为was。考查主谓一致。“one of＋可数名词复数”意为“……之一”，作主语时谓语动词用单数形式。
8. 解析：them改为him。考查代词。这里指的是上文所说的“one of my boys”，所以用him。
9. 解析：burying改为buried。考查非谓语动词。bury与其逻辑主语those之间构成动宾关系，所以用过去分词作后置定语。
解析：homeless前加the。考查冠词。“the＋形容词”表示“一类……”。the homeless意为“无家可归者”。
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