第二十二讲 九年级(下) Modules 1—4
旅 行
旅行所涉及的内容非常广泛,可归纳为以下三个方面:1.旅行安排;2.旅行故事及感受;3.景点介绍。
【提分好词】
1.go camping去露营
2.go abroad出国
3.go for a picnic去野餐
4.go to the beach/countryside去海滩/乡下
5.climb the mountain爬山
6.take a study trip参加研学旅游
7.take a photo照相
8.book a ticket 订票
9.on vacation/holiday在度假
10.places of interest名胜古迹
11.somewhere interesting有趣的地方
12.go on a summer camp参加夏令营
13.on the way to...在去……的路上
14.have fun/have a good/great time玩得愉快
15.pay a visit to...去……参观
16.show sb.around带某人参观
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17.decide to do sth.决定做某事
18.can't wait to do sth.等不及做某事
19.consider doing sth.考虑做某事
20.be about to do sth.即将做某事
21.hope to do sth.希望做某事
22.look forward to doing sth.期望做某事
23.have plans for/prepare for 为……做打算/做准备
【提分好句】
1.Through travel, we can get some valuable experiences.通过旅行,我们能获得一些有价值的经历。
2.I'm going to the countryside to get close to nature.我打算去郊区亲近一下大自然。
3.The Great Wall is a wonderful place to visit.长城是一个旅游的好地方。
4.I feel very happy and excited about the coming trip.对于即将到来的旅行,我感到既高兴又兴奋。
5.I'm going to Beijing with my friends next weekend.I hope we will have a good time there.下周末我打算和朋友们一起去北京。我希望我们在那里玩得开心。
6.I think that trip is meaningful.我认为那次旅行是有意义的。
7.I met many people and made friends with them during my trip.在我的旅途中,我遇到很多人并和他们交了朋友。
8.Traveling really opens your eyes to other cultures.旅游真正能使人开阔眼界,了解其他文化。
9.Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.读万卷书,行万里路。
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10.It's my pleasure to tell you about my plan of the coming summer vacation.我很高兴告诉你我对即将到来的暑期的安排。
11.How meaningful and colorful my vacation will be! 我的假期将会多么有意义并丰富多彩啊!
旅行可以使人放松,开阔眼界。诸多旅行中,你最难忘的是哪次呢?请以"The trip I will never forget"为题,根据以下提示与要求,用英语写一篇短文,记叙你的一次旅行。
提示:
1.Where did you go?
2.What did you do there?
3.How did you feel about the trip?
要求:
1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名等信息;
2.不少于80词。
The trip I will never forget
【写作指导】
▶本题为命题作文,审题时需注意提取以下信息:
1.主题:难忘的旅行
2.体裁:记叙文
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3.人称:第一人称
4.时态:一般过去时
▶思路点拨:通过分析所给的三点提示可以看出文章可以分三段。第一段,指出去哪里旅行;第二段,叙述旅行过程中的见闻及活动;第三段,总结对这次旅行的感受。
【思维模板】
【高分佳作】
The trip I will never forget
①I had a two-day trip to Qingdao with my friends last summer vacation.We had a wonderful time there.
We went to Qingdao by bus.②When we got there in the afternoon, we couldn't wait to go to the beach near our hotel.The weather was nice.Everything
【得分点拨】
①开门见山,直奔主题,交代了旅行的时间、目的地和相关人物等信息;had a two-day trip to, had a wonderful time等的使用令人眼前一亮。
②使用了when引导的时间状语从句以及固定搭配couldn't wait to do sth.,句式灵活多变。
③
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was ③as beautiful as I imagined.We walked along the beach and ④enjoyed the soft sand, the gentle wind and the blue sea.In the evening, we had a big dinner.It was really delicious.The next morning, we went to Laoshan Mountain.It is not high, but there is an old and interesting story about it.So it receives a lot of visitors every year.
I enjoyed this trip ⑤so much that I will never forget it.
as...as结构的使用,体现了扎实的语言基础。
④enjoy后跟三个并列的宾语,为文章增色不少。
⑤结尾再次点题,so...that结构的使用 使情感表达更充分。
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