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【全国Ⅰ卷】During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also I went here again,they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.They also had a small pond,which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
【答案】
1.countryside前加the 2.find改为found
3.another改为other 4.here改为there
5.chicken改为chickens 6.which前面加in 或者which改为where
7.sell改为selling 8.happily改为happy
9.return后面去掉for 10.but改为and
【解析】
1.考查定冠词。特指用定冠词the。表示“乡下,农村”的country或countryside前面要带定冠词the。
2.考查时态。此处谓语需要和句子前后时态保持一致,也采用一般过去时。
3.考查形容词。由于animals是复数,所以用other修饰,意为“其他的”。another做定语要修饰单数名词。
4.考查行文逻辑错误。指代远处用there,意为“那里”。
5.考查名词单复数。dozens of 后接名词的复数形式。
6.考查关系词。定语从句中缺少地点状语。先行词为pond,因此用in which或where。
7.考查动名词误用。介词后用动名词做宾语。
8.考查形容词、副词误用。此处felt是连系动词,接形容词做表语,故将happily改成happy。
9.考查固定搭配。此处 every two years为每两年的意思。时间名词有every ,each, last, next ,this, that等词修饰时,其前不用介词。
10.考查并列连词。根据连词前后句意为并列关系而非转折关系,因此用and恰当。
B
【全国卷II】When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we
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would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
【答案】
11.Friday’s改为Friday 12.sort改为sorts
13.kid前面the改为a 14.watching改为watch
15.would not后面去掉to 16.us改为me
17.I后面加was 18.for改为with
19.are改为were 20.where改为when
【解析】
11.考查名词的所有格。名词的所有格后面可以接名词night。意为“礼拜五的晚上”。
12.考查名词单复数。all后需要接名词的复数。
13.考查冠词。这里表示“作为一个孩子”,a用在表示泛指的单数名词前,the表示特指。
14.考查动词不定式。to do表示目的。
15.考查情态助动词。情态动词would后接动词原型,不需要另外加to。
16.考查人称代词。句意:他们会对我说玩纸牌能锻炼大脑。偷换人称代词,是对“我”说,前面提的I,而不是we, 故把us 改为me。
17.考查固定搭配。be willing to do sth意为“愿意做某事”。本文介绍的是过去的情况,故用过去时,所以在unwilling前加was。
18.考查介词。play the games with sb意为“和某人在一起”,符合句意。
19.考查时态。句子使用一般过去时态,所以此处保持一致。
20.考查宾语从句的连接词。teach sbsth,此处宾语从句连接词并不是表示地点状语,而是时间状语。故把where改为when。
模拟精做
A
【2018—2019学年度济宁市高考模拟考试】
Dear Li Hua,
In your last email,you mentioned you felt frustrating at your small vocabulary. Now,I’d
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like to share you my ideas.
In fact,it’s not such hard to build a large vocabulary—you have to keep at it daily,but pretty soon you will find you have an excellent vocabulary.One of the effective ways are to read good books and you’d better to read at least one good book a week.It’s far good than any other method because you can improve your vocabulary while read an interesting piece of literature.Another nice thing is that you can learn new words and its usages unconsciously,which will help enlarge your vocabulary natural.
Yours,
Peter
【答案】
21.frustrating改为frustrated 22.share后加with
23.such改为so 24.but改为and
25.ways后的are改为is 26.better后去掉to
27.good改为better 28.read改为reading
29.its改为their 30.natural改为naturally
【解析】
21.考查形容词。frustrated意为“灰心的,沮丧的”,用来修饰人。
22.考查固定搭配。share with sbsth。意为“和某人分享某事”。
23.考查副词。so作为副词,修饰形容词hard。such是形容词,不能修饰hard。
24.考查连词。根据前后句意,此处需要并列连词。
25.考查主谓一致。one of短语做主语,谓语动词用单数。
26.考查形容词的比较级。far后面修饰比较级。
27.考查情态动词。had better是情态动词,后面不接动词原型,因此to要删去。
28.考查非谓语。while引导的时间状语从句省略了主语和系动词,还保留现在分词。
29.考查物主代词。their指代前面new words的用法,所以应该用复数。
30.考查副词。副词用来修饰动词enlarge。
B
【四川省绵阳市高中2016级(2019届高三)第一次诊断性考试】I'm well feed at home with Dad as my cook. Dad has acquired various cooking method by trial and error. Not only does his cooking appeal to my appetite, but also guarantee the diversity of nutrition for me. Dad includes large amounts of fruits, vegetables or grains in my regular meals to keep my diet balanced. For each one meal, I eat quite a lot, but I don’t actually risk any healthy problem. So when comparing me with my classmates, I feel very lucky to live with such good dad. I also feel grateful for my dad just because of which he has been doing for me ever since.
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【答案】
31.feed改为fed 32.method改为methods
33.guarantee改为guarantees 34.or改为and
35.each后去掉one 36.healthy改为health
37.me改为myself 38.good前加a
39.for改为to/towards 40.which改为what
【解析】
31.考查非谓语。系动词后用过去分词做表语。句意:我在家里吃得很好,爸爸是我的厨师。
32.考查名词单复数。various表示各种各样的,后面接名词复数methods。
33.考查主谓一致。not only所在句子使用了部分倒装,句子主语是his cooking,所以用单数guarantees。
34.考查连词。根据蔬菜和谷物是并列关系,都是日常饮食。因此用and,而不是选择关系的or。
35.考查代词。each和one 重复,都表示一,因此去掉one。
36.考查名词。health problem意为“健康问题”。
37.考查人称代词。句意:所以当我和我的同学比较时,我感到很幸运能和这么好的爸爸住在一起。此处句子的主语和宾语都是我,所以宾语用反身代词myself。
38.考查形容词。such修饰单数名词时,放于不定冠词a(an)之前。
39.考查介词固定搭配。feel grateful to/towards sb意为“对某人感到感激”。
40.考查宾语从句连词。of后宾语从句what做doing的宾语,意为“什么”。句意:我也感谢我的爸爸,因为他一直在为我做事。
C
【山东省实验中学2019届高三第一次诊断性测试】
Dear Tony
Recently our school has set up a rule that no students is allowed to take their mobiles into their class. Among we students, it has aroused a heated discussion, in that we put forward different ideas.
Many of the students are strong opposed to the rule, arguing that the mobile had become a necessary part of our life. We also consider it a must for us to get relaxing from our busy studies.
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As for me, I hold an different view. While a mobile phone can help us get some relief, without it we can be more devoted to our studies. Meanwhile we can spare more time to communicate with those around us. Therefore, I believe in that this school rule is beneficial to all student.
I would appreciate if you could share your opinions with me quickly.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
41.students后is改为are 42.we改为us
43.that改为which 或在in前加and 44.strong改为strongly
45.mobile后had改为has 46.relaxing改为relaxed
47.hold后an改为a 48.believe后去掉in
49.student改为students 50.appreciate后加it
【解析】
41.考查主谓一致。students后面用复数are。
42.考查人称代词。介词among后面用宾格。
43.考查句子逻辑关系。此处可以把前后句子变成并列句,即加and,或者也可以变成主从句就把that 改成which,that不能和介词搭配,只能用which。
44.考查副词。strongly用来修饰动词opposed。
45.考查时态。句意:许多学生强烈反对这项规定,认为手机已经成为我们生活中必不可少的一部分。此处只需要使用现在完成时态。
46.考查形容词。relaxed用来修饰人也就是我们。
47.考查冠词。different不是元音开头,所以用a就可以。
48.考查动词。believe后接宾语从句,不需要用介词。
49.考查名词。all后面接名词复数。
50.考查句子成分。if引导条件状语从句,主句中appreciate后缺少宾语,用it做宾语。
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【2018届吉林省实验中学高三高考考前浏览题英语试题】I can still remember my elementary school teacher very well. Sue was my first grade teacher, and she was warmhearted. We have real lessons with her. I would often get into trouble in her class, but I also learned a lot of. In the second grade, I had Rhonda, who treated us kind. We all liked her. She was our friend more than our teacher. Laura was my third grade teacher, and she was really humor! Her class was probably the more fun. But my fourth grade teacher changed life. Her name was Shirley Richardson. She was the sixfoottall
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AfricanAmerican woman. Everyone was scared of her, and in fact her heart was soft. I stopped getting into trouble and also starting to take school seriously.
【答案】
51.school 后的teacher改为teachers 52.have改为had
53.去掉of 54.kind改为kindly
55.humor改为humorous56.more改为most
57.加my 58.the改为a
59.and改为but 60.starting改为started
【解析】
51.考查名词。句意表达的是我的小学老师,肯定不是一个老师,要用复数。
52.考查时态。文章是回忆过去的老师,要用一般过去时态。
53.考查短语搭配。句中a lot是修饰谓语动词learned,要用副词短语,表达程度;a lot of修饰名词,表示数量很多。
54.考查副词。句中kind修饰动词treated,要用副词形式。
55.考查形容词。句中humor作系动词的表语,且前面有副词really修饰,要用形容词形式。
56.考查句中more前有定冠词the,句意表达的是最高级的含义,意思是她的课最有趣。
57.考查代词。句意表达的是老师改变了我的生活,要用形容词性物主代词来限定,使句意明确。
58.考查冠词。句意表达的是泛指,要用不定冠词来限定。
59.考查连词。句意表达的是转折,不是并列。
60.考查分词。句中start是和stopped构成并列谓语,不是作stopped的宾语。
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