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1.【2019届黑龙江省牡丹江市第一高级中学高三上学期开学摸底考试】假如你是李华，你的父母最近计划生第二胎。给你校的外籍老师Lucy写信谈谈你的看法。
要求：字数120左右；参考词汇：sibling 兄弟姐妹。
Dear Lucy,
I can’t wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Lucy,
I can’t wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made. They plan to give birth to a second child. How exciting it is!
Being the only child in the family, most teenagers like me grow up lonely, which will do harm to our psychological health. However, things will change from now on. I am going to have a sibling to play with and share everything with. I will help my parents look after my sibling when he/she is born, ensuring that he/she grows up happily with love and affection all around.
However, I am afraid that I know little about how to take good care of a baby and how to set a good example to my future sibling. Could you give me some advice? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一封书信：你的父母最近计划生第二胎。给你校的外籍老师Lucy写信谈
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谈你的看法。
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：sibling（兄弟姐妹）；give birth to a second child（生二胎）；psychological health（心理健康）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子如：“I can’t wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made.”使用定语从句；“How exciting it is!”运用感叹句；“Being the only child in the family, most teenagers like me grow up lonely, which will do harm to our psychological health.”现在分词在句中做原因状语，同时使用“which”引导的非限制性定语从句；“I will help my parents look after my sibling when he/she is born, ensuring that he/she grows up happily with love and affection all around.”现在分词做伴随状语。
2.【重庆市第一中学2018届高三下学期第一次月考】假定你是李华，你们学校下周将举办一场以“关爱动物”为主题的宣传活动，学生自己设计海报并展览。你的朋友Lisa对此很感兴趣，请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 时间与地点；
2. 活动内容。
注意：1. 词数100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Lisa,
Having known that you take a great fancy to our activity called “Animals Protection”, I am writing to you with the aim of introducing it to you.
It is probably clear that animals are our friends, sharing the same blue planet with us. The activity aimed at protecting animals is scheduled to be held in April in our school. At that time, it must be a time for you to enjoy yourself to the fullest. At that time, a wide range of splendid activities will be held, thus catching your eyes. We’d like our students to design their own posters and exhibit them, thus arousing students’ awareness of animals protection.
I would appreciate it if you could come to the scene in person. You are highly welcome to our school. A prompt reply is much favored.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文的话题“关爱动物”，只有部分的文字提示，所以给考生自由发挥的空间较大，对于考生的综合能力要求较高。因此要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。要弄清题意，确定文章的主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。接着要认真构思，列出简单的提纲，安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾，最后扩展成文。扩展成文时要选择自己熟悉的短语，句式要灵活多变，同时也要选择恰当的连接词，把各个部分连成一个完整的整体。
【点睛】本文结构完成，以简单句为主，辅以省略句，非谓语，同时还运用了常用句式“I would appreciate it if…”，句式较为灵活。句中既有主动语态，又有大量的被动语态，相互衬托，丰富了表达形式，从而增加文章的可读性。高档词汇和词组，如“ be aimed at; be scheduled to; a wide range of splendid activities; to the fullest; catch your eyes; arouse students’ awareness of” 等增加了文章亮点。
本文第一段用一个非谓语作状语的省略句式：“Having known that you take a great fancy to our activity called “Animals Protection”, I am writing to you with the aim of introducing it to you.”既简洁又具体地点明了文章的话题“Animals Protection”。
第二段中运用了名词性从句“It is probably clear that animals are our friends, sharing the same blue planet with us.”。“…thus catching your eyes.”和“…thus arousing students’ awareness of animals protection.”运用了两个动词 -ing形式的非谓语作状语，充分展示了较强的语言表达能力。同时还运用了一个常用句式“I would appreciate it if... “(I would appreciate it if you could come to the scene in person. ）。
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1. 【成都外国语学校2018-2019学年上学期开学考试】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Michael对中国文化很
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感兴趣。他听说中国人很重视家风传承，在给你的电子邮件中提出想了解你家的家风以及家风对你的影响。请你给他回复一封信。注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：家风 family spirit
Dear Michael,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Michael,
How is everything going? I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture and that you want to know something about my family spirits.
Actually, many good family spirits have been passed down from generation to generation in my family. My grandparents and parents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty, bravery, perseverance and diligence and most importantly, they have set good examples to me. My family spirits have a profound influence on me, and thus I always follow what they have taught me. For example, be friendly to others and offer a helping hand when others are in need. Besides, I am all the time positive and never stop chasing my goal whenever I run into difficulties. Thanks to those good family spirits, both my life and study run smooth.
I hope you will be satisfied with my introduction. By the way, I sincerely invite you to come to China and stay in my home for some time to experience more Chinese culture by yourself. You are warmly welcome.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇书信类作文。你的美国朋友Peter对中国文化很感兴趣。他听说中国人很重视家风传承，
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在给你的电子邮件中提出想了解你家的家风以及家风对你的影响，要求你给他回复一封信。结合自己的实际情况写出你家的家风以及家风对你的影响。文章要写得简明扼要，目标明确，具有合理性。并对自己的看法进行总结。
【点睛】本文第一段开门见山地说出“I’m glad to know that you are interested in...”。第二段阐明了自己的家风，以被动语态句式很好地作了开头：“have been passed down”；第三段讲到了家风对自己的影响运用了宾语从句：“thus I always follow what they have taught me”，同时也恰当地运用了状语从句：“I am all the time positive and never stop chasing my goal whenever I run into difficulties.”。
本文中还运用了许多连词如“Beside; By the way”使文章条理清晰。同时还使用了一些固定短语如“passed down from generation to generation”，“lay emphasis on”，“most importantly, set good examples to”，“have a profound influence on me”等，给文章增添了魅力及可读性。总之，本文结构完整，布局合理，简明扼要。文中使用了多种句式，如宾语从句的使用，并用恰当地运用了固定句式，增加了文章亮点。
2.【2019届湖北省仙桃中学高三8月考试】假如你是李华，你校外教Mr. Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒着贴的，感到很好奇，写信向你询问此事。请你给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他高考后来你家过端午节。
参考词汇：端午节the Dragon Boat Festival；福字the character Fu
注意：1.词数：100个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Brown,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m really glad to receive your letter. As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their best wishes for the new year. In Chinese, the character for “upside down” sounds the same as the character for “to arrive” so this means that happiness is arriving. Quite interesting, isn’t it?
By the way, I’d like to invite you to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival with my family after the College Entrance Exam. It’s a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan and we usually eat zongzi and enjoy dragon boat races. It’ll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本题文体是说明文。话题是向你的外教Mr.Brown介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他在高考后来你家过端午节。写作要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语进行准确表述。
文中使用了由“as”引导的非限制性定语从句“As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival.”和运用了“that”引导的宾语从句“this means that happiness is arriving.”以及反意疑问句“Quite interesting, isn’t it?”还运用了用“it”作形式主语的句子“It’ll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.”。另外，较高级词汇有如“the same as”，“by the way”，“in memory of”，“look forward to”也为文章增色不少。
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