提纲类作文
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1.【2018·北京】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
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I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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【解析】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），对此表示欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简要介绍应该做哪些方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可使用第二人称。
亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。
使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。
2.【2017·北京卷】你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
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Li Hua
【解析】本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试卷的所有信息，明确有那些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要根据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态，语态，语言表达要符合英语习惯，本文是一封信按照要求也可确定文章的框架结构。三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议路线的原因，最后一段提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句型为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用：highly recommended。连接词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。
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1.【2018届宁夏回族自治区银川一中高三考前适应性训练英语试题】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说，他和几个同学正在学中国古诗，请你推荐一本有助于学习古诗的书籍。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.书名及作者：Read Poetry&Learn History by Wang Chunyong;
2.推荐理由；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数：100左右。
2.可以适当增减细节，但不能逐字逐句翻译。
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know you are learning classical Chinese poetry.__________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know you are learning classical Chinese poetry, and I'd like to recommend a book to you. The book entitled Read Poetry & Learn History by Wang Chunyong, is suitable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry.
As is known, China is a great country with a long history and a nation filled with classical Chinese poetry. The poems of the book can reflect the Chinese history and culture, many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of ancient Chinese. And they can also improve your appreciation of Chinese poetry.
So it would be a choice for you. I believe you will understand the poems easily and efficiently. Wish you to enjoy the book and know more about China.
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】此文为提纲类作文-建议信，写作步骤如下:
第一：审题,抓要点。此题的要点有:1.背景介绍:你的美国笔友Mike来信说,他和几个同学正在学中国古诗,请你推荐一本有助于学习古诗的书籍。2.书名及作者: Read Poetry Learn History by Wang Chunyong;
3.推荐理由:适宜外国读者;学古诗,了解中国历史、文化及古代生活;4.表达祝愿。
第二：定人称，定时态，第一人称，一般现在时。
第三:列提纲。
【亮点说明】
1高级句型: I’m glad to do
I’d like to recommend
As is known
many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of ancient Chinese
2.高级结构: The book, entitled Read Learn History by Wang Chunyong. is suitable fora great country with a long history and a nation with classical Chinese poetry
3.高级词汇: Poetry recommend；reflect；appreciation
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2.【2018届山东省滨州市邹平双语学校一、二区高三上学期第一次联考】假如你是高中生李华, 你从报纸上得到一则某社区招募暑期照顾老人的家政人员的广告。你对此项工作非常感兴趣, 你希望得到这样的工作。请根据以下提示, 用英语给社区负责人写一封求职信, 信的内容包括以下几个方面:
1. 对这项工作的认识(如对本人、学生及社会的益处等);
2. 个人优势(如性格、照顾别人的能力等);
3. 你的计划(怎样照顾老人)。
提示:1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数; 2. 词数:100个左右。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have read your advertisement on the newspaper and
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I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I have read your advertisement on the newspaper and I am writing to apply for this job. I know the old people have devoted themselves to our society. So it’s our duty to look after them well, through which we can also get a better understanding of our society and ourselves. The job can also help me know how to get on well with the old people.
As a senior high school student, I am easy to get along with and I am careful with everything I do, especially looking after others.
If I am employed, first of all, I’ll make efforts to build a happy and relaxing relation with them. Then I will pay attention to their diet and physical exercise. What’s more, I know how to give first aid when an emergency happens.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给招募暑期照顾老人的家政人员的社区负责人写一封求职信，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：对这项工作的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等）；个人优势（如性格、照顾别人的能力等）；你的计划（怎样照顾老人）．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为对做志愿者这项工作的认识．第二部
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分为个人优势．第三部分为你的计划。
【亮点说明】
重点短语与句型：
be of great value 非常有价值
be highly thought of 高度评价
in need of 需要
高分句型一：I am very interested in this kind of work，which I think is of great value to us and our society..此句用了which 引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：I once worked for a month at a nursing home near my school where I was highly thought of by the old此句I was highly thought of by the old是定语从句，修饰a nursing home．
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