Unit 1 Past and present
单元主题写作一
话题分析
随着年龄的增长、时间的推移,人们的相貌、性格、兴趣爱好可能会发生变化,人们的行为习惯、生活环境也会发生许多变化。本单元的话题就是阐述某地的变化,进行今昔对比。
常用表达
1. 在过去的……年里,我的家乡发生了巨大变化。
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past…years.
2. 自从……以来,情况开始有了改善。
Things have begun to improve since…
3.……过去常常……但是现在…… …used to…but now…
4.有许多俱乐部和课外活动……
There are lots of clubs and afterschool activities…
5.但是现在,一切全变了。But now, everything has changed.
典例精析
过去的家乡:人们生活贫困,房屋破旧;人们不爱护环境,随处扔垃圾;交通不便。现在的家乡:人们生活富裕,住房宽敞、明亮;大家都保护环境,山变绿了,水变清了,天变蓝了;交通方便,许多人都有私家车……
请你根据以上所给中文提示,以 “The Changes in My Hometown” 为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
写作指导
1.主要用对比法,即家乡的过去与现在进行对比。注意先写过去再写现在,多用转折连词。
2.要点:家乡环境、交通的变化;人民生活水平的变化及其他。
3.写作时要正确使用时态。在谈论过去的情况时,通常使用一般过去时;描写现在的情况时,通常使用一般现在时;强调已经出现的结果时,要用现在完成时。
范文示例
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very poor. People lived in small and old houses, and the traffic was very poor.People had no idea of protecting the environment, and they dropped rubbish everywhere.The villagers lived a hard life.
However, as time goes by, things have changed greatly. Now people live in big houses and some people even have their own cars. Everyone takes action to protect the environment. The water in the river is clean and the sky is blue. The new roads are wide. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit my hometown. I'm sure people's life in my hometown will become better and better in the future.
假如你们学校正在开展研究性学习(exploring learning strategies),请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇短文,让更多的学生了解你校开展研究性学习的一些情况。
注意:1.短文应包括表格提示的所有内容,可适当发挥; 2.词数:80左右(开头已给出,
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不计入总词数)。
过去
现在
课堂
老师讲解知识点,学生听讲,记笔记,没有足够的时间独立思考问题。
老师提出问题,学生相互讨论,并学会与他人合作,从而找出解决问题的方法。
课后
做大量的作业。
丰富多彩的课外活动,如读自己喜欢的书、去图书馆或上网查资料等。
个人感受
……
Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies.
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教师详解详析
自我展示
One possible version:
Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies.
In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn't have enough time to think about problems independently. And we had to do much homework after class. But now teachers show the problems to us first, and then we discuss them for a while. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we've learnt how to cooperate with others. After class, we can have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on.
In a word, now we are the masters of our study and we're happy.
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