2020年中考英语考点专项突破题专题42书面表达四（含解析）.doc

专题 42 书面表达四 一、山东滨州 九、书面表达 71.即将毕业，请以“My favorite teacher”为题，写一篇英语短文，短文包括以下内容： 1. 老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等； 2. 以事例描述喜爱的原因； 3. 表达对这位老师的感激和祝福。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名； 3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，课适当加 2-3 分； 4. 词数：80 词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 My favorite teacher It’s time to graduate from junior high school. I’d like to write something about my favorite teacher. ________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ 【答案】 My favorite teacher It’s time to graduate from junior high school. I’d like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair. When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize. I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her! 【解析】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 graduate from，of all the teachers，of medium height，so that，be afraid to do，take part in，give up，encourage sb. to do，at the weekends，thanks to sb.，the first prize 等。而并列结构 She is of medium height and has long straight hair./ I changed my attitude and won the first prize.和 She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading./ When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition./ I will never forget the wonderful time we were together.等复杂从句结构的 运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写 作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 二、山东青岛 61.人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一 次……。请根据提示，就你的第一次……写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 第一次……的整个过程； 2. 你的感受。 要求： 1. 词数：80 —100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time 【答案】The first time to learn to swim As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to learn to swim. Last summer vacation, my father took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me to swim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He encouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water first. Then, He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool, I was so frightened that I couldn’t move. But I never gave up, I felt safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I could swim by myself. Although I couldn't swim very well, I was very happy. I will never forget this experience, because I not only learned how to swim, but also learned to be brave! 【解析】 这是一篇材料作文，根据提示信息，选择给你印象深刻的第一次活动进行描述并谈谈自己的感受。时态主 要为一般过去时，人称主要为第一、三人称。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。首 先开门见山，介绍自己的第一次活动是什么，接下来详细介绍第一次活动的整个过程，最后谈一谈自己的 感受。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。注意： 注意紧扣主 题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范，避免出现拼写错误；词数在 80—100。 三、山东日照 66.写作 假如你是李华，你的外国朋友 Jack 计划今年暑假来日照旅游度假。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封信。 1.介绍日照地理位置、气候环境等； 2.向他推荐一至两处景点； 3.询问具体计划，以便做好准备。 要求： 1.根据提示内容，不要逐字翻译； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名； 3.词数 90 左右。 Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation. ______________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ Yours, Lihua 【答案】Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation. Sunshine in southeastern Shandong Province China, its temperature is neither too high nor too low. Rizhao Wulian Mountain Scenic Area is a combination of Wulian Mountain and Jiuxian Mountain. Rizhao Seashore National Forest Park is a rare natural seashore bathing ground in northern China. Do you have any good plans? Give me a call before you come. I'll show you these beautiful sceneries. Yours, Lihua 【解析】 假如你是李华，你的外国朋友 Jack 计划今年暑假来日照旅游度假。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封信。本 文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想 象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是 用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑 关系。 四、山东聊城 六、书面表达 46.假如你叫陈伟, 2019 年 6 月 22 日和 23 日是你中考后的第一个周末, 请你制定一个周末活动计划, 并用 英语给你的英国笔友 Alan 写一封电子邮件, 说明你的活动安排。 主要活动内容包括: 1. 6 月 22 日上午在家读书; 下午与家人和朋友外出活动。 2. 6 月 23 日到朋友家附近的公园捡垃圾。 3. 你对本次活动的期待。 注意: 1. 邮件字数: 80 词左右。 ,2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯, 但邮件中不能出现真实的人名、地名。 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给击, 不计入总词数。 Dear Alan, I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Chen Wei 【答案】Dear Alan， I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. On the morning of 22nd June, I'm going to get up a little late and then read an interesting storybook. In the afternoon I'm going out with my family and friends. We're going to take a walk in the country near our home or go swimming in the lake. And on 23rd June we're going to collect liter in the park near my friend's house. I think it's going to be a great weekend-busy but good fun! Yours, Chen Wei 【解析】 写作要求以电子邮件的形式介绍自己中考后的第一个周末活动计划。写作时要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试 题提供的所有信息，明确要点：分别从时间和活动安排来介绍，根据表达的内容确定句子的时态，就本文 而言应该用一般将来时态，会用到 be going to 结构，人称为第一人称。在时间的表达上注意介词的正确使 用，在某一天的早晨、下午、晚上用介词 on。写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使用恰当的连词，使文意 连贯，表达流畅。五、山东济宁 八.写作 46.假如你是 Wang Hong, 你的美国笔友 Kevin 下学期将作为名交换生来你们学校。下面是他发给你的一封 e-mail.请根据邮件内容给予恰当的回复。 注意: 1.文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息. 2.100 词左右(开头,结尾已给出,不计人总词数)。 Wang Hong My Questions Dear Wang Hong, How are you doing? You might not believe it, but I’m going to your school as one of five exchange students next term. And I’m so excited! However, I’m worried about communicating with the teachers and students. As you know, I can speak only a little Chinese. What should I do? Besides, I want to learn to play pin-pong. Can you find a good player to help me? If you can, tell me something about him or her. Looking forward to your reply Bets wishes! Yours, Kevin 参考词语 talk in English, help sb. with, be friendly and helpful, practice... with, play well, win a good prize. 【答案】Dear Kevin I’m glad to hear from you.You said you were worried about communicating with the teachers and students because you could speak only a little Chinese.You don’t be worried about it.You can talk with them in English.They can also help you with Chinese.They are very friendly and helpful.You also said you wanted to learn to play ping-pong.You can practice it with Li Lei.He is my best friend.He plays it very well.He won a good prize last week.He is ready to do others.With his help,you will be good at it. Welcome to our school. Best wishes. Yours Wang Hong 【解析】 这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把 这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意不同的时 态和人称，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 六、山东泰安 第三节 写作 52.习近平总书记在全国教育大会上提出了“立德树人”的人才培养根本任务，作为初中毕业生，你有什么 人生规划？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。 . 提示： 1. 作为中国人而自豪：过去，我国优秀的传统文化影响了世界：今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来 越强大，许多科技世界领先；… 2. 为实现“中国梦”而奋斗：学会做一个懂感恩、守规矩、善良诚信的人；不畏难，努力学习知识、 提高能力，将来成为一名… 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；演讲中不得提及生个人身份的相 关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；词数 80—100，开头结尾已给出（不计入词数）。 Hello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ That's all. Thank you! 【答案】Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Chang’e 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on. As a teenager, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. What’s more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. In addition, we’d better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire us. That's all. Thank you! 【解析】 本文属于材料作文，谈论祖国的伟大强盛以及为实现中国梦我们应该做的努力。根据要表达的内容确定并 准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、 主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比较 级 and 比较级, devote oneself to doing, in order that, try one’s best 以及 first of all, what’s more, in addition 和 last but not least 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺， 行文连贯。 七、山东潍坊 五、写作 46.请根据上文内容和下列问题提示进行续写，使之失构成一个完整的故事。注意： 1.续写故事的词数为 80 左右； 2. 展开合理想象，适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 可根据需要自主选用以下参考词汇： Call the police dangerous escape catch robber (强盗) 【答案】 “A knife ! My God ! He was really dangerous .It was wise to drive him off my car .” Andrea thought .Then she breathed deeply and called the police to tell them what had happened .A moment later , the police came to her .Andrea pointed to the direction the “old lady” might be in .Then the police drove along the road to look for “her” . How amazing ! The police were surprised to see that the “old lady” was still standing by the road .The police stopped and said , “Hello ,madam .We’d like to take you to Brockboune ,Get in ,please .” B “How dangerous ! What should I do ? ” Andrea said to herself ,”He must be a thief or robber .” As soon as she realized this , Andrea drove to the nearest police station and told the police what had happened ,then she left . When Andrea got home ,she told her parents all about the “old lady” . After hearing the story ,her parents hugged her tightly and said ,”What a lucky girl ! You are brave and smart enough to protect yourself .We are proud of you !” An hour later ,the police phoned her that they had caught the man-a real robber .【解析】 这是一篇根据短文内容和图表提示，要求续写一个完整的故事。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织 材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出 的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯 语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 重点短语：as soon as 一……就……，call the police 报警，be proud of 为……感到骄傲 八、山东东营 八、书面表达 66.Sunday Mail 青少年专栏开展“对身边的人说一句话”主题征文活动，这句话或许是对父 母的一句“我 爱你”，或许是对老师、同学的一句 “谢谢你”，或许是对身边人的一句“对不起”等。请将“I want to say_______”补充完整，并以此为题写一篇英语短文，如：I want to say thank you 等。谈谈你想说那句话 的原因以及发生在那句话背后的故事，并说说你的感受。 要求： 1. 认真审题，把握要点； 2. 行文连贯，条理清晰，不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息； 3. 100 词左右。 【答案】I want to say thank you I want to say thank you to my dear mother. She not only cares about my life, but always helps me out. Once I argued with my best friend Lucy, because she always pointed out my shortcomings. My mother talked with me and advised me to think about her words. I did so and found what Lucy said was helpful to me. With my mother’s help, I didn’t lose my best friend and learned how to deal with problems with friends. She does all that she can do for me. No matter what will happen in the future, I will love her forever. 【解析】本文属于话题作文，对身边的人说一句话，并谈谈你想说那句话的原因以及发生在那句话背后的故事，并 说说你的感受。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、 主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 not only...but, care about, help sb out, argue with, point out, talk with, advise sb to do, think about, be helpful to, with one’s help, deal with 以及 in the future 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 九、山东菏泽 第二节 书面表达 56.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Lisa 来信说她最近正在学习汉语，在学习过程中遇到"程门立雪"（ Cheng Men Li Xue）这一成语，不解其意，请你根据下面图片提示，用英语给她回信，简要叙述这个成语故事，并 谈谈自己的理解和感悟。 要求： 1．语言规范，语句通顺，可适当发挥； 2．字数：100 词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。 可能用到的词： idiom 成语； during the Northern Song Dynasty 北宋时期；Cheng Yi 程顾； have a nap 小憩； disturb 打扰； moved 感动的； respect 尊敬 Dear Lisa, I'm glad to hear from you．___________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Lisa, I'm glad to hear from you. I am very happy that you have great interest in learning Chinese. Let me tell you the story about the idiom Cheng Men Li Xue. It is a story during the Northern Song Dynasty. There was a student called Yangshi. He had a confused problem. He wanted to ask famous teacher Cheng Yi. When he arrived his house, the teacher was having a nap. So the page boy asked Yangshi to visit the teacher another time. But Yangshi refused. Suddenly it started snowing. The page boy asked him to come in and wait in the house since it was very cold. However, Yangshi stood in front of the gate. Even later it snowed heavily. After the teacher finished all the things, Yangshi still stood in the snow. Then the teacher asked him, “Why not come another day? How silly you are!”. Yangshi said, “I have learned something from you, I can't disturb you, and I must show my respect for you”. Finally, Cheng Yi was moved by Yangshi's action and taught him a lot. It shows us that we should show our respect to our teachers. Hope it will help you to understand. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 这是一篇看图作文，要求我们根据图示给自己的英国笔友 Lisa 写信，给她解释“程门立雪”这个成语的含 义。写作前，应仔细观察图片，弄清楚图片中发生的事情，然后用英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇文章的 主要内容应包括：首先引入 Lisa 学习中遇到的问题，点明写这封信的目的；然后重点是解释该成语的含义， 根据图片提示进行表达；最后谈一谈自己对这个成语的理解和感悟。短文中开头和结尾部分应使用一般现 在时态；主体部分用一般过去时，注意谓语动词的正确形式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化。写作时应 注意：首先应将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在内，包括题目中给出的提示词，在写作时应用上。注意分 清结构和层次，叙述应清晰、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，在词序以及表达上英语与汉语有很多 不同的地方，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从整句话的结构出发，选择适当的句型、词汇和短语进行表 达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句以及复合句，为提升作文档次，可使用被动语态、非谓语动 词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯，表达自然、流畅。 十、山东临沂 61.书面表达 时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I have changed a lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。 要求：l. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分； 2.不少于 60 词。 提示： l. What did you use to be like? 2. What is the most important change? 3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it. I have changed a lot! ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 【答案】Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English. I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help. Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 【解析】 本文要写我初中三年的变化，根据习作提示，首先要指出我最大的变化是什么，并描述出具体变化是怎么 发生的，所以要针对自己某一个最大的变化来写，而不是泛泛地写很多变化；时态主要是一般过去时和一 般现在时。本篇文章，首先开篇点题，我有很多变化，我最大的变化是我对待英语学习态度的变化。第二段是文章的主体，先描述过去学习英语的状况，其中用到表达过去常用的句型 used to do ;在妈妈及老师的 帮助下，我的英语学习发生了很大变化，具体表现为 I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后对以上变化进行总结， 并指出对于这个变化，我的心情如何，Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 整篇文章内容符合要求，时态用云正确，思路清晰，结构完整，是一篇不错的文章。 十一、山东烟台 第二节 写作 56.假设你某英语报社的编辑 Rina, 收到 Li Wei 同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并 向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给 Li Wei 回信。 要求：1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充,语句通顺,意思连贯; 2.词数:100 词左右;开头和结尾已给出 不计入总词数; 3.文中不得出现个入真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇:laugh at; care about; high- fat food; the more…, the healthier… Dear Li Wei, I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. ,Yours Rina 【答案】ear Li Wei, I have received your letter and I can understand you. You must feel bad when being laughed at use of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you. Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble. Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight. Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You'd better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Rina 【解析】 假设你某英语报社的编辑 Rina, 收到 Li Wei 同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你 寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给 Li Wei 回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定 写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小 写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 这是一篇很好的文章，文中用到了一些好的句型：Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you.；Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.这些给文章增色不少。 十二、山东威海 58.书面表达。 58. 再读本试卷阅读理解 A 篇材料, 依据故事情节, 下午 Mr Chen 会与 David 谈话。请以“A Talk with David”为题续写故事, 词数 100 左右。 要求: 1. 仿照阅读理解 A 篇材料写作手法, 采用叙述、对话或二者结合的形式续写故事; 2. 内容要涉及 A 篇中的信件、缺课等相关信息以及 Mr Chen 的建议; 3. 观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅; 4. 题目与开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 A Talk with David At the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence. 【答案】At the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence. “Did your mother really write that letter? ”Mr Chen asked. David's face turned red and then pale. “No, sir, she didn't. I wrote it. I'm very sorry, sir.” "It's the P. E, isn't it? "said Mr Chen. "You are avoiding something, aren't you? " “Yes, sir, ”David admitted. “And what have you been doing these Thursdays? ”Mr Chen asked. "I have been studying in the library, "replied David eagerly. “Oh, well, at least you didn't run off to the cinema, "said Mr Chen. "But you were very silly. What will happen if I report this to your parents and the Principal. " David felt ashamed of himself. “But I won't tell anybody-if you promise me two things, "Mr Chen added. David looked up hopefully. "I want you to promise never to do anything like this again. If you have any problems, discuss them with your parents or with me first. Mr Long knows all about this. He has kindly agreed to help you to overcome your fear of heights. Talk to him after school on Monday. OK? ” “Yes, sir, ”said David with a sigh of relief. “Thank you very much. " David felt happier as he went home. 【解析】 本文属于材料作文，根据 A 篇阅读的故事情节进行续写。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文 意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、 主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 turn red, at least, run off, look up, promise to do, help sb to do, fear of height 以及 with 的复合结构，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺， 行文连贯。十三、山东德州 六、书面表达 51.假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生，你的学校正在参加全市文明校园的评选．以下内容是学校根据《山 东省中小学文明校园评比细则》列举的部分信息．请你根据表格内容，写一篇短文，向社会宣传自己的学 校，并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事，为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。 ①experienced teachers help us make progress1. Teachers' team （师资） ②friendly head teachers grow as a person ①a big library read books to learn more ②a playground do sports 2. School facilities （设施） ③some science labs find something new ①different kinds of trees and flowersbe clean and beautiful3. School environment （环境） ②safety education classes protect ourselves 4. ？ … … 要求：（1）语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学 校名称； 3）80～100 词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数． I'm from No．3 Middle School． My school is making its effort to be a civilized school． Let me introduce it． There are many experienced teachers in my school． They help us make progress in many ways． ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________【答案】I'm from No ．3 Middle School. My school is making its effort to be a civilized school. Let me introduce it. There are many experienced teachers in my school. They help us make progress in many ways. And our head teacher is very friendly, too. For school facilities, we have a library, you can read books to learn more. You also can do sports in the playground. You can find something new in the science labs. As for our school environment, There are different kinds of trees and flowers. So our school is clean and beautiful. We also have safety education classes, these classes can protect ourselves. Finally, our students are polite , too. It will make our school full of civilization. Let's try our best to make our school more beautiful and make it a civilized school. 【解析】 这是一篇根据表格信息介绍自己学校的材料作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作。 内容包括：1. 师资情况：①有经验的老师帮助我们进步。②班主任和蔼可亲，与人为善。2. 学校设施：① 一个大图书馆。②运动场。③一些科学实验室。3. 学校环境：①不同种类的树木和花卉。②安全教育课。 4. 谈谈为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事。另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语 法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。常用的重点句型和短语有 make progress，be friendly，as for，try one’s best to do sth，make our school more beautiful。 十四、山东枣庄 41.书面表达 16． Write a review（评论） of the following story in about 120 words． The review has to include the following points．（阅读下面的故事，请根据下面的提示，写出一篇约 120 词的评论）． （1）The title of your review．（你撰写的评论的标题．） （2）Your idea（s）， examples and the reason（s） for unhappiness and happiness in the story．（你归 纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因．） （3）Your idea（s） of happiness， examples for happiness in your daily life．（归纳你在日常生 活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明．） （4）Your conclusion about happiness．（关于幸福的结论．） （5）The words you may use．（你可能用到的词） be satisfied with（对……满意） desire n．欲望 contentment 知足 the key（关键） to happiness． A long time ago， in a rich and beautiful country， there lived an unhappy king． He slept badly and didn't feel like eating． He often cried for no reason． This made the queen and his people worried． So they called a doctor to examine him．But he found nothing wrong with his body．He said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wear．That would make him happy． The prime minister was called to the palace． But when they explained the king's situation to him， he said，"Although I have a lot of power， it doesn't make me happy． I'm always worried about losing my power．" Then the king's banker came to say， I'm afraid I'm not happy either． I have a lot of wealth， but I'm always worried about losing money． Someone tries to steal my money． Next， the palace singer was called to say， "I'm famous but I'm not happy because I'm worried about being followed by others． I can't be free．" Finally， the top general was told to go out to find a happy man． He searched and searched but couldn't find anyone． Everyone seemed to have their own problems， and no one was truly happy． Just as he wanted to give up． he saw a poor man on the street． He was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself． The general went to him and said，"What makes you so happy？ You have no power， money， or fame．" The man said，"I have everything I want． and I don't want what I can't have． So I'm happy， and my song comes from the happiness in my heart． ""Can you give your shirt to me， I need it， "said the general．"What shirt？ I don' t have any shirts．"answered the man． 【答案】My Thoughts about Happiness Power, wealth, and fame can't always make people happy. For example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have. What can always make me happy？Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have. For instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother when I am studying, getting help from my friends when I am in trouble and so on. These are the moments when I am happy.All in all, don't think about what you can't have. Contentment is the key to happiness. 【解析】 这是一篇要求写评论的文章，根据下面的故事中的相关信息写出一篇约 120 词的评论。所提供的材料中列 举了撰写的评论的标题。主要从：（1）归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因。（2） 归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明；（3）关于幸福的结论。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一 般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意评论中必须包含材料上的故事情节，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉 语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语 的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】 For example，the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.例如，富人不快乐， 因为他们害怕失去钱，而穷人真正快乐是因为他对自己所拥有的感到满足。 句子 because they are afraid of losing money 是由 because 引导的原因状语从句。 【高分句型二】 All in all, don’t think about what you can't have. 总之，不要想你不能拥有的东西。 句子 what you can't have. 做 think about 的宾语。 十五、淄博 六、书面表达(共 1 题，满分 18 分) 假定你是李明，你的英国朋友约翰想了解你参加社会实践活动或研学旅行方面的情况。请用英文给他 写一封 100 词左右的电子邮件，介绍一次你参加的这样的活动。要点如下： 1.你参加了什么活动； 2.你做了什么； 3.你学到了什么。 注意： 1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名； 3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【答案】 Dear John, Thanks for your last e-mail. Now I'm writing to tell you something about a trip called "Be a Kid in the Mountains" I had last summer. After the end of term examination, Mr. Li, our head teacher, took us to join a trip called "Be a Kid in the Mountains". We stayed in a mountain for five days. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire. It was such an unusual experience that we forgot about computers, homework and even our parents. From the trip, I learned how to team with others and we could achieve what we want by ourselves. What do you think of my trip? Please write to me and share something unforgettable with me! Yours, Li Ming 【解析】 假定你是李明，你的英国朋友约翰想了解你参加社会实践活动或研学旅行方面的情况。请用英文给他写一 封 100 词左右的电子邮件，介绍一次你参加的这样的活动。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正 确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知 本文主要确定时态和人称的准确性，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词， 注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：We stayed in a mountain for five days. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork.； In the evening, we can do such activities as “popular games and group dance around the fire.平时在学习中应注意收集一些好的句型或 短语。 十六、江西 59.文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“ We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.” 你同意文章最后提出的观点吗?对此观点你有何看法?请根据下面提示 写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。 写作要点: I. Your opinion (agree/ disagree /…); 2. Reasons (looks, personality 品性, ability …); 3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous person/…). 要求: 1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥; 2.如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名; 3.词数不少于 80。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________ 【答案】 Possible version One; I agree with the opinion. Compared with looks, personality and ability are more important. Because we can’t change our looks easily, but we can decide and control what we do. Thnaks to the kind and hard-working people, our society is becoming better and better. For example, Ma Yun, a well-known businessman, doesn’t look handsome, but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient. He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him. Because of his contribution to our society, we even think he looks so cool. So let’s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks. Possible Version Two In my opinion, I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look like A person's personality and ability are very important, but for some jobs, looks are also important, such as an actor or an actress, a waiter or a waitress, or even a teacher Because it's enjoyable to see a good-looking person For example, my teachers in my class all teach very well, and they are kind and helpful. All of us like them. But the most popular teacher is my English teacher, because she looks really beautiful. She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face So let's try our best to improve our ability, personality and looks. 【解析】 这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做了什 么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点 组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中 给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错 误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 十七、山西 十、书面表达 请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 60.阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力，无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式，它都能让你增长知识，开 阔眼界。最近，某出版社在两万人中，针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查，下图是相关的统计结果， 其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。 请你用两段话写一篇短文，第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读 方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。 要求： 1. 词数不少于 80 词； 2. 首句已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇仅供参考； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。WORD BANK reading on mobile phones, others books reading paper 【答案】 Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it. 60% of the people like to read on mobile phones or e-readers, while only 38.4% choose to read paper books. So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes. As for me, I am still used to reading paper books. Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid. Just because of this, I got into the habit of reading. So when I read paper books now, they always bring me the old feelings. On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes. So you see, I believe e-books won’t take the place of paper books in my heart. 【解析】 这篇作文要求我们对一个人们喜欢的阅读方式的调查结果进行介绍，并结合实际，谈一谈自己喜欢的阅读 方式。审题可知，短文应主要包括两部分内容：首先仔细观察图表，用百分比简要说明图表内容；然后选择其中一项你喜欢的阅读方式，结合自己的经历，谈一谈这种阅读方式的好处。短文应以一般现在时为主， 根据表达需要选择适当的人称，第二部分内容应以第一人称为主叙述。写作时应注意：文章应包括题目中 的所有内容，尤其注意仔细观察图表，将图表中的信息表达清楚、准确。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语 的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构考虑，选择适当的句型、短语和词汇，语句通 顺，表达清楚。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句和复合句，以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。 同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯、自然。这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题 目要求介绍了图表中的统计结果，并谈论了自己喜欢的阅读方式。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完 整，结构清晰，短文分两段，第一段介绍了图表中的调查结果；第二段结合自己的经历谈论了自己喜欢的 阅读方式。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，表达清楚。句式结构文章，以简 单句结构为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、表语从句等复合句结构，长短句结合，调整了文章节奏， 提升了作文档次。文章中较好的句型有：Here is what we have learned from it.、So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. 、However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.、Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid.、On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes.等等。 十八、云南 56.书面表达 A Weekend to Remember 提示：请以“ A Weekend to Remember”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一个令你难忘的周末以及你的感悟。 要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 60 个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 【答案】A Weekend to Remember It was a bright and sunny weekend. I went fishing with my father. We started fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake. Half an hour passed, but we got no fish. I became impatient and wanted to give up. “Just wait patiently, son. Nothing in the world is easy to get. ” My father encouraged me. I sat patiently to fish with my father. Finally, I got a beautiful big fish. A sense and happiness came to me. I'll remember this weekend forever because I have learnt that being patient is so important. 【解析】 这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 bright and sunny、go fishing、as soon as、arrive at、half an hour passed、want to do、give up、in the world、be easy to get 等。而并 列结构 Half an hour passed, but we got no fish. /I became impatient and wanted to give up.和 We started fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake./ I'll remember this weekend forever because I have learnt that being patient is so important.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达 多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表 达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开 思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单 词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 十九、云南昆明 61.书面表达 On my parent’s birthday 某英文网站正在面向全国中学生开展以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动，请你用英文以“ On my parent's birthday”为题目写一篇记叙文投稿，内容为某次你为妈妈或爸爸庆祝生日的经历。 要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 60 个； 2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。 【答案】On my parent's birthday Last Saturday we had a birthday party for my mother at home． 【高分句型一（开篇点题：时间地点人物 事件）Some of my friends ，my uncle and aunt came to the party． Everyone bought her a birthday present．（买生日礼物）My father made a big birthday cake and cooked some delicious food． （做 蛋糕，烹饪美食）My friends helped to put the candles on the big cake． We all sat around the table．Then we began the party． I asked my mother to blow out the candles and make a wish． 【高分句 型二】After that， we sang the birthday song together．（吹蜡烛，许愿，唱生日歌） In the afternoon we watched an interesting movie with my mother．（陪妈妈看电影）Everyone had a good time that day． 【解析】 高分句型一： Last Saturday we had a birthday party for my mother at home． 上周六我们在家为我母亲举办了一个生日聚会．have a birthday party for sb 为某人举办了一个生日聚会 高分句型二： I asked my mother to blow out the candles and make a wish． 我让妈妈吹灭蜡烛许个愿．ask sb to do sth 叫某人做某事，blow out the candles 吹灭蜡烛 ，make a wish 许愿 这是一篇话题作文。要求以自己为妈妈或爸爸庆祝生日的经历，用“ On my parent's birthday”为 题目，写一篇记叙文，向某英文网站“感恩父母”主题征文活动投稿。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要 用第一、第三人称。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注 意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好 不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章 增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。 二十、河南 七、书面表达 61.假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。 1.要点： 1）这个名人是谁； 2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐； 3）你想和他或她谈论什么。 2.要求： 1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数 80 左右。 【答案】 I’d like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei. Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today. I’m expecting this lunch already. 【解析】 这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你想和哪位名人共进午餐。主要从 1）这个名人是谁； 2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；3）你想和他或她谈论什么。这三个方面去介绍。注意时态应为一般现 在时或一般将来时。人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避 免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、 时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有 条理性。 【高分句型一】 Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. 任先生被认为 是一个伟大的人，他总是把一切都安排在前面。 句子 who always has everything mapped out ahead.是由 who 引导的定语从句。 【高分句型二】 If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today. 如果时间允许的话，我今天就为我们 青少年征求他的意见。 句子 If time permits, 是由 if 引导的条件状语从句。 二十一、河北 B) 书面表达 (计 15 分) 81.文明礼貌从我做起，从现在开始，从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求，以 “When to Say Thank You”为题，写一篇短文。 提示:1) When should we say “thank you” at home? 2) When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school? 3) ... 要求:1) 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。 2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。3) 词数 80 个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 参考词汇:wash, encourage, open When to Say Thank You It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 When to Say Thank You It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us.Being polite is a good tradition in our country.Nobody likes a person who is impolite.It’s important for us to be polite.We should say “thank you” to parents when they cook for us.We should say “thank you” when they wash clothes for us.We should also be polite at school.When the teachers help us work out questions ,we should say “thank you” to them.When we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us,we should say “thank you”.When someone open the door for us,we should say “thank you”.We should say “thank you” as often as possible.If everyone is polite to others,the world will be more and more beautiful. 【解析】 这是一篇要求介绍我们在家和在学校怎么做个有礼貌的人。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料， 然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。 根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。 注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 重点短语和句型：say “thank you” to sb 对某人说“谢谢”，it’s+形容词+for sb to do sth 做某事 对某人来说怎么样，help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事，as often as possible 尽可能经常的 二十二、新疆Ⅹ.书面表达（满分15分）初中生活即将结束，请你想一下，谁是你最喜欢的老师？他、她长什么样子？ 你为什么喜欢他、她？以 My favorite Teacher 为题，用英语写一篇短文，请根据要点进行描述，可以结合 具体事例，也可以适当增加自己想写的内容。 要点： 1. What does he/ she look like? 2. Why do you like him/her? 3. ……… 注意： 1. 词数 80~100 2. 可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容，要求行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 【答案】 My Favorite Teacher I'd Like to say thanks to my English teacher. He is very tall and handsome. He has straight brown hair and he doesn’t wear glasses. He usually wear jeans, a T-shirt and sports shoes. I like him because he it really cool and fun, and he is good at soccer. He can always make his class lively and interesting. What's more, he is patient and kind to us students. With his help, we have had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English. I want to say -Thank you!" to my dear teacher. The love and support from him will be with us forever. 【解析】 这是一篇给材料作文，本文所给要点是几个问题，故动笔前先要阅读要点，找出问题的答案。写作中，应 注意描述的全面性，尽量将问题所涉及内容表达完整；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现 在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到 上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:be strict with 对……严格；be ready to do sth 准备做某事；in trouble 处于困难中；try one’s best do to sth 尽力做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。 二十三、青海 60.书面表达 假如你是小明，你的笔友 Sam 给你发了电子邮件，请根据邮件内容进行回复。 要求：1. 逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范。 2. 词数 80 左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 chairman：主席 unique：特别的 Dear Xiao Ming， How are you doing？ I am writing to ask you something about the Chinese Culture Week that we are going to hold in September. As the chairman of the Chinese Learning Club at school，I am thinking about how wel can organize a unique and amazing activity. Therefore，could you please give me some good suggestions on what theme might be better and what exactly we are going to do？Thanks. Sam Dear Sam， It's a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________Xiao Ming 【答案】 Dear Sam, It’s a good idea to have Chinese Culture Week in your school. I think it’s helpful not only to improve your Chinese but also to have a better understanding about China. However, a successful activity depends on how interested students feel. Thus, a good theme will be abslutely necessary. In my opinion, you may consider "Chinese Spring Festival" as your theme. For example, giving a lecture about the Spring Festival may make students get a general idea of it, writing couplets, guessing riddles and making Jiaozi are all the activities that are really interesting and attractive. In this way, students who are involved in the activities will surely experience Chinese culture. Xiao Ming 【解析】 这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 be helpful to，not only…but also，depend on，in my opinion，consider as，for example，give a lecture，in this way，be involved in，experience Chinese culture 等。而固定句型 It’s a good idea to have Chinese Culture Week in your school.和 I think it’s helpful not only to improve your Chinese but also to have a better understanding about China./ In this way, students who are involved in the activities will surely experience Chinese culture.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢 记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开 思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单 词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 二十四、青海西宁 67.文段表达 假如你是李平，你的笔友 Tom 一直想来青海旅游，请你以 e-mai 的形式为 Tom 介绍一下青海并邀请他 今年夏天来青海旅游。内容包括：1. 介绍青海的天气，饮食等； 2. 介绍 12 个景点； 3. 来青海旅游时的注意事项或建议。 要求：1）表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 2）文中不能出现真实校名和姓名； 3）词数 80 词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I am very glad to know that you want to travel around Qinghai. _____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to meeting you soon. Yours, Li Ping 【答案】 Dear Tom, I am very glad to know that you want to travel around Qinghai. I think it’s a good idea to go on a trip to Qinghai in summer. It’s not too hot in summer. The weather is comfortable. You can see the blue sky and white clouds. You can enjoy many different kinds of delicious food. There are many places of interest to visit in Qinghai. Qinghai Lake attracts a large number of tourists all over the world every summer. You can see many kinds of fish swimming in the clean lake. There are many birds flying up and down over the lake. You will find a large of grassland with groups of sheep and yaks (牦牛) around the lake. You will have a good time there. Here is some advice for you. You’d better take warm clothes. You are supposed to take sunglasses and an umbrella with you. I am looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours, Li Ping 【解析】 1.题干解读：这是一封电子邮件，假如你是李平，你的笔友 Tom 一直想来青海旅游，给他介绍一下青海并 邀请他今年夏天来青海旅游。文中包括三部分的要点。 2.例文点评：根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、 固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后 最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。 3.高分亮点： 短语：be glad to do sth.；all over the world；a large number of tourists ；many kinds of fish swimming。 句型：it’s a good idea to do sth.句型；You will find a large of grassland with groups of sheep and yaks (牦牛) around the lake. You will have a good time there. 二十五、陕西 IX.书面表达 66.即将毕业的你，将如何处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢?假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给学校英 文报写一封电子邮件，分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。 提示词：put…into different kinds give…to have a book sale … 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥： 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整： 3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名，校名和地名等） 4.词数：不少于 70 个词，（开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear Editor My name is Li Hua，I'm going to graduate soon，I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks These are my ideas，I hope they can help. Yours， Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Editor My name is Li Hua，I'm going to graduate soon，I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I'm going to give my textbook to my cousin. In this way, he can study at home during the summer vacation. Besides, I want to hold a book sale so that children can buy picture books at a low price. Again, I decided to keep my notes. They bring me many sweet memories. Finally, used paper will be taken to the garbage center. These are my ideas，I hope they can help. Yours， Li Hua 【解析】 即将毕业的你，将如何处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢?假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给学校英文报 写一封电子邮件，分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短 语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有 漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【点睛】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短 语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 二十六、广东 根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。 56.假如你是李华，英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校。该校校长读到以上这篇短文后，对广东文化产生兴趣，准备组织学生来你的校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流。请你写一篇发言稿，在欢迎晚会上向 他们介绍研学活动的相关安排。 内容包括: 推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。 介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排。(包括活动的时间、地点和内容) 参考活动: 欣赏粤剧(Cantonese opera)， 体验功夫(kung fu)， 参加广东历史讲座等。 作文要求: 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 语句连贯,词数 80 个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Good evening,everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________ I hope you'll enjoy your stay here! 【答案】 Good evening,everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. In Guangdong, you can enjoy many traditional food. Such as shrimp dumplings, beef or fish balls, chicken feet and so on. Especially fish balls and chicken feet are really very delicious. I think you will love them. Tomorrow, in the morning, we’ll go to the biggest theatre in Guangzhou. You are going to enjoy Cantonese opera there. We will go to Zhongshan Park in the afternoon. You can experience Chinese Kung fu there. It is amazing. We will attend a lecture on history of Guangdong in the evening. I hope you'll enjoy your stay here! 【解析】 这是一篇要求介绍向来你校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流的学生，介绍研学活动的相关安排。动笔前 先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适 当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般将来时态，注意标点符号及 大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。二十七、广州 第三节 书面表达 64.广州某电台英文频道将开设 Welcome to Guang zhou 栏目,目前面向全市中学生征集“微 州”英文介绍。 请你写一篇英语短文,向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。 注意:1.词数:80 词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数); 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。 Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___Guangzhou is waiting for you. 【答案】 Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China ， Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China.With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food. I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower. As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou. Guangzhou is waiting for you. 【解析】 这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容：广州市的位置、 历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处，并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作，为时内容 丰富、充实，应对每个话题进行拓展，详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称和第三 人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不要遗漏要点。各个内容应 叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构，要分清主次，合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习 惯和汉语的不同，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，可以简单句结构为主，穿插并 列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯， 表达流畅。 【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点：首先 短文内容完整，包含来了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍：第 一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色，简单的几句话包含了大量的信息；第二段是主体段，主要 给读者推荐了一个好去处，并阐述了自己的理由；第三段和第四段是一个结尾，对自己的介绍进行总结。 文章层次清晰，叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整， 符合英语的表达习惯，简单句与复合句结合，使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如 Located in the south of China ，Guangzhou ，with a history of more than two thousand years，plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China、I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot.、Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等等。 二十八、宁夏 61.书面表达 第四届“丝绸之路”宁夏国际马拉松赛将于 2020 年 5 月举行。假定你叫李华，你想成为本届马拉松赛 的一名志愿者。请用英语给组委会写一封申请信，内容包括： 1.个人优势：擅长英语，性格开朗，做事认真，爱好运动。（至少再补充两点） 2.个人承诺：尽力提供优质服务。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：volunteer 志愿者 Dear Sir/Madam， My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h"Silk Road”International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May，2020. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly. Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam， My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h “Silk Road"International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May，2020.I'd like to be a volunteer. I'm a girl/boy of 15，a middle school student.First of all，I do well in English.I'm outgoing.I take everything seriously.Besides，I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before. What's more，I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people. I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race.I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly， Li Hua 【解析】 这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 would like to be a volunteer，a girl/boy of 15，first of all，do well in English，be interested in，what's more，be ready to do，help others，be good at，try to do，look forward to 等。而并列结构 Besides，I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before./ What's more，I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people.和 I'm very glad that the 4h “Silk Road" International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May，2020./ I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race./I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化， 是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻 辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开 思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单 词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 二十九、甘肃兰州 十、书面表达 76.假如你是李华，你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线” (The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)为主题的英语征文活动，你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇短文。 1. 风情线总览(the Yellow River, run through the city of Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the Yellow River)；2. 聚焦景观(Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel(水车), many parks)； 3. 休闲娱乐(fly kites, play chess)； 4. 特色游览(go sightseeing, sheepskin raft(羊皮筏子),water bus)； 要求：1. 80 词左右； 2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；内容上可适度发挥。 注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。 【答案】 The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line The Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what scenic spots the beautiful Yellow River has? Let me tell you! The Yellow River flows through Lanzhou. There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the picturesque Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheel and so on. There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. There, you can enjoy special tours, such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus. The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you! 【解析】 这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下美丽的黄河风情线。主要从风情线总览、聚焦景观、 休闲娱乐和特色游览四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适 当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合 逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】 There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. 有一条著名的公路叫做 滨河路，它沿着黄河行驶。 句子 which runs along the Yellow River.是由 which 引导的定语从句。 【高分句型二】 There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. 有很多休闲娱乐的地方，如放风筝、下棋等。 该句话用 there be 结构来写。 三十、甘肃定西等 76.书面表达 我们生活学习在美丽的甘肃．假设你所在的学校正在组织一个"让世界了解甘肃走向世界"的活动，请根据 以下思维导图的提示，以" The Introduction of Gansu Province"为题，写篇介绍甘肃的英语短文． 要求：1．文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容； 2．句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范； 3．可做适量拓展； 4．词数：80 词左右．（标题需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域，不计入总词数） The Introduction of Gansu Province Location： in the northwest of China Area： an area of 425，900km2 Capital City： Lanzhou Population： 26 million Weather： Must﹣see different from place to place： the temperature is quite different from day to night… May to October is the best time for travelling． places of interest： Mogao Crottos the wold famous art palace； Jinyuguan Pass： the western end of the Great Wall… 【答案】 The Introduction of Gansu province Gansu Province lies in the northwest of China. It covers an area of 425.900 km. There are 26 million people living there. Lanzhou is the capital city of Gansu Province. The weather in Gansu is different from place to place and the temperature is usually quite different from day to night. If you want to go travelling in Gansu, May to October is the best time. Mogao grotto which is the world famous art palace and Jiayuguan Pass, the western end of the Great wall, are two of the must﹣see places of interest in Gansu. 【解析】 写作要求根据思维导图的提示，以" The Introduction of Gansu Province"为题，写一篇介绍甘肃的英语 短文，属于说明文。短文用一般现在时来介绍，句子多为系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。写作思路：考生 需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文，其次考生可根据所提供的要点提示去写作。文章必须包括要点中 所给的信息，包括：地理位置、面积、人口、省会城市、天气以及必看的一些景点等几个方面。注意表达 的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。三十一、吉林 67.假如你是李华，想参加 China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的 2019 年夏令营活动。请给主办 人 Mr.Smith 写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括：1.个人信息与兴趣爱好 2.梦想职业与个人计划 写作要求；1.词数 90 词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 Dear Mr. Smith, It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mr．Smith， It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you． My name is Li Hua．I like reading and writing．I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp ，I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience．If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance．After work，I will spend more time making a summary． I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply． Best wishes! Li Hua 【解析】 本文属于申请信，给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件，包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、 主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up 以及 If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance 中 if 引 导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通 顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起： 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。 构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放 的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。 初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及 简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自 然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法 结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 三十二、吉林长春 75.提问是获取知识、形成能力的重要途径之一。请以“Knowledge Comes from Questioning” 为题，结合 你的一次经历，写一篇不少于 80 词的英语短文。(文中不得出现真实的人名和校 名) Knowledge Comes from Questioning 【答案】 Knowledge Comes from Questioning It is well known that questioning in one of the most important ways to learn knowledge and develop abilities which proves truly in my experience last year. One day last spring, my father and I went out to fly a kite. With the string in hand, my father started to fly the kite. Soon, it was high up in the sky. I wondered if it could fly higher without the string. So I cut the string. Suddenly,the kite began to go high. However, after a while, to my surprise, the kite was coming down and fell onto the grass finally. I felt upset and asked, "I thought that after cutting the string, the kite would fly higher. Why did it fall down?" "My father answered, "The string was not stopping the kite from lying higher, but helping it stay in the sky, because the kite itself can't fly up. It is the air that makes it fly. By using the string, you help the kite go up in the right direction. When you cut the string, it could not support the kite. " "That's it!" I cried with joy. From this experience, I learned new knowledge by questioning. How wonderful it was! 【解析】 1.题干解读：提问是获取知识、形成能力的重要途径之一。请以“Knowledge Comes from Questioning” 为 题，结合你的一次经历，这是一篇叙事的作文。 2.例文点评：根据题目要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的 观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时 态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 3.高分亮点： 短语：one of the most important ways to learn knowledge and develop abilities；went out to fly a kite.；rom then on；day after day；depend on；come from。 句型：I wondered if 加从句；because the kite itself can't fly up.；By using the string, you help the kite go up in the right direction. When you cut the string, it could not support the kite. " "That's it!" I cried with joy. 三十三、上海 Ⅶ.Writing（作文） 69.Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于 60 个词 短文，标点符号不占格） 以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中选择你比较有感触的 一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。 的Don't judge people by their looks. Someone could be bad-looking and still be nice. —Katie When your friends do something stupid，you don't have to follow.—Jackie Don't tell a teacher your dog ate your homework，especially if you don't have a dog.—Alex Life is like a“choose your own ending” book-you can take whatever adventures you want. —Sally 【答案】 Don’t Judge a Book by Its Cover by Michelle As an old saying goes, don’t judge a book by its cover. I didn’t recognize the true meaning of it until last year. In my neighborhood came a man with a scary face. The first several times I came across him, I always ran way quickly, with hands covering my eyes. Later, I knew from my parents that he made a lot of effort to keep our neighborhood clean as a volunteer, which provides a better living environment for us. Realizing the mistake I made, I went to say sorry to him. And I really appreciated him for helping me learn that a person’s internal beauty is always the most valuable part instead of his appearance. 【解析】 以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中选择你比较有感触的 一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态 主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的 结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。 【点睛】这是一篇比较不错的作文。这篇短文层次非常的清晰，文中用到了一些好的句型：As we all know, we can't judge people by their clothing . Because the clothes do not reflect what is inside the human. ； I think if you juge a person by his clothes you only can get his taste of clothes, but taste of clothes not equal to the taste of life 这些给文中增色不少。