2020年中考英语考点专项突破题专题40书面表达二（含解析）.doc

专题 40 书面表达二 一、浙江杭州 第二节：书面表达 56.假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友 Linda 的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数 80 左右。 Subject: From: Linda To: Li Ping … I’m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? What does he look like? What kind of person is he and what’s he interested in? Hope to hear from you soon. Love, Linda Subject: From: Li Ping To: Linda Dear Linda, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________Yours, Li Ping 【答案】Dear Linda, Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food. My brother is also cute. He’s of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans. Thanks again for your help! Yours, Li Ping 【解析】 这篇作文要求我们对 Linda 的电子邮件进行回复。写作前，应先阅读 Linda 的来信，了解信中她想知道的 事情，然后有针对性地给她进行介绍。审题可知，Linda 在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情况，她提出 了三个问题，“他多大了”；“他是什么样子的”；“他是怎样的人以及他的兴趣”，回信中应对 Linda 的这 些提问进行回答，并根据表达的需要，补充一些细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。短文应使用一般现在 时、第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先内容应符合题目要求，并且叙述要 注意层次和结构；其次应注意英语的表达问题，应符合英文句式的特点以及表达习惯，不能写汉语式的英 语。可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间 使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。 二、浙江衢州 56.书面表达 71. 假设你是 Li Ming， 以下是你的南非笔友 Seb 发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给 Seb 回一封 邮件。要求：1. 考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件； 2. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息； 3. 词数：90~100 【答案】From: LiMing To: Seb Subject: Learning Chinese in Quzhou Hi, Seb, I’m so glad that you’ll come to live in my city. To improve Your Chinese quickly. You can go and take a course in a Chinese Language School. It can always help you to speak better and learn more. Then, try to experience life here in Quzhou. Of course. I’ll take you around Quzhou. We can visit the Confucius Temple. It’s the best way to understand our culture. And you can practice speaking Chinese at the same time. It’s very helpful. Hope to see you soon!Yours LiMing 【解析】 本题是书信作文。假设你是 Li Ming， 以下是你的南非笔友 Seb 发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容 给 Seb 回一封邮件。注意电子邮件格式。时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题， 根据 Seb 的电子邮件，列出提纲。表达要条理清楚，语言规范。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具 有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。 三、浙江湖州 61.书面表达 5 月 18 日是国际博物馆日，下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感 受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。 注意：1. 词数：80-100 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Visiting museums has become one o f the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, ,such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc. Among them, the science museum is our favorite. I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me. Museums make it possible for us. 'students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more? 【解析】 这是一篇图表，是同学参观博物馆的情况，结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英 语课上汇报。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来， 在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意人称和时态的不同，注意标点 符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 四、浙江宁波 六、书面表达 61.回顾初中三年。有许多事令人难忘。校英语报如 Have Your Say 栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假 如你是李华，请你选择其中一个话题, 并结合具体事例, 用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参 加此次征文活动。 要点如下： say "thanks" to___________ say "sorry" to_________ 1. be not good at... 2. encourage me to… 1. argue with… 2. not talk to each other3. make great progress 4…. 3. regret doing… 4….. 注意： (1) 短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点, 并适当拓展； (2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； (3) 词数:80-100,书信格式已给出； (4) 首句供参考 Looking back on the past three years, I’d like to say... Dear ___________________, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Alice, Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class. Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student. Thank you again. Wish you goal luck. Yours, Li Hua (100 words) Possible version 2: Dear Alan, Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say sorry to you for arguing with you. When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didn't talk to each other. I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Let's forget about the past and become good friends again. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 这个作文要求我们从题目中给出的两个话题中选择一个，并结合具体事例，用英语写一封信表达你对某个 人的谢意或歉意，参加学校英语报的一个征文活动。题目中利用表格的形式展示了两个话题的主要结构， 具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应以一 般过去时、第一人称和第二人称为主来叙述。文章内容应包括：首先确定一个话题和人物；然后具体说明 你感谢他或者向他道歉的原因，这是文章的主体部分，叙述应详细，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的感谢 或歉意，并表达祝愿。写作时应注意：首先文章内容应完整、充实，注意分清段落和层次；其次需注意英 语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。句式结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插 并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句直接使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自 然。 五、金华，义乌，丽水 七、书面表达 61.某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短 文投稿。 内容要点 参考词汇 Subjects English, Science,... Teachers/Classmates kind, helpful,... Activities sports, hobbies,...注意：1. 文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用； 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名； 3. 词数：80—100; 4. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My School Life I’m Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Possible version: I’m Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you. We have many subjects at school such as Chinese, English and so on. I am focused more on Chinese, for I think it’s getting more and more widely used throughout the world. Our teachers are kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems, they are always ready to give me a hand. School activities are rich and colorful. I often play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lots of fun. I like reading as well. So I often spend my free time reading in the school library. My school life is wonderful and I enjoy it very much. 【解析】 【分析】 【高分句型一】 I often play basketball with my classmates，which brings me lots of fun． 我经常和我的同学打篮球，这给我带来了很多乐趣。which 引导非限定性定语从句。 【高分句型二】 So I often spend my free time reading in the school library． 所以我经常花我的空闲时间在学校图书馆阅读。spend…doing sth 花费…做某事。 这是一篇给材料作文。某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每 个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性， 要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表 达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保 正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。 六、浙江温州 56.书面表达 最近，用手机 APP 买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富、洗净配好、预约送菜上门……外国朋友对此也很感 兴趣。 请你以 A New Use of the Mobile Phone 为题，写一篇 110 词左右的英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利，让外 国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。 A New Use of the Mobile Phone ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【小词典】 acknowledge v.承认，认可 bone n. 骨骼 chest n. 胸部 cipher n. 标记 crowd n. 大众 elect v. 选举，推选 franc n. 法国法郎 invisible ad. 不可见的 muscle n. 肌肉 profound adj. 深刻的 radio telescope 射电望远镜 reflect n. 反射 signal n. 信号 stimulate v. 刺激 toe n. 脚趾 【答案】A New Use of the Mobile Phone Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help. These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You ,an order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like. they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier. Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life. 【解析】 这是一篇给材料作文。要求以 A New Use of the Mobile Phone 为题，写一篇英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便 利，让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据 提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连 句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的 结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选 取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检 查，确保正确无误。 七、台州七、书面表达（本题有 1 小题; 共计 20 分） 76. 似如你是李华, 一个英国游学团要来你们学校, 学校需要一些志愿者, 你想成为其中的一员。请读下面 的招雾启事, 写一封应征邮件。 Volunteers Wanted Some students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour. They are interested in Chinese culture. We’ relooking for some volunteers to help us. "Can you introduce yourself(English ability and personality)? Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose? If you are interested, please email us at Andrew@l63. com. 注意: （1）请回复招募启事中所提及的两个问题, 可适当发挥; （2）应征邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息; （3）词数: 80~100; （4）邮件开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Andrew, I’m Li Hua. 【分析】【高分句型一】 In addition，I'm interested in sports，which is why I'm in good health．此外，我对体育感 兴趣，这就是为什么我健康状况良好． which 引导非限制性定语从句． 【高分句型二】 I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture， so that British friends can understand China better．我计划组织一次关于中国传统文化的活动，让英国 朋友更好的了解中国． plan to do sth 计划做某事；so that 引导目的状语从句．【答案】Dear Sir， My name is Li Hua．I'm a 17-year-old girl from Class 3 ，Grade 2．I would like to become a volunteer for the American students．（点明目的）My English is good and I can talk with foreigner fluently．In addition，I'm interested in sports，which is why I'm in good health．【高分句型一】When my friends get in trouble，I often help them actively．I'm good at taking up with others．Besides I like travelling a lot and I'm quite familiar with our city．（自我介绍）I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture so that British friends can understand China better．【高分句 型二】（计划的活动） I'm sure I can become friends with the English students．Looking forward to your answers．（愿望） Yours， Li Hua 八、绍兴 九、书面表达（共 1 小题，共计 20 分） 18.学校是否有必要设立“无作业日”？对此，你在班中进行了调查。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文在英语 课上交流，并阐述你的观点和理由。 Opinions Reasons most students Yes ◆have free time ◆feel relaxed some students No ◆waste time ◆get bad grades I …… …… 注意：①短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节； ②词数：80-100； ③短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。参考词汇：无作业日 Homework-free Day 短文首句：I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. 【答案】 One possible version: I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like, such as reading their favorite books, going swimming and so on. They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games. Some students, however, don't like it. They're afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades. They prefer to do homework as usual. In my view, Homework-free Day will certainly help a lot. I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. 【考点】材料作文 【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料类作文。着重通过调查对“无作业日"学生的看法：赞成与反对及理由。主 要以第三人称和一般现在时。写作中应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。 【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。such as ，例如； Homework-free Day ，无作 业日；prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事。 I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. （介词后接宾语从句）；Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like.（宾语从句；不定式做主语和结果 状语从句）； I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. （非限制性定语从句）。 还运用了 or， however 等使上下文衔接的更 好。 九、嘉兴、舟山 六、书面表达(本题有 1 小题,共计 15 分) 61. 假设你是李华。你在某英文网站上看到一则招募中国志愿者(volunteer)的广告。请根据该广告中所提 供的两个志愿者项目,选择其中一个,结合自己的实际情况,给项目负责人写一封电子邮件,表达你希望参加 这个项目的愿望,并阐述理由。注意: (1)邮件中必须包含招募广告中的信息,可适当发挥。 (2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (3)词数: 80~100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer. _______________ Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam， I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China． I want to be a volunteer．I'm willing to go to a small village in the west of China． I know something about China．I will be glad to take part in the Project 1．（写明选择） I have been good at English since I was a student．【高分 句型一】 I'm also willing to be a teacher to teach children English． In my opinion，helping people in need is meaningful． I can help people work on the farm because both my father and my mother are farmers． I can do a lot of work on the farm．Also，I can visit the old people's home to help the old wash clothes and clean the house and so on．（一一写出原因） It's meanfuling for me to do something for others． 【高分句型二】 Looking forward to your early reply! Yours Li Hua 十、长沙 第三节　书面表达 55.假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry 认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因 此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。 要求： （1）80 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Dear Henry, I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game… 【答案】Dear Henry, I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself. You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time. As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】这是一篇给材料的书信作文。假如你是李华，就输球事件安慰 Henry，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得 队友的理解提出建议。人称为第二人称，时态以一般现在时为主。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作 内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，补充两条个人的观点并提出建议。注意表达的 条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型一：What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. 重要的是你应该从比赛中吸取 教训，也要从错误中吸取教训。What matters is that 重要的是，that 引导的是表语从句。as well as 常 用来连接两个并列的成分，作“也，还”讲。高分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. 你可以保证你会不遗余力地提高你的技能。that 引导的是宾语从句， spare no efforts to do sth.不遗余力做某事。高分句型三：If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one. 如果大家齐心协力，你们一定会赢得下一场比赛。此句是 if 引导的条件状语从句； be sure to do sth. 必定做某事。 十一、株洲 第三节 情景作文 51.假定你是李华，准备参加“一带一路”国家中学生英语演讲比赛，主题为“现在引领未来”。请你写一 篇演讲稿，包括以下内容： (1) 你最难忘的一个书包是怎么得来的？ (2) 你喜欢它吗？为什么？ (3) 描述你将来的书包。 注意：(1)词数 80 左右； (2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3) 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。 【答案】I have a beautiful school bag. My grandma bought it for me last autumn as a birthday present. I like it very much. My bag is a blue one, and blue is my favourite colour. On the bag, you can see a little tiger, It's very lovely. There are many books in my bag, such as Chinese books, English books and others. And there is a nice pencil-box, too. Inside the bag, there is a small pocket. I often put some money and keys in it. When I study my lessons, the bag is always together with me. It is my close friend, I will take good care of it. In the future, the bag will better than now. It will be smaller and more useful. I hope bag will not so heavy. Though bag in the future will be small, they have big capacity. Bag should be cheap and fashion, too. As far as I am concerned, our own bag will just be opened by ourselves. How great bag ! 【解析】 1、题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要介绍你的书包以及你喜欢它的原因，最后畅想一下未来的书包是什 么样子的。 2、例文点评：本文采用三段式，第一段讲述你的书包的来历，第二段讲述你喜欢这个书包以及原因，第三 段畅想一下未来的书包。 3、高分亮点： 单词短语：There be，such as，too，take good care of, in the future,as far as I am concerned 等。 句型：How great bag 中 how 引导的感叹句。 【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能 要用到的表达，例如 There be，such as，take good care of, in the future, How great bag 中 how 引 导的感叹句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可 适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如 too，as far as I am concerned；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重 复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 十二、湘潭 46. 情景作文 哈佛大学 一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感，更有前途．请你以"Help with Some Housework"为题写一篇 8o 词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法． 参考词汇： Chores take out the rubbish sweep the floor 的wash the clothes do the dishes water the flowers cook breakfast/lunch … … Opinions Pros：develop our independence take care of ourselves … Cons：a waste of time no need to … … 注意：文中不得出现真实的校名和人名． Help with Some Housework It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I___________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Help with Some Housework It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I often help them do housework． I take out the rubbish away and sweep the floor in the morning． I help my mother cook the lunch．I always wash clothes and do the dishes for my family． My parents are very happy． Besides， Watering the flowers is also my duty． I like them very much and take good care of them． After supper， I always wash dishes．（平时所 作家务） I think it can develop our independence and take good care of ourselves．【高分句型一】 In a word， the more housework I do， the happier my parents will be．（家务的看法）【高分句型二】 【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，以"Help with Some Housework"为题写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文，描述你 平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法，要具体说出支持或反对的理由。本文主要时态是一般现在时。写 作时，尽量避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯， 注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系， 表达具有条理性。用到的词组：take out the rubbish 倒垃圾；sweep the floor 扫地；wash the clothes洗衣服；do the dishes 洗餐具；water the flowers 浇花；cook breakfast/lunch 做早饭/午饭…。 十三、湘西土家族苗族 71. 情景作文 湘西自治州正在进行“美丽湘西”建设，我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们家 乡变得更美。作为学生，请以“Start out small”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书。 要点提示：1.多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。 2.购物时重复使用袋子。 3.不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。 4.遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。 要求：1.80 词以上。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在作文中出现学校真 实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 参考词汇：protect the environment；reuse bags；plant；cut down；throw；wait in line；be wie； oboeysart outsnal Start out small Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown? 【答案】Start out small Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown？In order to make our hometown more beautiful， as students, I think we should start from small things. First of all, we should know the importance of protecting the environment. We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomly. Second, we had better reuse the bag when shopping. We can't throw rubbish about, and we should keep the rivers clean and so on. In addition, we must obey public rules and be civilized students. When we got on the bus, we should wait in line. 【解析】 这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下如何才能为“美丽湘西”建设做出贡献。所提供的材料中列举了我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们的家乡变得更美。主要从 1. 多种 植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。2. 购物时重复使用袋子。 3.不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。4.遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。这四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时， 人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语， 尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓 一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】 I think we should start from small things. 我认为我们应该从小事做起。we should start from small things.做 think 的宾语。 【高分句型二】 When we got on the bus, we should wait in line. 我们应该排队等候上车。 句子 When we got on the bus 是由 when 引导的时间状语从句。 十四、益阳 B)作文 51.最近，你美国的笔友 Tony 在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份 给他写一封邮件-提出你的一些建议。 建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，诚实守信…… 要求：l．词数 60-80，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 参考词汇: share solve respect friendly be honest to Dear Tony, I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates: I'm glad to help you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ I hope everything will go well with you soon.yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 【解析】 【分析】 本文是一封电子邮件。首先，用情态动词提建议，最后希望能交到跟多朋友。 本文对于遇到的问题提出建议，分步骤给出合理建议，最后对朋友要诚实，并希望能够交到更多朋友。 十五、郴州 第三节 书面表达 56.在英语课上, 老师将组织以“说出你的烦恼”(Speak out your worries)为主题的交流活动。 假如你是李华, 请根据以下表格中提供的信息, 用英语写一篇发言稿, 说出你的烦恼和愿望。 Worries Wishes  too strict, too much homework …  little time for outdoor activities…  hard to communicate with… ….  less homework…  more chances …  get on well with … … 要求： 1 短文须包含表格中的所有信息, 并适当发挥；2 词数：80 词左右（短文开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Hello, everyone, I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. ____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________ That's all. Thank you. 【答案】Hello, everyone, I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. My teachers are too strict. They have too much homework to do every day．And I feel stressed too much．I wish I can have less homework. I think my parents are too strict with me．They give us little time for outdoor activities. It's hard for me to communicate with their parents．I wish I can have more chances to play with my friends. I wish I can get on well with my parents. That's all. Thank you. 【解析】 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短 语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有 漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中 注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 十六、邵阳 情景作文51.每年三月的最后一个星期一是“全闭中小学生安全教育日”。为了提高同学们的安全意识, 学校决定在毕 业前再举行一次以安全教育为主题的班会。请根据所给提示, 就日常生活中需要注意的安全写一篇英语发言 稿。 提示：1 上学、放学途中的安全；2 校园里的安全；3. 家里的安全。 要求：1. 80 词左右, 开头与结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；2. 语法正确, 语句通顺、流畅；3 文中不得出现真 实姓名、校名。 Hello, everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students. As middle school students, we should______________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________ Safety is important. We should always keep it in mind. Thank you! 【答案】Hello, everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students. As middle school students, we should pay more attention to safety. To be safe, we must follow rules. When we go to school or go home from school, we must follow the traffic rules For example, we must walk on walk-side. When we cross zebra-crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across the road fast. We mustn't run through red lights when crossing the road. Don't play football on the road. At school, don't push when we go upstairs or downstairs, or we may hurt ourselves or others. Never use sharp things like the knife when we play with our classmates. We should get on well with our classmates. Don't fight with them, or we'll be hurt. At home, we should be careful when we use electricity. If there is a fire or a thief, we should call the police for help in time. Also, food safety is important. Never eat the food that goes bad. Safety is very important. We should always keep it in mind. Thank you! 【解析】 本文属于话题作文，就日常生活中如何注意安全提一些建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上 下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、 主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 pay attention to, follow the traffic rules, play with, get on well with, fight with, in time 以及祈使句 stop and look right and left 以及 don’t play football on the road 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 十七、岳阳 56.作文 假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙，墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴流，以及考前老师的温馨提示。 忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光，请你以“Preparation for High School Entrance Exam”（备战中考） 为题，写一篇 80-100 词的短文。 1. 请阐述图中信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确。 学 习 区 Listen to the teacher 生 活 区 Eat healthy food 提 示 区 Avoid making mistakesTake notes Exercise Learn to relax Finish doing… Have enough sleep Be on time … … … Preparation for High School Entrance Exam ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Preparation for High School Entrance Exam High School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it. In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time. After class, we finished our homework on time. If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details. All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying. Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on. We also did exercise every day and had enough sleep. The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax. We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. What’s more, we must be on time. We all felt tired and nervous, but what a full and happy time! 【解析】 这篇作文要求我们以 Preparation for High School Entrance Exam 为题，介绍备战中考的时光。题目中用照 片墙的形式呈现了备战的具体内容，并给出了一些关键词，学生们应依据这些图片和关键词，展开合理的 想象，充实细节内容，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括三个方面：分学 习、生活和提示三个方面解析介绍，注意分清层次和结构，合理安排各个方面的信息，注意上下文的衔接、 过渡应自然。短文应以第一人称为主来叙述，时态应为一般过去时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应 注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。 可以简单句结构为主，清晰、准确地表达自己的意思。而为了提升作文档次，应在文中穿插并列句、复合 句以及其他复杂句式和结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。 这是一篇比较不错的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己和老师们一起备战中考的一段充实、快乐 的时光。题目以照片墙的形式展示了备战的过程和内容，非常新颖独特，分析照片墙可知，文章应从三个 方面进行介绍：学习、生活以及老师对学生的提示。这篇短文也正是按照这个思路进行展开叙述的。短文 层次很清晰，叙述也很清楚。短文主要使用了一般过去时态，符合表达的需要，语法规范，注意了动词过 去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。语句通顺，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句子以 简单句为基础，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句等复合句句型，调整了文章的节奏。短文中使用了一些较好 的短语和句型，如 I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it.、If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details.、 Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on.、We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes.等等。 十八、衡阳 书面表达。 51.根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护” 为主题的消防安全教育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，提出你的建议。 要求： 1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。 2. 书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于 80.参考词汇： cover v. 遮盖 take the lift 乘坐电梯 exit n. 出口 towel n. 毛巾 shut off 切断 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________ 【答案】How to Protect Yourself in a Fire According to a new survey, student safety has become a big problem. You should know some ways to protect yourself .It will help to keep you safe in the fire .First, You should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel. you mustn't take the lift or jump off a window, You should find the exit. The most important thing is to keep calm.If you can't go in the house, the safest place is close to water, like washroom .If the fire is serious,you should call 119 for help. These may help us. 【解析】 根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为 主题的消防安全教育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，提出你的建议。考生首先要认 真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适 的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写 错误及标点误用等。这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如 First, You should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel 等使文章的表达更丰富，更有 逻辑性，更富有条理。 十九、娄底 七、书面表达 56."读万卷书，行万里路"，研学旅行现在受到教育主管部门和学校的高度重视，也深受学生和家长的欢 迎．假如你们学校的英文网站就研学旅行中需要注意的事项发帖，征集建议．请你根据以下要点写一篇短 文，进行跟帖回复． 1．要点：2．要求 （1）文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等； （2）语言要通顺，表达要正确； （3）要求包含所有要点提示，为了行文需要，可适当拓展和增加要点； （4）词数不少于 60 个英语单词，开头已给出，不计入总词． 3．参考词汇： 在危险中 in danger 报警 call the police Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students． What should we pay attention to when we're having a study trip？ Here's my advice． ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when we're having a study trip? Here's my advice. First, we are supposed to eat healthily and safely. Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health. We should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Second, it's important for us to follow the traffic rules. We mustn't go across the street when the traffic light is red. Third, if we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time. What's more, we should be careful when we use electricity. Last but not the least, it's dangerous to swim in the river. We mustn't swim alone. In short, safety must come first! 【解析】 本文是材料作文，也是话题作文，话题是“读万卷书，行万里路”，根据表格中列举的要点，谈论研学旅行 应注意的问题。能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等， 清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作。根据内容提示可知本文使用的时态主要有一般现在时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍， 看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。 高分句型一：Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health.吃变质的食物对健康有害。 本句运用了定语从句 the food that goes bad，另外 Eating the food 动名词作主语。 高分句型二：Second, it's important for us to follow the traffic rules.其次，遵守交通规则对我们来说 很重要。“It is +adj + for sb to do sth”这个句型中 it 作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语。 二十、湖南德州 基础写作 51.根据第二节（回答问题）材料并结合以下要点写一篇 80 词以上的英文短文。要点：1.你初中阶段幸福 吗？请举例说明；2.为了使自己以后更幸福，你有些什么打算？注意：不得出现人名和校名等真实信息。 【答案】What is happiness? Everyone has their own happiness. For some, happiness is to have a safe home; for some, happiness is a day have care free. However, for junior high school students, what is happiness? My junior high school life is very happy. I have good friends, good learning, teachers and parents are all proud of us. When we get good grade, the teacher will feel happy, parents will happy, of course we will be very happy. When we help others, others will be happy, we also feel happy. Every little success, every little praise, will give us happy. We do every little would get happy, happy together will become a big happiness. But, these happy not to appear out of thin air. Want to happiness, we need efforts. We have to study hard. We should be kind for everybody. We should try our hardest at everything we do. 【解析】 1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，主要介绍什么是幸福。内容涉及到：1.你初中阶段幸福吗？举例说 明；2.为了使自己以后更幸福，你有些什么打算？。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主。开篇点题：什么 是幸福？每个人都有自己的幸福。第二段介绍了自己幸福的初中生活；最后介绍了为了使自己以后更幸福， 该如何做。 3.高分亮点： 短语：of course；have care free；feel happy；be proud of；study hard；be kind；try best to do sth.。 句型：1. When we get good grade, the teacher will feel happy, parents will happy, of course we willbeveryhappy.当我们取得好成绩时，老师会感到高兴，家长也会高兴，当然我们会非常高兴。是由 when 引导的时间状语从句。 2. We should try our hardest at everything we do. 我们应该尽最大的努力做每件事。we do 是定语从 句。 二十一、盘锦 Ⅸ. 书面表达 80.A. 小作文：根据要求完成下面内容，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。 学校正在为运动会招募志愿者。要求志愿者身体健康，擅长体育运动，并且能够与他人友好相处。联系人： Linda; 联系电话：929-3155。请你根据以上信息，用英文为学校写一则招募广告，词数：30~40 词。文中 不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Volunteers Wanted for School Sports Meeting 【答案】例文 Volunteers Wanted for School Sports Meeting Are you fit and healthy? Are you good at sports? Can you get on with others? If your answer is yes, please come and be a volunteer for the school sports meeting. It is interesting and meaningful. Please call Linda at 929-3155.【解析】 这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息用英文为学校写一则招募广告。所提供的材料说明了学校正在 为运动会招募志愿者。主要从志愿者身体条件（健康），擅长体育运动，并且能够与他人友好相处这三个方 面去写。时态为一般现在时，人称为第二人称。注意作文中必须包含联系人和联系电话。并适当发挥。写 作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注 意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系， 表达具有条理性。 【 高 分 句 型 】 If your answer is yes, please come and be a volunteer for the school sports meeting. 如果你的回答是肯定的，请来做学校运动会的志愿者。 句子 If your answer is yes, 是由 if 引导的条件状语从句。 81.B. 大作文：根据要求完成下面内容，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。 最近，某英文报刊正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇英语作文，为本次活动投稿。 1. 内容提示：（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等； （2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等； （3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。 2. 写作要求： （1）内容包含以上要点； （2）语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，词数：60~80 词； （3）书写工整、规范, 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 My Favorite Chinese Festival 【答案】例文My Favorite Chinese Festival As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best. It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year. The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family. 【解析】 这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下“我”最喜欢的中国节日。所提供的材料中列举了本 次征文活动的主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。主要从（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节 日：名称及时间等；（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；（3）说说你对这个节日的感 受及喜爱它的原因。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料 上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要 正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上 下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】 On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. 在春节前夕，所有家庭成员都喜欢吃各种各样的食物，如：饺子和鱼。 On the eve of the Spring Festival,是介词短语做时间状语。 different kinds of：不同种类的；such as：例如。这些短语的运用，增加了语感，丰富了文章的内容。 【高分句型二】 The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family. 春节不仅能让我们感受到爱和幸福，更能让我们感受到家和家庭的重要性。这句话运用了 not only…but also…,“不但……而且……”。体现了作者的写作功底扎实。 二十二、本溪 IX. 书面表达86.根据要求完成小作文，词数：30 词左右。 回想初中阶段，你的班级或学校举办的哪一次活动对你影响至深，说说你在活动中做了什么，并有什么样 的感受或收获。 【答案】English Festival is a special Festival for our school. I can't forget the 3rd English Festival last April．I took part in a chorus. The song was Big Big world. We practiced singing for a week though the weather was very hot. Then we finally performed well. I felt so happy that we had the chance to show our beautiful sound on the stage. 【解析】 这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍初中阶段，班级或学校举办的一次对自己影响至深的活动，并说说在活动 中自己做了什么，有什么样的感受或收获。文章时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人 称。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应 该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复 合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。 87.根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100 词。 每年十月份，越来越多的游客来本溪赏枫叶。请你根据以下提示，说说如何给游客可留下“景美人更美” 的好印象，从自身做起，做文明本溪人！ 提示词：beautiful views 美丽的景色 要求： 1．语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 2．文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。 3. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to be a polite citizenBenxi is a good place to watch maple leaves (枫叶) in October. 【答案】How to be a polite citizen Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves（枫叶）in October. Let's leave the visitors a good impression not only for the beautiful views , but also as a Benxi citizen. How to be a polite citizen? First, We must be friendly. Use"please,OK,welcome" with smile when you talk with visitors. Besides, we should be ready to help others.Try to be a helpful person. If visitors need us,we should help them. What's more, we should follow the rules. For example,we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers. We mustn't drop litter carelessly. At last, we also need to behave well in public. We stand for our city Benxi in public. So it needs our good manners. Why not do as above points?Let's try our best to be a polite citizen. 【解析】 这是一篇给材料作文。首先要认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及 每个要点中可能要用到的表达；写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系；尽量使用 自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以便使文章更有档次。特别注意在选择句 式时要赋予变化。注意不要遗漏任何要点内容。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等， 还要检查字数是否符合要求。 二十三、朝阳 书面表达 79.假如你是英语校报的编辑方明，中学生李俊马上就要毕业了，他在给你的来信中提到他不知如何度过即 将到来的暑假，希望得到你的帮助．请你给他写一封回信，告诉他怎样才能度过一个有意义的假期． 提示： 1．充分利用时间多读书，读好书，获取知识，开阔视野； 2．帮助父母做一些家务；3．多运动； 4．去做志愿者； 5．自学新知…… 要求：1．观点鲜明，结构合理，内容连贯； 2．要用到所有提示内容，并适当发挥； 3．词数：80 词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数． 提示词：开阔视野 open up one's eyes Dear Li Jun， You are going to have a long summer vacation and start a new life soon．You don't know how to spend it． I hope you will have a meaningful holiday． Yours， Fang Ming 【答案】例文 Dear LiJun， You are going to have a long summer vacation and start a new life soon. 【高分句型一】You don't know how to spend it．（引出话题） Well，I think you can have a lot of things to do.You should put your time to good use. First, you can read some good books because reading can help you get more knowledge and open up your eyes. Second, you can also help your parents do some housework so that they can have a good rest. Third, you are supposed to take much exercise. Sports can make you strong and healthy.Fourth, you can be a volunteer to make our city more beautiful. What's more, you can try to learn some new knowledge to get ready for the further study.（具体介绍假期可以做的事情） I hope you will have a meaningful holiday．【高分句型二】（希望） YoursFang Ming 【解析】 1.题干解读：根据所给材料提示可知，短文是一封书信，对他人提建议用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。 2.例文点评：短文开篇点明假期要做很多事情。用第一人称来写，介绍假期能够做的事情，用含有情态动 词 can 的句子，然后分别按顺序介绍在假期期间要做的事情：first，second, third, fourth,分别具体介 绍了要做的事情。运用情态动词 can 表示可以去做的事情，根据提示可知运用第一人称。作者最后提出希 望 I hope you will have a meaningful holiday。文章语意连贯，条理清晰。 3.高分亮点： 短语：open your eyes；so that；have a good rest；be supposed to dos th.；what’s more。 句型：句型 you are supposed to take much exercise；so that 引导的目的状语从句 so that they can have a good rest.；宾语从句 I hope you will have a meaningful holiday．。 二十四、抚顺 85.根据要求完成小作文。词数致：30 词左右。 假如你是 Mary.你在学校操场上丢了一块红色的手表。它对你很重要。你必须找到它。请根据提示用英文写 一则寻物启事，说明情况。你的电话号码是：764-6×××. Lost ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Lost 1 lost a watch on the school playground. It's red. It's very important to me. I must find it. Please call me at 764-6×××. 【解析】 本文属于应用文体，就丢了一块手表写一个寻物启事。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意 思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、 主谓一致。本篇文章简洁明了，格式正确，信息完整，包含丢失物品 a watch，丢失地点 school playground，物品颜色 red，丢失物对我很重要 It's very important to me，所以必须找打它 I must find it，最后留了自己的联系方式 Please call me at 764-6×××。 86.根据要求完成大作文。词数：80-100 词。 每个人对于生活都心怀美好的憧憬和期盼。你的期盼是什么呢？将下面题目补充完整，谈一谈你的期盼并 简单说明理由。 要求： 1.语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。 2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 I’m looking forward to ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I'm looking forward to the summer vacation Summer vacation is coming. I'm going on a new journey. You can’t imagine how excited I am. I am looking forward to having a wonderful vacation. In order to get ready for the exam, I have studied hard for nearly several yeas. It is hard work, but I never give up. Now it's time for me to have a good rest. I am going to climb the mountains with my good friends. And I'll also, go to the beach. It must be very relaxing. Duly’s family and I plan to visit some historical places like Beijing or Xi’an. We will stay there for at least two weeks. I will stay at home help my parents with more housework, too. It is a good chance for me to do something for them. I can’t wait. 【解析】 本文属于话题作文，谈论你的期盼并说明理由。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、 主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 look forward to doing, in order to, get ready for, give up, it’s time to do, plan to do, at least, help sb with sth, a good chance to do 以及 how excited I am 中 how 引导的感叹句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 二十五、沈阳 65.为了帮助青少年健康快乐地成长，某英文网站开辟了中学生专栏，请你以 It's to take my parents' advice 题，投稿至该网站。 【要求】 1.确定主题，说明原因： 2.围绕主题，进行叙述或阐述； 3.词数 80—100。 【注意】 1.补全标题（参考词语：helpful，important，necessary. useless 等）： 2.可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以阐述具体观点： 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 4.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 5.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 It's to take my parents' advice When I grow into a teenager，I always moot some difficulties in my daily life.For me.… 【答案】It's necessary to take my parents' advice. When I grow into a teenager, I always meet some difficulties in my daily life. For me it's necessary to take my parents' advice. Last term, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. Once I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset. How to make good use of my time? My parents suggested me that I should make a weekday plan. I should write what I'm going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put 为the paper up somewhere I can see it easily. It can help me to remember what I have to do next. I am very grateful to my parents. They encouraged me and gave me a hand when necessary. 【解析】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 how to do，play a kind of computer game，spent time on，forget to do，do one’s homework，in the end，angry with，make good use， be going to，have to，be grateful to 等。而固定句型 it's necessary to take my parents' advice.和 Last term, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game./ My parents suggested me that I should make a weekday plan./ It can help me to remember what I have to do next./ They encouraged me and gave me a hand when necessary.等复杂从句结构的运用，既丰富了短文内容，又使表达 多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表 达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 二十六、铁岭 X.书面表达 86.根据要求完成小作文，词数：30 词左右。 假如你是李平，毕业在即，过去三年的美好时光历历在目。请你给最难忘的人杨阳写几句毕业留言。（短文 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Yang Yang， Li Ping 【答案】Dear Yang Yang, How time flies! I'll never forget you even when I leave our school. Thank you so much for helping me. You told me to practice more and never gave up. Wish you healthy and pretty! Li Ping 【解析】 本题是应用文写作，要求写一个毕业留言。动笔前考生需要看清题目要求，围绕关键词“最难忘的”组织语言。例文的层次清晰、内容饱满、表达流畅，符合留言的格式。短短几句话，运用了感叹句 How time flies!，状语从句 I'll never forget you even when I leave our school.和多种非谓语动词结构 Thank you so much for helping me./You told me to practice more and never gave up.，亮点突出，是篇优 秀的习作。 87.根据要求完成大作文，词数：80—100 词。 为了感受生命的价值，有意义地进行学习和生活，成为有用之人。请你根据下面的图示及要求，用英文完 成写作，至少选择 2 一 3 方面进行陈述。 要求: 1.语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。 3.短文题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Meaningful Life Life is a long journey.In order to live a meaningful life， 【答案】Life is a long journey. In order to live a meaningful life I'm going to study really hard in the senior high school. First, I must try to get good grades, or I won't get further education. Education is important to me. Second, I need to develop good habits. I'll get up early and go ,to bed early. I'll do sports once or twice a week. Third, I must learn to take good care of myself. I won't depend on my parents too much. Fourth, I'll spend my weekends volunteering in the old People's Home. Helping others can make me happy. Anyway, I'll try my best to be a better student and live a meaningful life in the coming years. 【解析】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 in order to，be going to，study hard，get good grades，try to do，get up early，once or twice a week，take good care of，depend on，too much 等。而 First,…/ Second,…/ Third,…和 Fourth,…等句，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使 短文层次清晰，要点突出，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适 当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 二十七、大连 B.书面表达．（共 20 分） 33．（20 分）在我们的生活中，规则无处不在，从个人、家庭、班级、校园到公共场所……规则时时约束着 我们的言行举止．你认为遵守规则有必要吗？ 为什么？近日，你校英文网站正在开展以"Is it necessary to follow rules？"为主题的大讨论．请你 写一篇英文短文，结合你的经历和感受，谈谈你的看法． 内容提示：（1）Is it necessary to follow rules？ （2）Share your experience and feeling． 要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； （2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数 80 左右． ． 【答案】There are many rules in our life， such as family rules， traffic rules， school rules， and so on． But is it necessary to follow rules？【高分句型一】 I think the answer is yes．（我的观点） Take myself for example． When I was fifteen years old，I thought I was old enough to neglect the traffic rules． So I often rode a bike on the road wearing headphones． One day， when I was enjoying the music on my bike ， a truck suddenly appeared and seemed to lose control． Unfortunately，I was badly hit and got into a coma． However，I was lucky enough to recover in a year．【高分句型二】（我的经历和感受） So that was the result I got．I have learned an important lesson from that accident， that is， follow all the rules．（我的看法） 二十八、葫芦岛 Ⅸ.书面表达（共 20 分） 86．根据要求完成小作文，词数：30 词左右．（共 5 分） 初中三年，在英语学习上你一定积累了许多宝贵的经验．请你把英语学习的小窍门分享给即将升入 你校的学弟学妹们吧．（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数） I'd like to share some good ways of learning English with you． ____________ _． 【答案】I'd like to share some good ways of learning English with you．It is not enough to just study hard.There are many good ways to improve our study ． Different subjects need different ways ． But one thing in common is taking notes carefully in class ， a review them after class ． Another thing is asking questions during or after class．Besides，don’t be afraid of making mistakes，try to learn from mistakes． 【解析】本文是一篇开放式作文。要求你把英语学习的小窍门分享给即将升入你校的学弟学妹们。根据材 料可知，本文用第一人称，一般现在时态。词数 80-100 词。 【亮点词汇】 1.share sth. with sb 与某人分享某物； 2.in common 共同的； 3.be afraid of 害怕。 【高分句型】1.It is not enough to just study hard．仅仅努力学习是不够的．（It is not enough to do sth 做某事是不够的，it 作形式主语，真正的主语是 to 引导的不定式短语。） 2.Besides，donˈt be afraid of making mistakes，try to learn from mistakes．此外，不要 害怕犯错，努力从错误中学习。（be afraid of 害怕…；try to do sth 努力做某事） 根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100 词．（共 15 分） 87．丰富的校本课程可以让你的生活更精彩．请根据下列图示中所提供的特色课程，按内容及要求，用英 文完成写作． 内容包括： 1．Which course（s）do you like？ 2．Why do you like it/them？ 3．What can you learn from it/them？ 写作要求： 1．依据你的兴趣选择课程（数量不限）； 2．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名． Of all the courses，I like __________ ________________． 【答案】 Of all the courses, I like sports best. Do you know why? Now let me tell you the reason. I used to be a sick boy when I was in primary school. I didn't like doing any sports. Later myfather asked me to take a walk with him every day. To my surprise, I seldom caught a cold. SoI know the importance of doing sports ． Therefore, I choose sports courses. Because doing sports is good for my health. From the courses, I know more professional knowledge about sports. Meanwhile, I know that doing sports should be in a proper way.Then our body will be stronger. What about your favorite course? Please tell me. 【亮点词汇】 1. let sb. Do sth. 让某人做某事 2. used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 3. catch a cold 患感冒 【高分句型】 1. I used to be a sick boy when I was in primary school.我上小学的时候是个生病的男孩（when 引 导的时间状语从句） 2. Because doing sports is good for my health.因为做运动对我们健康有好处。 （be good for…对……有好处，动名词短语做主语） 二十九、锦州 VII.书面表达（共 15 分）（A）根据要求完成读后续写，并把答案写在答题卡的相应位置。（共 5 分） 17．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的语篇． 注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为 40-50 词； 2．必须至少使用 2 个短文中划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分至少一段，第一段开头语已经为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语． Today ， more and more teenagers have their own smart phones．Can middle school students u se smart phones at school？Different students have different opinions． Some students think they can use them at school．It's convenient for them to call their parents ， teachers or friends．And they can search what they need on smart phones． Paragraph1： However，some students disagree． _____________．【答案】However,some students disagree.They think using smart phones does harm to their health and study.It’s a waste of time.If they take smart phones to school,they may use them in class.That makes them not concentrate on the teachers’ words.They can not do well in their lessons and they can not get good grades.It’s also bad for their eyes.Their eyesight will go down.So middle school students can not take smart phones to school. 【亮点词汇和句型】 1. do harm to 对…有害 2. concentrate on… 集中注意力到… 3. do well in 对…有好处 4. get good grades 取得好成绩 5. be bad for 对…有害. （B）根据要求完成提示性作文，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。（共 10 分） 18．你们学校正在以"How to be an excellent middle school student"为题，举行征文活动．请 你根据下面思维导图的提示写一篇英语征文． 要求：1．条理清晰，行文连贯，段落分明，书写规范； 2．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3．词数：不少于 80 个单词； 4．标题已给出，不计入总词 数． ________________． 【答案】 As middle school students,it’s our duty to be excellent.I think we have lots of things to do. First, we should learn to be honest and thankful.We are supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Second,we should develop our study interest and we must work hard.At the same time,we should have good study methods,such as listening to the teacher carefully in class and so on. Third,it’s helpful to be in good health.We must have enough healthy food instead of junk food.And we should spend at least an hour doing sports every day. If we follow these,we will be excellent. 【亮点词汇和句型】 1. It’s our duty to do sth.做某事是我们的责任 2. be supposed to do sth.应该做某事 3. at the same time 在同时 4. such as 例如 5. and so on 等等 6. spend…doing sth.花费（时间）做某事 三十、辽阳 IX.书面表达（共 20 分）根据要求完成小作文，词数：30 词左右．（共 5 分） 35．（5 分）一些外宾暑假要来我们社区参观，社区需要十名学生做向导．请你为社区写一则招聘启事，应 聘者需具备以下条件：1．擅长英语；2．善于与人沟通；3．对人友善．有意者请与张先生联系，电话是 1380419xxxx．（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Guides Wanted Some foreign visitors will come to visit our community this summer vacation． ___________． 【答案】 Guides Wanted Some foreign visitors will come to visit our community this summer vacation．So we need ten students as Guides．The following are requirements：1．You should be good at English．（高分句型一） 2．You should do well in communicating with others． 3．You should be kind to others． If you are interested，please contact with Mr．Zhang．Call him at 1380419xxxx．（高分句型二） 根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100 词．（共 15 分） 36．（15 分）初中生活即将结束，你将步入人生下一阶段．在今后的生活中，为了成为一个更好的自己，你 对自己有哪些承诺？请从以下几个方面进行说明，并可适当发挥． 要求： 1．语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范． 2．文中不得出现真实姓名与校名． 3．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数． My junior high school days will be over． Before setting out on my new journey， I want to make promises to myself． ____________． 36．【答案】My junior high school days will be over． Before setting out on my new journey， I want to make promises to myself．（开篇点明题意） As for family，I will cherish the days we stay together．Because they are so important to me．For friends，I hope I can keep the long friendship via communicating with them and opening my heart to them（高分句型一）．For my study，I will try my best to work hard（高分句型二）．For my body，I will do more sports and keep healthy．（从四个方面来说明自己的承诺） I will do as above，and then I will have a happy life．（总结全文） 三十一、营口V. 书面表达（共 20 分） (A) 根据要求完成小作文。（共 5 分） 明天（6 月 30 日）早晨 8: 00 ，七年级学生在校门外集合，去东山植树。请穿上校服 (school uniforms)。 请根据所给条件写一篇简短的通知。30 词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 NOTICE All the students in Grade Seven, ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ June 29, 2019 【答案】 NOTICE All the students in Grade Seven， We will go to East Mountain to plant trees at 8：00 a．m． tomorrow （June，30th）．We will meet at the gate of our school．please don't forget to wear your school uniforms．（交待清楚时间， 地点，注意事项等） June 29，2019 (B) 按要求完成大作文。（共 15 分） 近期某英文报纸就“SnowplowParents（扫雪机式父母）”这一话题展开讨论。“扫雪机式父母”的特 征是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到的一切障碍，解决一切困难，以便他们可以轻松拥有成功的 人生。 请从下表的两种观点中选择一种观点，并结合此观点阐述自己的看法，用英文写一篇短文投稿。 理解 不理解 父母出于对孩子的爱才这么做。 父母控制一切，孩子没有自由。观点 自己的看法 自己的看法 要求：1、词数：60-80 词。 2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点，可适当发挥。3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 【 答 案 】 I really can't understand the snowplow parents ． For these parents ， they control everything．They clean all the obstacles in children's lives．In this case，they think children have a successful life easily （ 高 分 句 型 一 ）． However ， Children have no freedom to do anything．It is the worst thing in their life．（阐述并说明不理解扫雪机式父母的原因） In my opinion，parents shouldn't do all the things for children．Because they also need the experiences in their lives．And these experiences play an important role in a successful life．In this way，they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble（高分句型二）．Meanwhile，they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives．（提出自己的观点并说明原因） 三十二、阜新 VI.书面表达（共 10 分）根据要求完成作文． 29．（10 分）中国四大名著中的《西游记》家喻户晓，华为公司在六月一日儿童节为 我们精心制作了有关 孙悟空的影片．孙悟空为我们带来了欢声笑语，他坚 忍不拔、勇往直前的精神更打动了我们．请你以"The Monkey King"为题 写一篇介绍孙悟空的短文． 提示： 1．孙悟空会变化自己的外形，能使用金箍棒； 2．孙悟空勇敢、聪明、幽默，对伙伴忠诚； 3．孙悟空遇到困难不畏惧，勇往直前，想办法战胜困难； 4．我对孙悟空的故事非常感兴趣，他使我们的童年更加快乐． 要求： 1．使用以上提示内容不少于 2 条，可做发挥； 2．条理清晰，行文连贯，段落分明，书写规范； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；词数：60〜80 词． 参考词汇：turn himself into…，use a magic stick，think of ways to fight bad people The Monkey King________． 【答案】The Monkey King The Monkey King is the hero of a story called Journey to the West．I like him very much， because he can turn himself into 72 changes and protect partners to finish a lot of tasks．【高分句型一】（能力）He is brave， clever and humorous．Although he sometimes make a terrible mess， he isn't afraid of anything and thinks of good ways to solve problems． He never gives up when he is in trouble．【高分句型二】（性格，品质） I like his spirit．He makes my childhood happier．（我的感受） 三十三、辽宁鞍山 书面表达 根据要求完成大作文。 76.好的团队要有团队精神。每位成员都应该积极参与，互相帮助。假如你是小组长，在组织活动时，遇到 个别组员不积极参与的情况，你会怎么办? 请根据表格内容提示，写一篇短文，提出合理化的建议。 要求:(1)不能出现真实的校名，人名等相关信息 (2)根据中文和英文提示，井结合自己生活实际适当发挥 (3)内容完整，意思连贯，符合逻辑，书写整齐 (4)词数:80～100 词，开头已给出，不计人总词数。 Building Better Teamwork The problem some team members are not active in… Useful suggestions ★communicate with； ★set some team rules together; ★discuss the problem with…; ★……Building better teamwork has a good influence on students’ daily study. But_____________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Building better teamwork has a good influence on students’ daily study. But some team members are not active in activities. As a team leader, I will try to improve the situation in the following ways. First, I will communicate with the team members who are not active and find out if they have some difficulties. And then I will try my best to help them out of the difficulties. Second, we will set some team rules together to guarantee the smooth going of the activities. Third, I will discuss the problem with my teacher. My teacher will give me some advice on how to deal with the problems. Finally, I think we can take turns to be the term leader so that everyone will try to make the team better. All in all, I think we’ll pull together to make our team better and better. 【解析】1.题干解读：根据要求这是一篇材料作文，好的团队要有团队精神。每位成员都应该积极参与， 互相帮助。假如你是小组长，在组织活动时，遇到个别组员不积极参与的情况，你会怎么办?文中从两个方 面进行介绍；问题；有用的建议。 2.例文点评：本文中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；3．参考提示，根据自己的实际适当发挥； 要注意时态运用，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不要出现单词拼写错误。 3.高分亮点： 短语：a good influence on；students’ daily study；As a team leader；communicate with；try my best to do sth.。 句型：用到了表示顺序的词：first..second…Third…finally；I will discuss the problem with my teacher. ；My teacher will give me some advice on how to deal with the problems.