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写作规范练(二)
(建议用时：35分钟)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
(2017·烟台诊断)
Li Ming is a friend of mine.I’m glad he changed greatly in the past two years.I clearly remember he was quite fat two years before.He got tired so easy that he couldn’t take exercise, that made him very upset.Later, he realized unless he went on like that, he would end up achieve nothing.So he made up his minds to make a change.He went running every morning and played the basketball every afternoon.Besides, he followed a diet of more vegetables or less meat.Gradually he began to lose weight.He is now an energetic boy in good health.So when faced with problems, we should overcome it with great determination and strong willpower.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
(2017·河北衡水中学大联考)
假定你是李华，几天前外教 Joan 离任回英国，你为她在网上购买了一套陶瓷茶具作为礼物。她来邮件说已收到，很喜欢，不过发现有个杯子破了。请回邮件表达歉意，并请她发照片过来，由你和商家联系补发。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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写作规范练(二)
第一节 短文改错
Li Ming is a friend of mine.I’m glad he changed greatly in the past two years.I clearly
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remember he was quite fat two years .He got tired so that he couldn’t take exercise, that made him very upset.Later, he realized he went on like that, he would end up nothing.So he made up his to make a change.He went running every morning and played basketball every afternoon.Besides, he followed a diet of more vegetables less meat.Gradually he began to lose weight.He is now an energetic boy in good health.So when faced with problems, we should overcome with great determination and strong willpower.
第二节 书面表达
One possible version：
Dear Joan，
I’m glad that you like the gift I bought you online the other day. Meanwhile I’m sorry to know one of the china teacups is broken.But take it easy.The shop owner online has promised to send another one on condition that he is convinced that the cup was broken on the way.So I’d like you to take a photo of the broken cup and send it to me.I’ll show the shop owner what has happened to the cup with the photo as evidence.I am sure he’ll send you another cup of the same color and size.What you have to do now is wait for a few days until the new cup arrives.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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