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第六讲 怎样赢得“大满分”——衔接要“巧”，过渡要“妙”
审题、拟点、联句后，接下来就是润色成文。有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“启、承、转、合”四方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达争创满分的必备条件。
[写作技法指导]
启——创造良好开端
[常用开头词汇]
表示“启”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first, firstly，first of all，at first, in the first place, above all, to begin/start with, today, now, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to 等。
First, I think everyone needs friends and is eager to get friendship.
First of all, we must make full use of every 45minute lesson.
Nowadays/Recently, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic.
In the first place, she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute.
To begin/start with, smoking should be banned in public areas.
Generally speaking, the more you practise, the more skillfully you can write in English.
[常用开头句式]
As the proverb says/As the saying goes，“Time is money.”
As can be seen from the table, nearly everyone owns one mobile phone in China.
With the development of the Internet, computers play an important role in people’s life.
It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.
There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.
It is believed that health is above wealth.
It is well known that an elephant is a very kind and gentle animal.
I’m excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine.
[满分作文选粹]
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting art exhibition. (2017·全国卷Ⅱ)
First of all, I’d like to know when the class will start and how many students there will be in a class. (全国卷Ⅰ)
As is known to all, shoes play an important role in our life, for it can protect our feet from being hurt. (湖南卷)
承——顺势承上启下
[常用顺承词汇]
表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly, also, besides, in addition, soon afterwards, after that, what’s more,
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furthermore，moreover, what’s worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse still, for example, in other words, especially, particularly, obviously, meanwhile, at the same time 等。
Also, do let me know if you need more information.
Secondly，we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.
Besides, developing a good habit of learning can help you improve your learning effectively.
What’s more, good books can help us to develop good characters.
In addition, we shouldn’t neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.
Meanwhile/At the same time, I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy.
[常用顺承句式]
Take Beijing for example, it is one of the oldest cities in the world.
What is more serious is that we don’t cherish wildlife.
As far as I am concerned, they stand for love, friendship and unity.
[满分作文选粹]
In addition, there are famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the spot. (2017·全国卷Ⅱ)
Worse still, I don’t even know much about the word and format of the enclosure. (2016·全国卷Ⅰ)
Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. (2016·江苏卷)
After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. (2016·浙江卷)
As far as I’m concerned, every summer I stay at my uncle’s house in the country for three weeks and enjoy a wonderful life there. (2016·四川卷)
Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
(2015·陕西卷)
Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. (北京卷)
转——巧妙转折过渡
[常用转折过渡词汇]
表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but, yet, however, while, otherwise, or (else), on the contrary, on the other hand, contrary to, in any case, though, although, as, even if/though, despite, in spite of, regardless of 等。
But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents.
However, not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser.
On the other hand, online shopping also has many disadvantages.
On the contrary, the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth.
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Contrary to what I had originally said, the trip turned out to be fun.
[常用转折句式]
Whatever/No matter what you say, he won’t believe you.
Whether you believe it or not, it is true.
As a matter of fact, I didn’t agree with you.
[满分作文选粹]
However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. (2016·浙江卷)
In spite of the largescale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.
(2015·江苏卷)
Otherwise, we’ll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. (重庆卷)
But now, because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. (北京卷)
合——完美结束全文
[常用结尾词汇]
表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally, last but not least, in short ，in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general 等。
All in all, traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.
In conclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.
On the whole, I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.
In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because it’s the mother of success.
To sum up, environmental protection is of great importance, which can make us live more comfortably and healthily.
[常用结尾句式]
I’d appreciate it if you could deliver them as soon as possible.
It is high time that we did something to prevent the environment from being polluted.
Only with combined efforts can we expect our hometown to take on a new look in the near future.
We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that you must have selfconfidence if you want to achieve something.
[满分作文选粹]
In a word, I like everything in spring, especially the feelings bathed in the rain and sunshine.
(2016·四川卷)
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In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if immoral, and cannot be trusted. (2016·江苏卷)
Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards online voting. (2016·江苏卷)
Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting. (2015·安徽卷)
I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration. (2015·陕西卷)
Last but not least, health is also very significant for us students. (江西卷)
So, it’s safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication. (江苏卷)
[应用落实体验]
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(2017·长春实验中学模拟)汽车走进了普通家庭，现在越来越多的人选择开车出行，但这也带来了不少问题。请你用英语为某一学生报社写封信，内容包括：
1．开车出行的好处；
2．开车出行带来的问题；
3．你的观点和建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam，
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
[考生作文]
Dear__Sir/Madam，
With the development of economy, more and more families own cars, which makes the life easier, quicker and more convenient.Besides, it can save them a lot of time. So this is why so many people prefer to drive cars when going out. But just as every coin has two sides, the popularity of driving cars results in many problems. For example, too many cars can cause traffic problems. What’s worse/To make matters worse/Worse still，air pollution is becoming worse and worse.
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Personally/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned，as a useful traffic tool, cars should be used occasionally. If possible，we can take public transport or go out by bike or on foot.
Looking__forward__to__your__reply.
Yours，
Li__Hua
[我来提升] 将文中加黑的衔接词升级
1．Besides→In__addition/What’s__more/Moreover
2．So→Therefore
3．But→However
4．For example→For__instance
[积累练习] 将下列衔接词进行升级
1．in my view→in__my__point__of__view
2．because of→on__account__of/due__to/owing__to/thanks__to
3．because→in__that
4．as soon as→the__moment/immediately/on__(upon)＋动名词
5．if→providing/provided/supposing/suppose/on__condition__that
6．although→despite/in__spite__of
B
(2017·青岛模拟)假如你是某中学的学生李华。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：
1．付出才有回报；
2．收获自信和友谊；
3．感激之情。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you.________________________________________________________________________
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[考生作文]
Looking__back__to__the__National__English__Speaking__Competition__I__took__part__in__several__days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__you. I am very glad that I’ve
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won the first prize in the competition and I am proud of myself. I’ve established friendship and it developed my selfconfidence. I owe my success to my teachers and judges. They have helped me a lot. From the competition I have understood the meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”．I owe my success to my working hard. I have made friends with students from all over our country. I have learned a lot from them. The experience is very important to us. I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience. I expect to achieve more success.
[段落升格作文]
Looking__back__to__the__National__English__Speaking__Competition__I__took__part__in__several__days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__you.
Firstly, I feel really delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”．Besides, I’ve established the friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I’ve learned a lot. More importantly, taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my selfconfidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges, without whose help, I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.
To sum up, I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience.
专题强化训练26 书面表达(一)[学生用书P127(单独成册)]
Passage 1
(2017·河北石家庄高三质量检测)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David作为交换生曾在你家居住。近期你校要举办以“Foreigners Tell Chinese Stories”为主题的英语征文活动。请写一封邮件邀请他参加。要点如下：
1．截稿时间2月1日；
2．字数要求500左右；
3．投稿邮箱chinesestory@126.com。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David，
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Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear__David，
It has been half a year since you left China. How’s everything going?
①Recently, an activity themed “Foreigners Tell Chinese Stories” will be held in our school.②Any foreign student who is enthusiastic about China can take part in it. I think you are suitable for the activity, for you used to live here and learned so much about the country. You can write about your understanding of Chinese culture as well as your personal experiences in China. You are expected to write an article about 500 words in English. I’d appreciate it if you could mail your article to chinesestory@126. com before February 1st.
③I’m looking forward to your participation.
Yours，
Li__Hua
【一句多译】
①Recently, our school will hold an activity whose theme is “Foreigners Tell Chinese Stories”．
②It is suggested that any foreign student who is enthusiastic about China can participate in it.
③I do hope that you will be able to participate./We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your participation.
Passage 2
(2017·河南洛阳高三第一次统考)假定你是李华，你的外教Ms. Jenkins 约你本周六上午教她制作中国结(Chinese knot)，但你因故无法前往，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去，请写一封电子邮件给Ms. Jenkins，说明相关情况。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms. Jenkins，
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Yours，
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Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear__Ms.__Jenkins，
①I would like to offer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.
②The reason is that I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so.But don’t worry.I’ve asked a friend of mine，Han Meimei，to go there instead.She is good at making Chinese knots.She will go to your apartment at 9：00 this Saturday morning.
Please allow me to say sorry again.③I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots.Wish you a good time!
Yours，
Li__Hua
【一句多译】
①Sorry not to be able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday./ It’s a pity that I am not able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.
②Because I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so./ Why I can’t come is that I have caught a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should stay in bed for one week or so.
③With the help of Han Meimei，there’s no doubt that you can learn how to make Chinese knots.
Passage 3
(2017·湖北八校高三第一次联考)假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件，说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race)，希望你帮助他预订好旅馆，并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower，东湖East Lake)。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：
1．回复他的要求：
2．询问他到达的具体时间，待多久，以便你做具体安排。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mark，
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________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear__Mark，
I’m very glad to have received your letter, saying that you would take part in the winter marathon race to be held in Wuhan on December 31.
①It is my pleasure to arrange for your accommodation and show you around some of the famous scenic spots here after the race. ②I’ll do my best to satisfy your need and guarantee you a pleasant journey. Just tell me the exact time of your arrival and how long you will stay in your next letter, so that I can pick you up at the airport and make a proper arrangement. By the way, wish you good luck in the marathon race!
Looking forward to your early reply and your arrival.
Yours，
Li__Hua
【一句多译】
①I’d be very delighted to arrange for your accommodation and show you around some places of interest here after the race.
②I’ll do what I can to meet your need and make sure that you have a pleasant journey./I’ll do everything I can to satisfy your need and provide you with a pleasant journey.
Passage 4
(2017·云南高三调研)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你家三世同堂，对这种生活方式很不理解。你就此给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括：
1．陪伴；
2．照顾；
3．其他。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
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________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear__Peter，
How are you getting along these days？It is normal that you can not understand why my grandparents are living with us. Here is something about it.
As we all know, old people always feel lonely, so do my grandparents.Besides，when my parents are busy with their work, my grandparents will keep me company.Most importantly，they are in poor health，so they need looking after. Only in this way can we take good care of each other.Actually，in China generations are willing to live together.Caring for the old is considered as a virtue in Chinese culture.
How about your culture of supporting your elders？I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li__Hua
Passage 5
(2017·湖南部分重点中学考前演练)假定你是李华，即将去美国参加一个中美文化夏令营活动。请你根据以下内容要点给你的美国朋友Mike写一封信，告知他你的美国之行。
1．此行的目的；
2．活动的内容；
3．你的期望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
I’m writing to tell you something about my trip to America.________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
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Dear Mike，
I’m writing to tell you something about my trip to America.This summer I am to attend an English summer camp for SinoU.S. cultural exchanges，which I have long been dreaming about.
This program is aimed at promoting the understanding of the people and culture between the two countries.During the twoweek English summer camp，we will visit some famous American universities，experience American culture and customs，and tour places of interest in the U．S.Furthermore，we will also be offered a platform to practice our spoken English in an authentic language environment.
I am sure that this program will help me better understand the cultural difference.Meanwhile，I can introduce my country to American students through this program，which will definitely be a great success.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li__Hua
专题强化训练27 书面表达(二)[学生用书P129(单独成册)]
Passage 1
(2017·大连双基测试)假定你是李华，请给正在你校学习的英国交换生Bob写封邮件，通知他周末有义工活动，询问他是否参加。主要内容包括：
1．主题：捡垃圾；
2．时间和地点；
3．注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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One possible version：
Dear Bob，
As an exchange student，how are you getting along with your classmates？Here, I’m emailing you to invite you to a social practice this weekend.
①On Sunday，we’re scheduled to take part in some voluntary work，in which we’ll help
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clean the local nursing home.Our main task is to pick up litter for them.②Tiring as it may be, it is well worth trying because you can communicate with local people in Chinese.
③If you’d like to join us, please inform me before Friday and I can make some arrangements for you. Besides, do remember to wear a pair of gloves to protect your hands if you come!
Looking forward to your participation!
Yours，
Li Hua
【一句多译】
①We are to take part in some voluntary work where the nursing home will be cleaned on Sunday.
②Though tired, you may feel it is worthwhile to have a try because it gives you a good opportunity to practice Chinese with local people.
③Would you like to join us？If you’d like to，please call me before Friday and I can get things prepared in advance.
Passage 2
(2017·银川4月检测)假定你是高三学生李华。三月初你在网上买了一双鞋，打算送给妈妈作为“三八”妇女节的礼物。但是，收到货后发现存在若干问题。请你就此给消费者协会写一封投诉信。要点如下：
1．介绍购物情况；
2．反映存在问题；
3．提出解决方案。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am one of your customers.________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am one of your customers.I ordered a pair of shoes for my mum as a gift for Women’s Day.To my disappointment，there are the following problems.
①To begin with, it didn’t arrive on schedule，which missed the Women’s Day. Besides ，not only is it the wrong size but it is also of wrong color.What bothers me most is the quality of the shoes.They are not made of genuine leather，which give off a bad smell. ②I am not satisfied to have received such poor service，and I am qualified to ask you to handle it. I hope you can either return my money or deliver a new pair to me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li__Hua__
【一句多译】
①To start with，not arriving on schedule，it missed the Women’s Day./ First of all, as it didn’t arrive on schedule，it missed the Women’s Day.
②Not satisfied to have received such poor service，I am qualified to ask you to handle it.
Passage 3
(2017·东北三校二模)假如你是高三学生李华，你的好朋友Nancy 在你校的友好学校美国圣西诺高中读十二年级。毕业在即，她来信问你的梦想，请给她写封回信。主要内容包括：
1．对梦想的理解；
2．你的人生梦想；
3．如何实现你的梦想。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy，
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Yours，
Li Hua
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One possible version：
Dear__Nancy，
I am writing to share my dream with you.
Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory，which inspires me to recall my dream—to become a doctor，saving lives and shouldering a burden of lowexpense medical treatment for distant poor villagers.
Being a motivation and goal, dreams make us determined，diligent and devoted as well as making life more meaningful.However，it is quite plain that obstacles cast a fierce eye on me alongside.Therefore，giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam is my first challenge I am to face consciously.Also, I am fully convinced that sparing no efforts to offer toil and sweat firmly and consistently will contribute a lot.
I am in curiosity about yours and reply to me soon，please.
Yours，
Li__Hua__
Passage 4
(2017·安徽合肥高三第一次教学质量检测)假如你是李华，来自阳光中学，你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。请你给举办学校联系人Mr.Williams写一封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：
1．接受邀请，表示感谢；
2．询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；
3．提出相关建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Williams，
I am Li Hua, a student from Sunshine Middle School.
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Thank you for all your help and look forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
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Dear__Mr.Williams，
I__am__Li__Hua，a__student__from__Sunshine__Middle__School. We are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly table tennis match, which will no doubt strengthen our friendship. I am writing to know more about the arrangements.
Since it is the first time for us to go to Australia, we’d like to know the details about the accommodations so that we can make some preparations in advance.We prefer to live in host families to experience local culture. Besides, is it possible for you to pick us up at the airport after our arrival? Also, I would appreciate it if we could work out a proper schedule for both sides.
Thank__you__for__all__your__help__and__look__forward__to__your__reply.
Yours，
Li__Hua
Passage 5
(2017·烟台诊断)假如你是李华，你校英国交换生Tom 在邮件中说他被牛津大学(Oxford University)录取了，邀请你本周六晚参加庆祝聚会，但你那天要参加汉语诗词(poetry)比赛，不能参加聚会。请用英语给他回复邮件。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
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Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear__Tom，
Congratulations on your being admitted to Oxford University!
I’m grateful and honored to be invited to your celebration party to be held this Saturday evening.However，much to my regret，I have to decline your kind invitation. As you know, a Chinese Poetry Competition is being held in our school and I have successfully entered the final round competition，which happens to be scheduled on this Saturday and will not end until late into the evening.It’s a great pity that I can’t make it to your party.But I’ve prepared a gift for you and hopefully you will like it.
May your party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!
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Yours，
Li__Hua
专题强化训练28 书面表达(三)[学生用书P131(单独成册)]
Passage 1
(2017·湖南长郡中学模拟)假如你是李华，在丹麦访问学习的一周里你住在Anne家里。在即将回国之际，请你给她写一封感谢信。要点如下：
1．简述你的丹麦之行；
2．感谢她为你所做的一切；
3．向她发出邀请。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：丹麦 Denmark
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One possible version：
Dear Anne,
I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in Denmark, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.
During the week, the comfortable room, delicious meals and especially your friendly family all made me feel at home. Moreover, guided by you I had a chance to visit some places of interest and be exposed to such a unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I will have a better understanding of your country and culture.
Thanks again for your kind help and I am sincerely looking forward to showing you around in China in the near future. All the best wishes to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(2017·重庆一模)假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter从网上知道了“I Sing China”的活动，这一活动旨在推广汉语、传播中国文化，他写信告诉你他很想参加这一活动，请你根据要点给他写一封回信。
要点：1.推荐歌曲名称及内容；
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2．推荐理由；
3．答应提供必要帮助。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear__Peter,__
Glad__to__know__you__want__to__learn__to__sing__a__Chinese__song. I will be very glad to recommend What a Beautiful Jasmine to you. This is a famous Chinese folk song, which describes a girl who loves jasmine. Through the song we can know a beautiful girl who loves life and expects love.
The music is very sweet, and the words are beautiful. When you sing the song you can feel the true love between a young man and a woman. This song is a good symbol of Chinese culture.
I will post you the video of the song. If you like it, I will help you to pronounce the Chinese words. Anyway, I would like to offer you any help.
Best__wishes!
Yours__sincerely，
Li__Hua
Passage 3
(2017·山东淄博一模)假定你是李华，你的语文老师Mr. Li 受邀于三月初去英国一所学校进行交流。他将做关于中国传统文化的报告，并与英国学生互动(interact)。他请你用英语给对方负责人Ms. Jenkins写一封邮件，希望提前安排好。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
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Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear__Ms.__Jenkins,__
On behalf of my Chinese teacher Mr. Li, I’m writing to inform you that he will be invited to visit your school in early March. I’m more than delighted to tell you what he has arranged.
As a learned scholar, Mr.Li will deliver a speech about traditional Chinese culture, talking about the history of Chinese characters, paintings and Tang poetry. After that, he will interact with some students from England in your school hall, which will surely promote the culture communication between two schools.
How do you like the plan? I sincerely hope that you could make arrangements in advance.
Yours__faithfully，
Li__Hua
Passage 4
(2017·临沂一模)假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Michael正在一家孔子学院学习汉语和中国文化，知道中国人很重视家风传承。他在给你的电子邮件中想了解你家的家风以及家风对你的影响。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：家风 family spirits
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to know that you are learning Chinese language and culture.________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear__Michael,__
I’m__glad__to__know__that__you__are__learning__Chinese__language__and__culture. In
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your email you said that you wanted to know something about my family spirits. Well, there are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family. My parents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty, bravery, perseverance and diligence and they have set good examples for me and my brother.
My family spirits have a profound influence on me.I’m always friendly to others and am always ready to help others. I always cheer up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties. Owing great thanks to those good qualities, I have made great achievements in my study and life.Yours，
Li__Hua
Passage 5
(2017·东北三省四市模拟)假如你是李华，得知某英文报社要评选“The Most Qualified Student”，请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下：
1．介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息；
2．说明推荐理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
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Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear__Editor，
I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that you are hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student. ①It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard, but also behaves well. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin.②Last but not least, he is warmhearted and willing to help others in need.
Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours__sincerely，
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Li__Hua
【一句多译】
①I would be grateful if you consider my recommendation of my best friend, Lin Yang. /In my opinion, my best friend, Lin Yang, should be chosen to be The Most Qualified Student.
②Most importantly, he is always ready to help others./The most qualified points of him are warmheartedness and the readiness to meet others’ need.
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