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第三讲 怎样跳出“大众分”——词汇要“美”，妙语要“多”
在高考阅卷时，一份作文往往在1分钟内就被判定生死。大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳，如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！
[写作技法指导]
高考英语书面表达评分标准对第五档的要求有这样一段话：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。由此可以看出，高考英语书面表达要求考生尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇。
何为较高级词汇？众所周知，词汇本来并没有“高低贵贱”之分，但某个词一旦得到使用，放在了具体语境中，使用得极为得当，体现了该词的美妙价值，为句子增色，让文章添彩，它就是较高级词汇；相反，使用时体现的价值平平，没有创意，它就是较低级词汇。
巧用4招，实现由低级向高级的转化
1.“语”众不同，避免人云亦云
写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
①If you want to apply for membership，you are asked to fill in the application form and send an email to pingpong 123.com.
→If you want to apply for membership you are required to fill in the application form and send an email to pingpong 123.com (2017·全国卷Ⅲ)
②The application time is from October 5 to October 10，2017.
→The application time is scheduled for October 5－10，2017. (2017·全国卷Ⅲ)
③My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them.
→My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them. (2016·全国卷Ⅰ)
④So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.
→So I have no choice but to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter. (2016·全国卷Ⅰ)
⑤I should be free any time after school next week.
→I should be available any time after school next week. (2016·全国卷Ⅲ)
⑥I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is so interesting as I have read.
→I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. (2015·安徽卷)
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⑦Successfully，I have helped her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
→Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
2.更新换代，避免重复
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，以此彰显你驾驭语言的能力。
①Apart from regular training，our team will join in a variety of activities, such as joining in some national competitions on behalf of our school.
→Apart from regular training, our team will join in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions on behalf of our school. (2017·全国卷Ⅲ)
②What’s more, in order to know much about Chinese culture, it is important for you to know the content, Tang Poetry.
→What’s more, in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture, it is of great importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang Poetry. (2017·全国卷Ⅰ)
③We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.
→We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. (2015·浙江卷)
3.单词与短语巧妙互用
一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。
①Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, causing a slower growth.
→As a consequence, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas，leading to a slower growth. (2017·江苏卷)
②I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I’d like you to help me.
→I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I’d like you to do me a favor. (2016·全国卷Ⅰ)
③I think everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.
→As far as I’m concerned，everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other. (2016·天津卷)
④We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future.
→We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future. (2015·福建卷)
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⑤I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions.
→I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into account. (浙江卷)
4．尽量用高级阶段学到的词代替低级阶段学到的词
①Firstly，what I want to stress is that we are about to start our next lesson in classroom 8 of the Teaching Building at 10 am next Friday.
→To start with, what I intend to stress is that we are about to start our next lesson in classroom 8 of the Teaching Building at 10 am next Friday. (2017·全国卷Ⅰ)
②This summer I want to do a parttime job in a foreign company，through which I would like to broaden my horizons，get some working experience and meet more new friends.
→This summer I intend to take up a parttime job in a foreign company，through which I would like to broaden my horizons，gain some working experience and meet more new friends.
(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)
③In my opinion，Internet voting has begun to show its negative effects on people and society.
→In my opinion，Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. (2016·江苏卷)
④What’s worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think it important to obey traffic rules.
→What’s worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules. (2015·江苏卷)
[应用落实体验]
A
(2017·银川质检)假定你是一名高三学生，名叫李华。在母亲节来临之际，请你用英文给你的妈妈写一封信表示感恩，并借此机会和妈妈说说知心话，具体内容应包括：
1.表示感恩；
2．你的现状(生活、学习情况)：
(1)你的高考奋斗目标；
(2)你对自己的信心。
参考词汇：高考the College Entrance Examination
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。
Dear Mom，
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Mum, happy Mother’s Day! I love you.
Yours lovely，
Li Hua
[考生作文]
Dear__Mom，
Mother’s Day is coming.I’m writing to you to thank you for bringing me up and showing me unselfish help，care and love.I’ll tell you something about my present life.
As you know，it will be about one month before I take the College Entrance Examination，which makes my life a little busy and tiring.Luckily， my hard work is paying off.I have been making great progress in my studies，especially in English.Perhaps there is still a lot for me to do before I realize my dream going to Peking University.I firmly believe I can succeed.
Please don’t worry about me.I’ll never let you feel disappointed.
Mum，happy__Mother’s__Day！I__love__you.
Yours__lovely，
Li__Hua
[我来提升] 将文中加黑词汇升级
1．coming→approaching/around__the__corner
2．thank you→give__my__gratitude__to__you
3．and→as__well__as
4．Luckily→Fortunately
5．succeed→make__it
6．worry about→be__anxious__about
7．let you feel disappointed→let__you__down
[积累练习] 将下列短语进行升级
1．think of→come__up__with__
2．stand up→get__to__one’s__feet____
3．be used to→be__accustomed__to__
4．be sure to→be__bound__to____
5．be bored with→be__fed__up__with____
6．be busy in (with)→be__occupied__in__(with)/be__buried__in/be__engaged__in__
7．try/do one’s best to do sth.→spare__no__effort__to__do__sth.
8．ask sb. for help→turn__to__sb.for__help____
9．a lot of→a__large__quantity/amount__of/endless____
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10．all kinds of→a__wide__range__of
B
(2017·太原五中模拟)假设你是李红，你的一位美国笔友Robert写Email问及你高考后暑假的安排。请根据以下要点，写一封Email回复他。
1.学开车；
2．参加英语培训课程；
3.游览各地名胜。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Robert，
How time flies！________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hong
[考生作文]
Dear__Robert，
How__time__flies！My College Entrance Examination is coming soon，which will announce the end of this stressful life.Therefore，I want to have a colorful and meaningful summer vacation.
First，I will learn how to drive to get a driving license，because I like driving very much.Second，I will take some English courses to improve my spoken English.After that，I will visit some tourist attractions throughout China to widen my horizon.Surely，I will take some photos to send to you via the Internet.Finally，I will have a good rest and enjoy my hobbies.
This is the plan for my vacation.I am eagerly looking forward to it.
Yours，
Li__Hong
[我来提升] 将文中加黑词汇升级
1．coming soon→approaching/around__the__corner____
2．want→intend
3．First→To__begin__with/To__start__with__
4．like→am__fond__of
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5．Second→In__addition/What’s__more__
6．visit→pay__a__visit__to
7．Finally→At__last/Eventually
[积累练习] 将下列动词进行升级
1．meet→come__across____
2．face→be__faced__with____
3．bear→put__up__with__
4．solve→deal__with/cope__with____
5．decide→make__up__one’s__mind____
6．consider→take...into__account/consideration__
7．understand→make__sense__of/figure__out
8．use→employ/make__use__of/take__advantage__of
9．apologize→make__an__apology____
10．happen→occur/come__about
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