第六讲
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提纲作文
1.
写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,认清题目和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、内容以及文体。
2.
每一个提纲可以作为文章的一个段落层次,段落的展开围绕提纲的中心和内容,不能偏离,也不能任意增减。
3.
提纲只是对文章的提示和概括,不是主题句。还需要根据提纲的性质,写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子,使之成为主题句,然后围绕主题句进行扩展。
4.
收集材料支持主题句。材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是,所选材料要与文章的主题相符,即要
“
扣题
”
,也要具有典型性,能充分说明问题。在有多个例证的段落中,还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。
(2017·
全国卷
Ⅰ
)
假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友
Leslie
学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
1.
时间和地点;
2.
内容:学习唐诗;
3.
课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意
:
1.
词数
100
左右;
2.
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[
材料分析
]
随着时代的发展,电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎,所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事,这种形式的写作贴近学生生活,使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意:
1.
要点要齐全:
(1)
时间和地点;
(2)
内容:学习唐诗;
(3)
课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
2.
时态:以一般现在时为主;
3.
人称:第二人称为主;
4.
注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。
5.
适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【参考范文】
Dear Leslie
,
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese
culture.Now
I’ll tell you the next learning
programme.On
July 20
,
we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture
Hall.As
a foreign learner
,
it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of
them.Therefore
,
before class
,
you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on
time.You
cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours
,
Li
Hua
(2018·
石家庄高三仿真
)
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友
Peter
对中国春联
(Spring Festival couplets)
产生了浓厚兴趣,来信向你了解中国的春联文化。请你用英语写一封回信,为他介绍春联的用途、内容和寓意等。
注意:
1.
词数
100
左右;
2.
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter
,
I’m glad to know you have interest in Spring Festival
couplets.Now
,
let me introduce some details of them to you.
As a symbol of Chinese traditional culture
,
Spring Festival couplets are always stuck on the door or the wall of a
house.They
are necessities for Chinese people to celebrate the Spring
Festival.Written
with a writing brush on red paper
,
Spring Festival couplets use some positive words showing wishes for love
,
health
,
success
,
wealth
,
happiness and so
on.They
always have a theme
,
and they represent better life or successful future
,
and some of them include wishes and
expectations.Of
course
,
the topic of singing the praises of our motherland is another good choice.
Hope you find my introduction useful.
Yours
,
Li
Hua